The Lord of Light in the Paradise of Reincarnation

False Shennong After reading Chapter 5 of the first volume, let me talk about my personal shortcomings 1. The protagonist's professional name is completely inconsistent with his ability performance. The name is Lord of Light, but the ability to crush the same level is not reflected (you can't make the same level into a cutie, what do you call a Dominator?) The name is awkward and the performance is average. 2. As the Lord of Light, you can't be called the Lord if you don't develop any light skills (to be honest, if you spend half of your time training in melee combat, using blinding or flashing lights will improve more than your melee training). You can develop a laser knife enchantment and use it until the finale (hit 8 00w Bounty Pirates, what's the improvement in your light? I don't see it. In terms of speed, from pulling out the gun from the opposite side to holding the gun in front of you, it doesn't improve much (and the penetration characteristics you mentioned earlier are not reflected here). It can only be said that it is a forced approach. 3. As for the revolutionary army's program of action, it's okay for the author not to mention it. If you mention it, you won't do it, but the reasons given cannot convince me as a reader. The summary is that if you have the top talent in the energy system and don't develop it properly and insist on taking the technical system, the plot will not be very exciting.

Why are you, the Lord of Light, so dark?

How should I put it, I feel that the content of this book does not have the sense of surprise that the introduction brought me. I can't say that it's selling dog meat on a sheep's head. I can only say that after seeing the picture of the dishes, I thought the delicacy was 100, but it turned out to be only 20. This number is just a metaphor and does not represent anything else. Let me talk about the places that I think are not very good. The first one is the issue of selecting the first world talent, Calabash Baby. I think this subject matter is good. When I saw this subject matter, I felt that the author might have some wild ideas and try something new. For example, starting from the point of Qi Wa, or by chance encountering other Calabash Wags when they are about to invade the Snake Cave, and then providing strategies and certain auxiliary combat support to kill the snake demon. Even after seeing the protagonist's abilities, I thought about whether the protagonist would use his abilities to disguise himself as a little demon, and then really train the calabash doll into an elixir, grab the elixir and eat it at the most critical moment, and then kill the snake demon. In the end, what the author gave me was to let the pangolin dig holes at several supporting points in the cave, then put light element bombs on them, use Ruyi to detonate the cave, and smash or blow up the snake monster to death. To be honest, at first I didn't understand how the protagonist could use 7 points of intelligence to drive equipment that requires no less than 20 points of intelligence limit. Even if I put aside some of Calabash's worldview and many extensions of Calabash's imagination, and only look at the world of a children's film, I feel that this method of death is too outrageous. The whole technique and process gave me the feeling that the protagonist might not be able to kill the snake demon, but the author said no, the snake demon was going to die, and then the snake demon died. Then the second world is pirates. Let's not talk about whether Sea of ​​Death is poorly written. The fact that there are so many fans writing about these themes shows that these themes have an audience. And having an audience means that everyone knows the general plot of these themes. The author only needs to find an entry point and start killing. As a result, you gave me an original idea to play in the fan world. This book is a Paradise fanfic, not a Pirates fanfic. To be honest, I was fascinated by the entry point of Pirates and the subsequent task of finding the mole. I have only talked about the issue of material selection above, and then I want to talk about the issue of writing rhythm and content. First of all, for those who know how to read reincarnation fanfiction, not to mention too many, 80% have at least read the book Paradise, right? This means that everyone has a general understanding of the framework of Paradise. I won't say whether it is Paradise-flavored or not. Some repetitive introductions and descriptions are unnecessary in my opinion, and the content in Paradise is too long. Then there is the content. Too many complaints and some unimportant descriptions are mixed together to form long paragraphs of writing, making people unable to grasp the key points you want to express. These long paragraphs of text not only increase the number of words, but also slow down the initial pace. There is no need to introduce and describe the paradise that is too homogeneous with the original work. It can be passed over in one stroke. There is also content about the present world. If the protagonist does not have too many causes and effects in the present world, there is really no need to write too much. It can be over in one or two paragraphs. As for what kind of improvement, either that specific task is basically impossible, or it is for reincarnation to relax. Having read the whole book so far, I just feel that the author is a new writer who is interested in the theme of reincarnation paradise but does not know enough about it. If you want to continue, I really recommend reading other reincarnation fan writing methods. However, the author didn't even write the chapter names later, which felt like he was giving up on himself. The above are my personal thoughts after reading this book. They are only provided for reference and will not be replied to.

This cover has a beauty that echoes the title of the book

Brothers, I see some people are discussing whether to bring a follower. I didn't plan to write about it at first, but I will write about it later if many people want to read it. 1. I would like to ask brothers here if they have any recommendations for a good place to have a younger brother? There are also younger types that can also be sent out together. 2. Another question is whether to set up a growth equipment. It must not be an attack type. The finger-tiger glove and the like look low at first glance. It's not as satisfying as punching to the flesh. So it must be from other positions, probably from these other positions, Flash Shoes, Light Armor, Holy Light Clothes, Crown of Light, Light Power (angel ring), and Aurora Wings. There are also effects. If you are interested, you can also give us your opinions. But don't worry, brothers, these will definitely take a long time to complete, at least after completing the progress of this world. You can give your comments slowly and the author will consider them for reference.

Show the brothers something outrageous

Charm 1 point. Normally at 5 o'clock, the ugly man travels through time and enters the paradise?

It's not that you are calling the Lord of Light by stretching your hips like this. People look at you as if you are not responding to the horse's mouth. If you are so low now, you should first call you Fast Man, and then when you increase your strength, you can call you the Lord of Light.

Recently, many Samsara Paradise fandoms have not updated Mosquito, forcing readers to write novels because they can't stand it. 😄😄

In this Samsara Paradise, the normal missions are Sasha, right? The Revolutionary Army in One Piece is okay, but it's really weird to receive the mission to transform Lu Mingfei in the Dragon Clan.

Two are updated every day, each with about 2,500 words. There are more than seventy chapters written in a pirate world. It's hard for you to make people want to pursue you.

My phone is stuck, and the cover of Lord of Light is showing a black screen.

Does the author plan to write 100 chapters in a dungeon world?

Your introduction directly persuaded me to quit. You can change it.

The copy looks like an anime fanfic, it doesn't have the flavor of Samsara Paradise.

Is this book without a heroine or a single heroine or a harem? I was disgusted by the harem and asked what I was reading.

Just by looking at the name, I thought it was some kind of super long-range magician, but it turns out it's for melee combat. Why not just use a sword or something like that?

How to say it? I only read the first chapter, and then flipped through the table of contents. Some of them don't even have titles, which is very imprecise. Let's not talk about the question of whether there is a title or not, let's talk about the first world first. The first world is Calabash Baby, which is very novel, but after all, it is a children's educational program. It is definitely unrealistic to watch a battle of wits and courage. After he found the old man, he directly joined the Calabash camp, so I won't talk about it anymore. The key is that he takes a side mission and sneaks into the snake cave. He just walks in and takes Yu Ruyi and then takes the mission props and he is done. Is his skill so buggy? Completely invisible? When you encounter someone with a higher level than yourself, shouldn't your opponent notice something? The power of the unborn baby is 15, and the power of the born baby is 30. As a villain, the snake spirit is not strong in strength, but his intelligence is at least 25. Three times the intelligence difference, how can you be in front of the other party? I am thinking that after you get the props, you will be discovered, and then be attacked by the snake spirit with magic weapons. You use the light element to control Zhou Xuan. Finally, the light element transformed Yu Ruyi and used Yu Ruyi to escape. As a result, he just left. After returning to the grandfather's house, there was no more unnecessary plot. I just handed over the mission props to the grandfather, and then took the four children, two children and the eldest child to kill the snake spirit in seconds. Can this kind of mission have a difficulty level of eight? The paradise will not give you any loopholes. What difficulty he gives you means how dangerous it is to you. It does not mean that you have the ability to fly. He gives you a task of surviving on the sea for 20 minutes. If you have the ability to dive, I will give you a task of surviving on the bottom of the sea for three days. In turn, you are asked to kill the Phoenix and steal the Dragon Palace Orb. Those who cannot complete the task will be eliminated, and those who survive will become lunatics. Self-created skills, I won't go into details about this, it's an innate ability, affinity to the light element. But is it too outrageous for you to directly modify the equipment? I'll skip this too and won't say much more. The thing I can't accept is that your resume says Big Big Wolf and Bald Qiang. When I saw these two names, I was a little excited. I thought that even if the content was not good, I would still read it. The first one is Calabash Baby, which is nothing. Anyway, the second and third worlds mentioned on the resume must be Big Big Wolf and Bald Qiang. What the hell is it that my resume was so messed up at the beginning? It's over 1 million words, and you haven't even written about two worlds. Then why do you put up your entire resume? Let those who like watching Dragon Clan be dismissive, and let those who like Big Gray Wolf's bald head be disappointed?

Some people who watched it asked why the protagonist didn't take the route of Master + Assassin, and why he had to engage in close combat. I would like to ask the author🙂

Are you playing with girls? It doesn't matter whether there is a female protagonist or not, but I just want to know if she is a spiritual eunuch?

After looking at the catalog, it's a bit 🐂! Even after scrolling to 300+, I am still at level one. The most outrageous thing is that when I enter Hokage later, I can still kill people indiscriminately🐂! Isn't this an advanced mission soon?

Chapter 35 of H City, after Brother Corpse returns to the world, his combat power is directly changed, and the damage is directly reduced to zero. It is not like this that the combat power is afraid of collapse. Damn, if you want to limit the development of the protagonist, then shorten the time in the derivative world. The schedule is full, and it feels like it stained my eyes. I can't read it and decisively gave up the book.

I'm talking about borrowing Lu Fang's money to attract people to fight in the arena. Is it the second level that I haven't fought yet?

Can't you open your world treasure chest? If you don't have the world key, go get it. I didn't see whether the three treasure chests were opened or not.

To be honest, I feel that the author's writing is very rough and special. The first world has more than 100 chapters. Will it be an infinite stream?