First Love, Last Love

I would like to give some advice to the author. It will be good for his writing to think more about human nature. The emotional behavior of the characters in the book should be as humane as possible, otherwise it will be difficult to read. For example, after the male protagonist investigates and discovers that the child is his, a normal man's reaction may be distressed, guilty, excited, or even escaping; but it is absolutely impossible to be furious and come to the door with evidence to make a fuss with the female protagonist. Such an unnatural plot makes the reader feel particularly disconnected and separated.

This is another story where the male and female protagonists don't talk much. . I suggest the author change his creative thinking and stop writing like this. People who read it will be angry.

I've read half of it and summarized it. The main responsibility for the misunderstanding in the first half lies with the heroine. The heroine mentioned the breakup first. After the breakup, the male protagonist couldn't help but take the initiative to contact her, but the female protagonist lied that she had a new love and posted an intimate photo to deliberately annoy the male protagonist and make him run away. When they met a few years later, the male protagonist took the initiative to contact her and offered a loan to help her. She also took the initiative to visit her when she was sick, and even asked about her children. The heroine is still not talkative, and even lies to the hero that the child is someone else's. People who watch it are angry. They can only say that the heroine's brain circuit is worthy of her suffering.