A Singer Who Started Out as a Singer

The biggest highlight of this book so far is its extreme challenges. It is recommended that it be written as a Ji Tiao fan. After writing the plot of the first four seasons of Ji Tiao's variety show, the subsequent plots should be centered on the men's gang and working together to do business.

Not enough

Concerning the issue of the heroine, I specially posted a single chapter. In relation to the work, if you are concerned about the heroine, you can read it. I will definitely do my homework before choosing a heroine for the next book. Look at the face in this book, just the face PS: The pixels of the picture are a bit different, please appreciate it (Additional: I just realized it, this matter has never been confirmed.)

A harem is great. Rebirth and time travel into the entertainment industry. If you don't have a harem, wouldn't it be a waste of time? Top actresses, actresses with good looks and good figures, they all want it.

Although the editor said that if you change the heroine midway, you will die, but will the editor continue to read your book? It's impossible. There are hundreds of authors under one editor. They only read popular books and follow some Sanjiang books, even if they are not high-quality books and have been ordered ten thousand times. The editor will not know the details of your book. You don't even need to make major changes, you just need to change this person's name to something else. Anyway, it's parallel time and space, so it makes sense. Moreover, the highlight of your book is not the female protagonist, but the extreme choice! It's a men's gang! The heroine is a seasoning, and it doesn't hurt to change her. Besides, it doesn't matter if she just changes her name.

The heroine recommends Jiang Peiyao, born in 1994, from Beijing, 169 cm long legs, good acting skills, graduated from Beijing Film Academy.

The problem is that the writing style is too streamlined, and as mentioned above, what will happen in the future? Are you telling a story with this kind of writing? What's more, the writing is very empty. What is written is often simply about one thing. The emotion of creating the collision between characters is too much from the third perspective. Writing about the emotions of the members is very exciting. Many people just write directly from the third perspective because what happened this time is very abrupt. You are not writing a paper. By the way, you often use "posterity", don't you feel embarrassed? Overall, it's still too young. There are also some splits in the character creation, whether you want to be pricked or not, sometimes you want to be single-minded, and sometimes you want to be a scumbag, which is very explosive, and there is also a cuckold fetish. I was completely magical. I thought there would be a comeback, but there was no one. I don't even know the purpose of writing this plot. Of course, there are still some advantages, but I think the rhythm of writing is still okay. Of course, there is also the reason for the small number of words.

In order to fight back against the author, the heroine transforms into a self-destructing truck 🤭🤭🤭

It's cool. I won't listen to what I say. I can only say that I deserve it.

Author, you won't just write about Ji Ji and choose nothing else, right? Is there no other development for the protagonist? Also, are you extremely picky and don't even have any feedback? There is no point of view from the audience. Are you playing a stand-alone game? ?

You, the heroine, wrote this. She defected to the national army in 1949.

Those who say that the heroine should be changed should not be persuaded. This author is determined to write it to the end. It is of no use. It is just a book anyway. At worst, he will write the next one. 😜 Just like and reply to his comments. For others who persuade him, just pretend that he didn't see it.

It's better to change the heroine, otherwise the grades may be better, and if someone is jealous and reports her, she will be locked up in a dark room. Even if no one reports her, there is a big risk of the book being blocked if she writes normally. Author, you don't want to be banned, right? {"NickName":"","UserId":210702436}

There is no difference at all between watching and not watching

If I hadn't seen that it was written about extreme challenges, I would have run away when I saw this hostess. I would jump to watch this person when he appeared.

Write more Ji Tiao and don't write about emotional dramas. I feel that the author is not good at writing emotional dramas. The highlight of this book is Ji Tiao and the Men's Gang. Keep the positioning of the book in mind and don't deviate from the Men's Gang in future career development. The Men's Gang can form a brother group to work together.

I still recommend that you change the heroine, tsls is not another black material. Recommended heroines: Meng Ziyi, Chen Yuqi, Chen Yao, Jing Tian, ​​Li Yitong, Cheng Xiao, Xu Lu, Nazha, Zhou Ye, Zhang Ruonan, Chen Duling, Zhang Jingyi, Zhao Jinmai, Guo Xiaoting, Su Xiaotong, Mao Xiaotong, Zhou Yutong, Li Landi

Isn't this crappy variety show over yet? I haven't even watched it yet. I'll give it up if it doesn't end. It's a pure waste of money.

Give Meng Ziyi a character card

So far, it's quite comfortable to watch. If not, it's up to Sister Meng as the heroine.

I think it's okay so far. The book has a good perspective, but the protagonist's presence as a singer is low. He released an album that is considered a genius according to the timeline in the book. As a result, there are very few feedback descriptions, which makes it less satisfying. You could use more descriptions of hot searches on Weibo, feedback from netizens, music critics, music up hosts or anchors, and so on!

It's okay to hack others, but isn't it a bit too much to hack Zhang Yuxin? She is now a military wife. She was so good in the past, but now she feels disgusted. It was originally a full order and she couldn't stand it after she delivered it. Forget it, just leave it like this!

The plot between the protagonist and Meng Ziyi is quite interesting, but the rest of the chicken strip plot is skipped. This variety show is too long. Readers' money is not blown by the wind, and it's not like they don't have members and resources to watch variety show videos! The author should reduce the length of the chicken strips and describe more of the protagonist's singing, filming and emotional scenes!

The author's writing is quite good. As long as it is not toxic, there is no need to pay too much attention to book reviews, otherwise it will easily affect the rhythm of writing a book. No matter how well written a book is, some people will like it and some will not like it. Therefore, I very much hope that the author will not let bad book reviews affect the writing rhythm and the quality of the book. Finally, support the author with a monthly ticket.

It feels quite comfortable so far, I hope it stays the same

In fact, there is no need to format someone's parallel world. You started writing in 2005. Since then, there have been many good songs. How many songs each singer has made is enough for you to be awesome. There is no need to format some people in this way... You can see the drama, and then you have always written about variety shows, and you can't write anything else? Didn't you start from extreme challenges... And continue with extremely challenging plots? Is this how you write entertainment novels?

I said before that I couldn't write about Mencius Yiyi, but I didn't write about it very well. I'm going to start a new book with a single female protagonist and write about Mencius Yiyi.

The author's writing is quite good. I hope to write a novel about Sister Meng and the female protagonist without so much variety show content 😍

What the author wrote was a bit taken for granted, too arbitrary!

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