The Immortal Martial Arts of Immortality Starts from the Entry of Mortal Dharma Appearance

😥Is this a mechanical major? "I have no knowledge of blacksmithing at all", I really wonder where the nickname "blacksmithing" came from.

A skilled blacksmith. Can't even pay. Everyone else would have died long ago. The structure is not good

At that time, blacksmithing was very profitable, but here you can barely survive. After watching a few pictures, I feel like I can't stand it anymore.

A knife only costs seven cents? It's funny, Dangdang doesn't have enough iron material, it should be at least a handful of silver.

I don't know if it's good or not, but the author is pretty tough on words.

Traveling through time for thirteen years, I can't even support myself, and I still have a golden finger. I don't know how to use it to improve myself. I don't know what kind of waste it is.

Goldfinger will gain some proficiency after just practicing it. Are you trying to embezzle Goldfinger? It takes a few days to gain proficiency at all. I have read dozens of chapters and it is still elementary. I am afraid that Goldfinger stole the proficiency by himself. He stole 1/500 of the proficiency. I don't want to read anymore. I am afraid that in the later stage of the protagonist, Goldfinger has an old grandfather. The protagonist does everything for his grandfather. The protagonist is just a wage earner.

Ever since I met the two sisters, I have been so twisted, and the female killer is even more difficult to watch. Do you want to have a harem or become a dog licker?

It's so frustrating that Mr. Tiger's wife can tell that the protagonist has practiced cultivation just by touching his meridians, and that everyone else and the people from that sect are useless? I really don't know what to say when I read Chapter 15. The whole text is so frustrating that I'm going to die. After reading the table of contents, Chapter 55 still hasn't solved the problem of Mr. Tiger.

In chapter 42, the protagonist is still a mess of cultivation and is in an aggrieved situation. Even Golden Finger can't save him. Shen Nong died violently after seeing it 😅

In a place where there is no law and extraordinary force, Master Hu can torture and interrogate the pig's feet at will without any evidence, instead of letting his servants test him every three days.

When I saw Seven Coins and a Knife in the first chapter, I didn't know whether to continue reading 😅

In the introduction of "Selling Dog Meat over Sheep's Head", the exercises deduced have nothing to do with it, and there is not even a shadow of what it was like before the derivation.

Life in real life is depressing enough, but if you write it so depressingly, the road to immortality will probably be even more depressing later on. In real life, I think the protagonist in your book is in a state of purgatory after barely surviving and then embarking on a path to transcendence? The author wrote very well, but unfortunately it was not what I wanted.

The beginning determines the outcome. You can't grow this, why? Because pig's feet have been cowardly for too long, and the novel is basically a fast food culture. No one has the leisure to watch your pig's feet every day, how to live in fear and cowardice!

There are many books of this type, but this one is the most frustrating one I have ever read.

Awakening memories of an ordinary life for more than ten years, and then being forced to kill people and pick up martial arts secrets. The same routine, but the writing is bland and depressing. How can it be read?

Is blind date really just a modern word? A book friend mentioned in a chapter review, did the word "blind date" exist in ancient times? Also worried about getting into trouble because of this word. First of all, I want to say that this is not a historical text, so it does not pay attention to historical details. It is done whatever is convenient for the purpose of making it smoother and easier to read. In addition, I checked out out of curiosity and found that the word "blind date" is not a completely modern word, but has existed since ancient times. And its meaning also includes the current level of "blind date". The following directly transfers the entry content of "Baidu Encyclopedia": Interpretation 1. Love each other; be close to each other. 2. Before getting engaged, the parents or I go to the other party's home to see if the marriage partner is suitable Source "Guanzi·Qingchongding" Example sentences 1. Love each other; get close to each other. "Guanzi·Qingchongding": "The family of heroes... Have a close relationship of flesh and blood." "Historical Records·Biography of Guan Yan": "The saying is: 'The general will adapt to his beauty and save his evil, so the superiors and subordinates can have a close relationship.'" "Wen" Selected Sima Xiangru·Changmen Fu": "The heart is moved without thinking about the past, and we are close to each other after being happy with each other." [1] Su Shi of the Song Dynasty "Liu Farewell to Yuquan" poem: "Drinking the spring water for two years, the fish and birds also have a close relationship." Ming Dynasty He Jingming The poem "Farewell to Mr. Li Changlu": "We have known each other for ten years and have become more intimate with each other, and the moral integrity remains." Ming Dynasty Feng Menglong's "Chronicles of the States of the Eastern Zhou Dynasty" Chapter 58: "My husband, Qin, and Jin are neighboring countries, so I, Duke Xian, and Duke Ermu, have decided to get married." , Blind date from generation to generation." Guo Moruo's poem "Earth, My Mother": "I only want to be naked with my feet and be with you forever."[2] 2. A meeting arranged by the relatives of both men and women when discussing marriage. Wu Zimu of the Song Dynasty, "Mengliang Lu·Marriage": "Then the man's family will choose a day to prepare wine for the girl's family, or borrow the garden, or go to the boat on the lake, and the two parents will meet each other, which is called a blind date." Qing Dynasty Cao Xueqin's "Dream of Red Mansions" Chapter 1 Chapter 118: "Ping'er saw the background first, but he also guessed: 'It must be a blind date.'" Scene 2 of Shanghai Opera "Arhat Qian": "Your parents came to Dongsanzhuang with her, and they must go on a blind date for you."[3]

There's something wrong with the title, it looks awkward. For example, the protagonist hates Mr. Tiger and keeps yelling at him mentally. This is very problematic. There is also the younger sister Lu Qian. I have no problem calling her this way, but when speaking in the third person, I still say "little younger sister Lu Qian, younger sister Lu Qian". . . . Nearly ten in a row. Then the mother of the protagonist, just call her by name, or Mother Lu, and the result is always, mother Lu Yangshi said: Jiliguala. Then my mother, Lu Yangshi, said:. . . . . , You are written in the third person, not the first person. Then there is a big problem with prices. A carefully forged high-quality knife costs 7 cents. Then the author forcefully explained that he was detained or something, which was not convincing at all. Then a piece of roe deer skin costs 17-18 yuan. Is this reasonable? Handicrafts with this ancient background color are very cheap, but food and cloth are hard currency, not to mention animal skins.

It starts with a small villain who has no idea. He has been in the 7th level for many years and has a small power. The material supply is much better than that of the protagonist Chapter 36 ends. The protagonist has just joined the level and has a family to bring along, and lacks supplies If you write it according to normal logic, you can kill this villain after a hundred chapters. Otherwise, you have to work harder with explosive seeds + big opportunities + plug-ins, and you can kill the villain around chapter 70. A villain in a small mountain village is so slow. How would you write about the current situation in Qidian? Out of a small mountain village? It is foreseeable that even if this book does not collapse, it will be difficult to have the motivation to write it down later.

Some book friends' comments and some questions raised will be explained together. The benevolent sees benevolence, and the wise see wisdom. 1: The blacksmith still lives such a hard life. In fact, it has been said repeatedly in the article that there are more than 100 families in Taiping Town where the protagonist is located, mainly with the surname Gu, and others with the surname Wang (people brought by Mr. Hu after Wang Hu came to power). The remaining single surnames, such as the protagonist's Lu, and Uncle Wan's family next door, all have unique surnames. For the blacksmith in the small town, there are about 300 households in total including the nearby Shili Town, so the blacksmithing business is actually limited. But even so, the protagonist's family can still save some money a year. 2: 7 cents for making a long knife for Mr. Hu. The article also said that this is not a business at all, but a job with no choice. You have to do it even if you don't do it. A forged long knife cannot be sharpened, it is just a blade embryo. Master Hu took over the business from the Seven Wolf Sect, and the bulk of it was taken away by Master Hu. The 7 cents given to the protagonist was hard-earned money. 3: How other families in the town live Everyone has their own way of living. Living on mountains and water, farming is the main occupation, as well as various other activities. For example, sugar sellers, going to the city to work during slack periods, other handicrafts, etc. 4: Grain, capitation tax, Dingsi There are references to the tax burden of the dynasty in history. The fictional background in the article is heavy in taxes. 5: What the protagonist eats It is also mentioned repeatedly in the article. The protagonist still has basic food at home. But in the lean season, you can only eat five cents full. This situation is very common in history. Dear book friends, you cannot look at it based on the current abundance of materials. 6: Consumption of Cultivation It has been mentioned repeatedly in the article that after the protagonist practices, his consumption increases greatly. These ordinary coarse grains have no oil and water, and he will starve quickly. That's why I go hunting in the mountains so frequently, just to supplement my food supply. 7: Issues with various details After all, it is a fictional background, and the focus of the article is still on the characters and plot. Many articles go out hunting and return the same day. Dear book friends, think about it carefully, how is this possible? In the ancient world with the background of Chinese martial arts and high martial arts, even if you lived at the foot of the mountain, went hunting in the mountains, and walked on your legs, if the road conditions were good, you could travel up to five to eight miles in an hour. Up and down the mountain road, this distance would be greatly reduced. Go hunting in the morning and come back with your prey before dark, unless the hunting ground is right at the back door. 8: Thank you all book friends for your support!

There are hooks, but they are more boring than ordinary people. They are all parallel imports, and they are all trivial daily life. If the ending is less than 3,000 chapters, it will be unfinished. Is there no plan and outline for writing? Humble opinion!

The first few chapters are too depressing. If there are any problems later, they will be magnified infinitely, just like the first impression of a person.

What is the use of Dharma images?

Another one that is advertised everywhere, let me see its strength.

If you have time to go to other book review sections to recommend books, can't you write a few more chapters? Who can read more than thirty chapters?

To put it simply, this book highlights the ordinary character, and some settings are unacceptable to many people. However, if you are short of books, you can still read it.

In fact, there is no plot of Mrs. Tiger, and it is more fluent and has self-protection methods. Not only practicing martial arts, but also practicing bows.

It feels good. It is more in line with the beginning of the cultivation of immortals when the resources and environment are scarce. It looks more palatable and comfortable.

What about the golden body of Dharma? At the beginning, the golden body of Dharma attracts you, but in the latest chapter, that's it?