The First Sword of Rebirth Kills the Person You Want First

There are many parts of the plot that are repeated over and over again, which is really stupid. Just the past life entanglement with Li Yuqing has been told so many times that I am tired of watching it. I don't know if the author of the outline and details has any intention, and the foreshadowing techniques need to be improved. There is a conflict between the character's personality and behavioral logic, especially Su Rou. The daily descriptions are pretty good, but sometimes too wordy.

I really don't understand. Those who criticize the male protagonist are all talented and talented women. The male protagonist gave up his promising future and went to Hangzhou for Li Yuqing. He came to an unfamiliar urban area with a clean clothes and spent a few years buying a car and taking out a loan to buy a house. The comment section said that the male protagonist is poor and has no ability. Can you weigh your ability? Or is it that the rich second generation in the comment section think that BYD is not a car and a house of more than 70 square meters is not worthy of being called a house. And the place where he studied at university was in the Magic City area. He could have worked as an intern in a large factory after graduation. His future was bright, but he gave up this opportunity for Li Yuqing. Isn't this courage? Isn't this love? What he got in the end was breaking up, blacklisting, and finally owing millions in loans. If he had chosen life in the first place, he would have ended up like this. After rebirth, the male protagonist did not retaliate against Li Yuqing, but chose to break up peacefully. The reason was simple and clear to the other party. It was Li Yuqing who refused to let go. Although Li Yuqing loved the male protagonist, the male protagonist did not dare to insist on his own life. From what Li Yuqing said, the male protagonist's heart had been broken.

You have written 650,000 words, how did you do it? You have to be cool but not cool, you have to be logical but not logical, you have to behead the person you like but still can't be clean, and you have to torture a lot but it's just for the sake of being tortured because of hypocrisy. You can't write well in daily life, you can't write well in romance, but you still can't write well in cool articles. The writing is not good, and the final result is not good. I actually know that it was not good enough in the early stage, but in the later stage, it is bloody, and it is very forceful, which cannot attract new readers. It also disgusts the readers who have subscribed for a long time. It really sucks!

Spending more than 20 subscriptions on your book is just like feeding the dog. Take a look for yourself to see what you wrote. What about the reborn people? These reborn people are not as good as the security guard downstairs in my house. Those who subscribe to your book are too masochistic! Sha🐶Protagonist

I remember before it was released, the author said that his wife's monthly salary was 8,000, and she disliked his monthly salary of 3,000. Now when I look at this FW male protagonist, I can only say that the inspiration comes from life! What the male protagonist has always said about rising up is just like the pie the author drew for his wife!

In order to avoid Li Yuqing, the male protagonist made a girlfriend, Liu Ruhui. However, Liu Ruhui already had a fiancé, and both Li Yuqing and Su Rou knew that Liu Ruhui had a fiancé. They originally wanted to stop the male protagonist from talking to Liu Ruhui, but when they tried to stop them, they refused to tell her about her fiancé. The male protagonist was not very happy at first. She liked Liu Ruhui and didn't even plan to get married. She was talking to Liu Ruhui just to avoid Li Yuqing. If she knew in advance that Liu Ruhui had a fiancé, she would not talk to her. But in the end, she insisted on not letting the male protagonist know. After talking to Liu Ruhui in the end, the fiancé directly greeted the male protagonist's parents, but what about the male protagonist? I'm addicted to food. I come from a rural background and go against my fiancé's big family. I could have relied on my past life memories to grow up, but I just want to be a prostitute. Now I'm being abused all the time, so be careful!

Li Yuqing really loves the protagonist. The protagonist really had no money in his previous life. Is all this Li Yuqing's problem? The protagonist himself also has problems. Now that he is reborn and has a way to make money, there is no need to be so crazy. Anyway, it looks weird.

Let's talk about the character Su Rou. I hope the author won't write it like in other novels, where she gets together with the protagonist for money without any distinction. I think Su Rou said she wanted a 10 million betrothal gift because she just wanted to not be harassed while studying. She just wanted to change her destiny through studying. I think we can learn from the artistic conception of the lyrics of "Hu Guangsheng" to express Su Rou's fate.

It was obvious that he had dug so many holes for Li Yuqing. . . Then he wrote another heroine, but the author had no intention at all.

Be nice to Su Rou! She really made me cry to death 🥺

From the time they fell in love to the time they got married, a poor boy and a rich girl were humiliated, made things difficult, and looked down upon by their mother-in-law's family, which made them somewhat mentally unhealthy. For example, my previous boss. When I was an ordinary civil servant in the tax bureau, I was despised and made things difficult by the boss's parents. Now that things have changed, his own wealth has surpassed that of his mother-in-law and his family for many years. He is still worried about this. I say I don't mind, but actually I do. He often shares with me how he now makes it difficult for me to go back and disses him🙂 The bad marriage after free love led to complete disappointment in marriage. It is not uncommon for him to end up as a prodigal who only needs his kidneys but not his heart. A few of my classmates are like this (both male and female). Not to mention the death of a loved one, but there is nothing I can do about it, something that can drastically change my outlook! So I can understand the abstract behavior of the male protagonist after his rebirth. After all, I have a deep understanding of how twisted and abstract the actual behavior of people who have actually encountered these things is... I treat this guy as a guy with abnormal brains. Although such a protagonist is very unpleasant, from an abnormal point of view, it is normal. But. The author has been rereading the hero's previous life. This is no different from brainwashing PUA, they are all trying to create an ideological stamp. Justify the protagonist's actions. This makes people feel very pretentious, with a feeling of being both responsible and established. It gives people a very bad feeling. It's very watery! 😅😅😅 Have we subscribed to new chapters? As ordered! Shall we read the new plot? As read! Author, you must write like this. I can only think that this is your novelized autobiographical memoir to vent your anger🤔🤔

The more the protagonist becomes more photorealistic, the more he looks like a scumbag. The key is that he is a bit of a scumbag.

This is the most useless and frustrating story about a reborn male protagonist that I have ever read. It doesn't matter if you don't think of a way to make money, it doesn't matter if you flirt with girls every day, it doesn't matter if you give people trouble all day long; it doesn't matter if the protagonist speculates in stocks and borrows the capital from the heroine, but if you speculate in a stock, you can earn dozens of chapters! If you don't enjoy reading a book, are you good enough?

Now I have read more than a hundred chapters, and the most poisonous thing I feel is always putting all the money in the stock market, and arranging the ups and downs of the stock market. In the end, I had hundreds of thousands in my name, but only dozens of dollars in my pocket, and then I dragged Su Rou to starve and freeze together.

I can tolerate it when it's written about a scumbag, but this is a piece of trash and slipped away.

The male protagonist borrows money from others, and the first thing he does when he is paid is stock trading, leaving a little money for his own food, and not thinking about paying it back. He is extremely selfish. Author, are you the same? My recommendation vote was in vain, but luckily I didn't have a monthly ticket.

The writing is very good, but the protagonist is too imbecile in making money, and the structure is too small. If you want him to develop faster, wouldn't it be better if you write more daily limit boards? A stock with a price of 9 times is afraid of being sold at a low point every day. Can you not write like this? It's okay to push the protagonist down by 3 levels. It's okay to suppress the protagonist to promote the plot, but don't drag the protagonist pattern down so low. There are a few readers who don't complain about your stock trading plot. If you don't want to withdraw money, just make up a few daily limit boards. That's fine. There's no need to do it, okay?

Not to mention that the person you love was not beheaded cleanly, but the fiance and his family of the person you didn't expect were beheaded to a bloody state! If you take the meaning of the article's incorrectness to the extreme, you might as well kill yourself! Before rebirth, at least you were tricked by the person you like, but after rebirth, you can be tricked by the person you don't expect!

To express my point of view, the protagonist changes from a scumbag to a scumbag. To be honest. The protagonist is not even as good as Tojo Hideki.

Why do I feel impatient and bored while reading? I don't feel this way when reading other novels.

The protagonist is stupid. The more you look at the back, the more stupid he becomes. He might as well not be reborn.

I really want to know who are the people in the comment section who look down on pig's feet? 1. Is the academic qualification 985? 2. Can I buy a house and a car in a first-tier city after working outside for a few years? 3. Born in a rural area, I can rely on my own learning ability to pass the 985 exam. Is my learning ability as good as that of a pig's feet? 3. Getting an offer from a company like Huawei before you graduate proves that pig's feet are very capable. How many people can do it?

It's half stock trading and half wet. If you don't know how to write, just don't write about eunuchs. It really challenges the reader's nerves.

Li Yuqing

It's so confusing, I can't understand it, I feel like my IQ has been hit hard, I've been poisoned, and what's even more frightening is that I actually ordered it all, what did I read?

This stock market relies on my ex-girlfriend who keeps telling me the inside story and what she writes about, and she keeps eating soft food.

I have been following this novel, and I really want to say to the author: It's too long-winded, and the subject matter is so good, but you just used it to make up the words, and it took more than 5 chapters to finish. I really want to block it.

I've seen twenty-one chapters so far. It's not the same old routine, it's very funny.

I didn't read any further and watched the ending. Actually, the author, just honestly write about a man and a woman who realize their goals. Now that you really talk about how to write the ex in the ending, you are quite obliterating the hard work of the two people in the early stage. Can't you honestly write about the wealthy king and the wealthy Su? Just like frying green beans, the cook suddenly squeezed a tube of chocolate sauce into it. . . . . . It looks like undigested green beans in feces. I have finished complaining. If the author can continue reading, I will continue to talk about the shortcomings of the book. First of all, the author has little social experience, which leads to many details being too general. This is not a matter. What the author writes well is about emotions and human interaction. As for how to do business, he probably just listened to a few stories. Basically, people who read this book are interested in the author's flirtation rather than making money. You can completely write about how to make money and write more about human interactions. For example, villains and passerby characters also have their own lives and emotions, but here you have completely changed their faces, they have completely different names, and the things are mentioned in just a few sentences. In fact, if you write more group portraits and have a tighter rhythm, the book will come alive.

It's really written in a very simple way. To be honest, stock trading can't be that simple. It's written in such a way that it's taken for granted.