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Why do so many books nowadays like to write about weaknesses? I wrote about a sister and a mother. The key point is that the family background is so poor that it cannot provide any help or even self-protection. It can pose a threat and its existence is completely a drag on the protagonist In the first few chapters of this book, the protagonist is very stable and can hide. He has a very strong desire for the extraordinary. But you backhandedly wrote to me that he has a sister and he has a mother. I knew that the author had to look for them. The reason for the contradiction is either a passing supernatural threat and the protagonist goes to save it, or the gangster comes to the door, and the protagonist goes to fight the gangster, or the sister has a powerful supernatural talent and is favored by some force... I especially don't like to find contradictions in this aspect. The protagonist has full motivation to actively cause trouble, rather than dragging the protagonist down through his family 😅

Tell me about your personal senses. I don't like my mother and sister very much, because the protagonist is destined to go this way. The great being on the extraordinary path. Especially one as strong as Goldfinger. Mother sister. In the end, it still needs to be given up. Otherwise, you will become the kind of person who always drags the protagonist with him. To put it mildly, he is a burden. Unless you are like your best friend. The kind who regards his sister as the anchor of his humanity. Then I won't say anything to you. That book also quickly cut off all the sister's. So you, the mother and sister, give me the feeling that it is a convenient plot tool for you. In particular. Because you don't have enough details. So after the protagonist receives the memory, he faces the mother in his body. There seemed to be no conflict in his mind caused by any memory. When the memory of the past life is awakened, the two memories blend in without any conflict at all, sort of.

The book review area suddenly has more family-loving Sanguanxia. I hope you can subscribe after the author is published, and don't let your support stop at your mouth.

Those who praise their good looks are all sailors and they were poisoned to death.

Qidian Orphans lived up to its reputation, and many family members were ignited

Regardless of how it was written previously, the last few chapters cannot stand up to scrutiny. Keep emphasizing on saving Eugenes? Isn't it possible to take advantage of the ability to retroactively load files and take risks to gain benefits? Can you still go through life and death for a person who you have met several times and only exchanged benefits? Writing a wizard article but still being so gentle and polite is a big taboo. No one will like it, just to show off.

Is there no heroine or is there a heroine? If there is a heroine, is there an emotional drama or no emotional drama?

Qidian pushes these rubbish books to me, I'm so annoyed

It's well written and has been put on the bookshelf. I took a look at the comment section, doesn't it mean that the main character has a family? It's just like Da Qiu

At least let me get 30 consecutive days of point coins

The update speed is so slow. If it takes two or three chapters to deal with a debt collection manager, it would be very boring. Moreover, the protagonist's family is now becoming the protagonist's "weak spot".

The writing is quite good. Although I have a family, I don't rely on my family to fall into the bad routine of a dangerous protagonist. It's good. As for those readers who said having a family is a disadvantage, I don't think it's a bad point. What's important is always the author's ability to tell a story, not whether the protagonist in the story has a family or not. I personally think it's purely disrespectful to criticize based on this point. The layout of the writing is very good, the writing style is smooth, and overall it is very good. However, the tension of the story is relatively lacking, because it is a slow-burning novel. It is difficult to say that almost all slow-burning novels are tense in the early stage.

Very well written! I am really tired of seeing the same old orphan protagonist, and the plot arrangement is also very logical and the plot can be advanced.

Well written! Why are there still bad reviews?

The writing is good, but it seems that the author pays great attention to family relationships. I still like the way the family is written, similar to Squid and the Lord of Mysteries. They still love each other, are protective, and care about each other, but they just let you know that they are there and don't make you feel that the protagonist is a loner. It also downplays the loneliness and fulfills the feelings of some people. No matter what kind of character you are, it will not be strange after reading it. To put it bluntly, it's still a writing problem, it's poor.

If the author were alive, I would suggest continuing to write the novel. Although the fact that the protagonist has a younger sister and mother is a bit cliche, there is nothing sinister about the writing, and the story is very good. If you keep writing it, it will definitely be good. Of course, if you don't have the inspiration to write, then that's it.