Perfect World: Foreign Land Is King

Why are you deleting my comments and banning me permanently? I just said that it is not even half a star worse than double undercover. Even the facts cannot be accepted 😡

If the author is not good enough, just pretend to be cool. If you don't have the strength, how can you pretend to be cool? How can you be the protagonist? When I described it at the beginning, I thought that I was going to suppress the era, conquer the heavens, lead foreign lands, and meet Shi Hao in chess, but as a result, I was in danger of defeating even a garbage void beast. The fallen Blood Phoenix clan is as useless as you, why should they enjoy the treatment of the Imperial clan? ? ?

The exotic theme is good, but the character of the protagonist is not well developed. With two unclear people around him, he could still chat and laugh with them, but he was arrogant in front of other people. There is a strong sense of fragmentation in the character. At present, it seems that the protagonist has high ambitions and low hands, and has acted too high.

What I want to see is the real showdown between Growth and Shi Hao. Instead of bullying others before they have grown up, it is too insulting to the original work. Isn't it clear why the perfect double undercover wrote better than you and got good grades?

Personally speaking, I feel that the protagonist does not seem to be in a foreign land, nor does he look like a young master of a top force under the Immortal King. Personally, I feel more like the protagonist of a novel that was very popular in the past few years. He was ridiculed wherever he went. Moreover, the style of painting is a bit different in foreign lands. As Wushang's registered disciple, he was ridiculed by a group of third-rate and fourth-rate passers-by in the territory of his registered master. I am I don't understand. Even if you don't count as a registered disciple, the protagonist, the young master of the Blood Phoenix clan, is too unqualified. You said that the Immortal King's direct line does not look down on the protagonist. I can understand it, but that passerby who doesn't know how far the relationship is dares to mock the protagonist and ignore the direct young master. That's too much. I hope the author can make corrections. I hope you can write better and better.

What a waste of rubbish! What did you write? The start was amazing, and it was the bloodline of the top genius in the clan, but what was the result? The King of Beasts was beaten to the point of rebirth? You can obviously kill me with one strike, but you talk a lot of nonsense! Near Imperial Clan? Can any member of the royal family defeat you and bring you back to life? Why did Blood Phoenix forget its skills? Just change the name? Can't kill with one hit? Why should I use the ultimate move? Are you ready to use this Phoenix magic? What a joke, a mere king beast can act like this? ? Are you qualified to write Shutian? What did you write?

People in the foreign land call themselves "my world". The foreign land is the name of the dark side in the nine heavens and ten earths. The foreign land means other worlds, right? Am I from a foreign land? I've endured this sick sentence for dozens of chapters, but the author hasn't discovered it yet. It's incredible.

Did Shen Nong test poison? ? ?

Why do inferior creatures in a perfect world devour the souls of travelers?

Not bad, finally someone writes about a foreign land.

How to form a deadly feud with Emperor Huang Tian 1 Destroy Shicun (father's clan) 2 Slaughter Bulaoshan (mother's clan) 3 Kill Meng Tianzheng 4 Suppress Liu Shen 5 Recruit Qingyi Yunxi Huo Ling'er as a maid 6 Kill Skyhorn Ant, Shi Yi, Cao Yusheng and other friends 7 Suppress King Pan, the lord of the restricted area, the second best Taoist in the world, the three old monsters and other Shi Hao's seniors 8 Suppress the descendants of the seven kings of the original imperial pass 9 Kill the great demon, Aman, Shi Ziling and his wife 10 Force-feed Shi Hao inferior animal milk Ranking in no particular order, every point is Shi Hao's weakness

Get rid of it. Pretending to be a slap in the face is too serious. It's an old routine that has been used for more than ten years. It's disgusting to watch.

The descendants of the Imperial Clan are basically matched in terms of combat power with the Geniuses of the Three Paths of Immortal Qi. The Geniuses of the Imperial Clan are basically two Paths of Immortal Qi. The best ones can be close to the Three Paths. Basically speaking, the fighting power of the royal genius cannot reach the level of cultivating immortal energy. Moreover, there are at least forty imperial clans in the foreign land. Some imperial clans have lost their ancient ancestors but their groups are still there. If you want to be semi-invincible in this environment, the fallen blood phoenix blood ancestral return is far away. Unless it is the Jiuyouzhan blood ancestral return of the old man who turned against himself, the quasi-immortal emperor ancestor has a chance to go all the way to the king realm. Even if the blood ancestral return is no longer amazing, there is no way to break through to the king realm. It is too restricted by the bloodline. Moreover, three strands of immortal energy versus two strands of immortal energy should be within ten moves. This novel's combat power is a mess, its realm is a mess, and its background is a mess. Don't read it.

The younger generation in the foreign land were quite stupid when facing Shi Hao, and they were all extremely arrogant First, some powerful clan, such as the Void King Beast, the Three-Headed King, etc., Were killed against Shi Hao, and Mo Dao was accepted as a servant. Later, he was a master of the royal family, and was completely wiped out by Shi Hao on the border of Dachitian, and then again They were the top ten masters of the royal family, including Wu Tian Wang, Qi Tian Wang, Green Vine King, Feathered Serpent King, Immortal Disciples, each one boasted more awesomely than the other, and the so-called origins were more amazing than the last. In the end, only He Ziming survived, and the rest were all wiped out. Later, He Ziming, Wu Afraid of the Lion, a descendant of the Zhi Clan, a young adult from the Imperial Clan, coupled with the encirclement and suppression by a large number of royal families in foreign lands, the help of the Nine Heavens traitors, and the dispatch of the Supreme, Shi Hao was not left behind. In the foreign land, the younger generation of the royal family surrounded and suppressed Shi Hao, but he was slapped in the face. The elite of the Imperial Clan provoked Shi Hao. Hao was killed, the descendants of the Red King family provoked Shi Hao and were killed, and then the descendants of the six small imperial clans worked together to deal with Shi Hao and were completely wiped out. The young generation of foreign lands were so powerful in giving away their lives. These people are experience packs for Shi Hao, and they are pig teammates for the protagonist of this book, Blood Phoenix.

The double undercover story line is quite good, and the description of Nai Hao is not perfect, which makes me, a perfectionist, feel uncomfortable. The only thing is that he is too licking towards women. Forget about being a witch, Yue Chan is really idealized, a person who only has a high road in the center of the original work. What's so good about a common woman? The highest achievement is nothing but the supreme, and even becoming an immortal is a luxury. To be a common woman with a heart as high as the sky, the author is childish. A man with status and strength still needs to be obedient to a woman? Haha, you have never experienced a powerful life. As long as a man is powerful, a woman who once dismissed you will be extremely submissive even if she is not flattering you, let alone a fantasy world where strength is paramount. It's not necessarily wrong for a man to lick a woman, but it depends on your status. You are already a fairy king, but you are not approachable to a group of fairies. I am so angry when I see this. The plot is very good and the writing is good, but the poisonous point of not being able to change your identity is enough to persuade me, an old fan with more than two million followers, to quit. It is really disappointing.

Isn't the trilogy about the two forces that received the legacy of the Lord of the Bronze Coffin competing for the legacy? It's just that the three of them, like the Lord of the Bronze Coffin, won and the one who ate the ashes didn't win. Why can't they write a movie about the one who ate the ashes and won?

For the foreign land flow, refer to Perfect Double Undercover for the path. This book expands on the Ten Evil Laws very well and is very imaginative. The most important thing about the foreign land flow is the atmosphere of unity. There is no such thing as fighting the young and the old like the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths. Civilian geniuses can also develop and excel, and the resources are also abundant.

There must be a heroine, a single heroine, preferably a fairy fetus of the Holy Spirit or something like that.

The title is good. It's the author's first book. It's also a rare opening from a foreign land. If the writing is not good, you can take your time.

Ao Sheng killed Luo Mo? It's not that I look down on Ao Sheng. Wasn't it Ao Sheng's beauty who died with Luo Mo?

The protagonist is a piece of trash, a bid-taker, a bastard!

When I read Blood Phoenix, I thought it was about a heroine. Isn't the phoenix female?

This post is similar to fan fiction and is very interesting

The writing is good. There are really very few people writing about foreign fandoms. Why don't you continue writing?

Not even a little bit worse than Black Hand

What bullshit invincible writing. . . . A lot of bullshit

😰What's going on? Don't enter the palace.

It feels like the current fan fiction is imitating the protagonist, so what kind of fan fiction should I read?

Recommend a novel - Peerless Tang Sect: My Dragon King Simulator (formerly known as Peerless Tang Sect: My Simulation of the Dragon King Legend)

If you want to write about Zhetian, you can also write about Blood Phoenix. Fluctlight is not good.