Entertainment: I Rely on Loading Games to Extract Entertainment Skills

I'm really curious, why do you always like to create such extreme plots? Why can't you make the heroine a little more likeable in the beginning of the plot? The plot in the first three chapters gives people the impression that the heroine is just a giant baby, and everything is self-centered. Although I know it is to introduce cheats, why do I have to set up a plot where I have to turn around and leave after what I have promised? Isn't it bad if you travel a day early and touch a cheat? Do you have to use your plug-in as soon as you get it without even looking at it? Does your plot conflict have to be advanced by the heroine's breach of contract and the intercession of her best friend? Can't you travel online one day in advance to understand the world, play games and trigger cheats? Can't you get used to it, understand what the plug-in is, and then try out the plot the next day? Can't you go to an audition with a psychological conflict because you were despised by the director because of your past experience and then surprise the audience to advance the plot? Obviously the setting is very good, there are many ways to deal with it better, but I have to choose a worse way to deal with it. The level of dissuasion in the first few chapters is really high. I also think that the author can really write this book better. The setting and ideas are very interesting, which is why I have said so much. I hope the author can write and improve the plot in the future.

You should go to female channels, male channels are not very good at showing transgender female protagonists.

Ahem, didn't hold back. 1. At the beginning, the protagonist's emotional intelligence is slightly low (he tends to be an egoist, more self-centered, shows little regard for the feelings of others, and is slightly selfish.). 2. Male personality has a stereotyped meaning (I have never seen a woman's slightly obscene temperament in eight lifetimes). 3. The setting of the female supporting role is very stereotyped (silly and sweet, poisonous female supporting role) Summary: It is a pretty good writing practice, not too bad, but it can easily cause readers to feel that the three views are inconsistent. It's not very good, but the writing is smooth and has no obvious flaws. It can be seen that the author polished it carefully after finishing it. In short, I don't like this protagonist very much, but some people may like it. I wish you a great success and slip away

Shan Bai Marry, what is the bias of this book? Can any readers tell me?

The latest two chapters still have no serious content. Did you, the author, write them on a whim? Don't have an outline and manuscript? Relying on inspiration alone is difficult to keep it on the shelves. It is recommended that you have time to organize the outline. What are the tasks of the protagonist, how to obtain skills, what roles will you participate in, etc. Having a clear outline can help you get rid of the shortcomings of relying solely on inspiration. In addition, it is recommended that you have time to save more manuscripts to avoid unexpected incidents and not update them in time, otherwise you will not get the perfect attendance award. There should be less content that makes people confused. If there is too much content, even if you change it later, you will not be able to read it.

The type of transformation writing is so ancient. I vaguely remember that it was more popular 10 years ago, but fewer people wrote about it after that. So it is normal for young people today to find it strange. What should I say about this article? The subject matter and plug-ins are quite novel among entertainment articles, but the pace of the article feels a bit weird. If I describe it purely subjectively, sometimes it is too fast and sometimes it is too slow.

Reality is not a fantasy, but it can still be shattered. Per aspera ad astra. Come on, may everything you do will be rewarded.

Not too many beeps, just good health!

Transform, girl, just like this, rush out

The creativity is okay, the writing is normal, but the plot is not, too stiff. You can pick it up and take a look

It's too trivial😅, a bit like a diary.

Isn't this equivalent to being supported by fans? Moreover, I feel that the original owner's approach will not lead to being hacked like this, at most it will be banned?

Emmm As for the "protagonist's gender change", emmmmm, it's difficult for me to evaluate it, and I'm not worthy of it (I can't write online articles). I'm curious about what book friends think. This is just a discussion of this setting, I don't like to comment lightly.

Well, I feel unwell, I hope it's a female author