Perfection: Start by Vowing to Marry Liu Shen

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People near the tribulation will also be triggered to undergo the tribulation. This is common sense in my opinion. No. 10 Must have killed many people through this trick. Why is the latest chapter written so strangely? Turn off automatic subscription first and check again.

I've read it, there are interesting things to read, but most of the time it's boring and can't be watched.

The front is fine, but the back is a bit boring.

How big of a cause and effect is this? The author is not afraid of being covered in red hair and full of foreboding.

No, why did Dou Po enter Yun Yun? To be honest, I feel that the character Yun Yun is not very good and feels a little brainless. I remember telling Xiao Yan in the original work that if Xiao Yan should follow her back to Yunlan Mountain, she would try her best to protect Xiao Yan's life in front of Yunshan. When I saw it at the time, I really felt that Yun Yun was out of her mind. What protection could she use? Strength? Yun Yun just fought against the emperor, Yun Shan insisted on Xiao Yan's death, but she had no way to do it, power? She was directly ignored by the great elder. At best, she was the leader of the sect, but at worst, she was a mascot, a high-level thug or something like that. Her family relationship with Yunshan? I have begged for mercy before, but it is still useless. Even if Yunshan is really soft-hearted and does not kill Xiao Yan, I think the most direct thing is to destroy Xiao Yan. And at this time, Xiao Yan would be more uncomfortable to destroy him than to kill him. After all, he has already been cheated once, and he may not be able to withstand it a second time. That is, Xiao Yan would rather die than return to Yunlan Mountain with Yun Yun. In the end, Yun Yun softens his heart, otherwise the fight will end directly.

Overall I feel the writing is pretty good, but I really don't understand why the heroine is Liu Shen. What always appears in front of the protagonist is a tree that has been scorched by lightning, just like charcoal, and then the protagonist becomes attracted to charcoal? ? Even if you have read the novel, you won't be able to guide yourself to this extent. Although people on the Internet say that the beast-eared girl is beautiful, the premise is that she is also in human form. Can you see a cat or a dog having sex? ? Not to mention a pile of charcoal

Do you want to have a single heroine in your fanfic? I might as well read the original work

To be honest, I felt really uncomfortable when I saw Yun Yun's chapter. Even if Yun Yun had been single or turned into a lily, I still couldn't accept him being with Xiao Yan.

With the qualities of a modern man, would a fairy fall in love with you? Duplicitous and inconsistent, these three things are indispensable for a pure pervert in modern times. You must know that others have evolved. Except for dreaming and being able to touch fairies, others look down on them.

The purpose of the protagonist coming here is to pick up the true poison of Liu Shen. He was added to the chat group for free. What's the point of being a complete person? The main character is a clown. (Shen Nong is dead, please do not disturb)

No wonder I neglected this novel because I often categorized it in chat groups. It turned out that I had abandoned it before. Poison point 1: Forget about dragging Yun Yun out, but also blackmailing Xiao Yan and blaming the incident between Xiao Yan and Yun Yun as Xiao Yan's fault. Poisonous point 2: Bringing in Honghuang. Fans of the trilogy can think their brains out. If you bring Honghuang into it, can you still write the novel?

Kunkun is a personal trainee who has been practicing for 2 and a half years and is good at basketball, singing and dancing. He has been neglected for a long time, until one day, he was tricked into northern Myanmar by a talent scout who lied about playing yo-yo. Kun Kun has always dreamed of becoming a famous artist, so he continues to practice hard and improve his skills. He participated in many competitions and won some honors, but his talent was never truly recognized. When he heard that a talent scout was interested in his talent, he was very excited. He thought this was his chance to become a star, so he followed the man away without hesitation. However, when he arrived in northern Myanmar, he found that it was not what he imagined. This is the home base of a fraud syndicate that exploits people's dreams of stardom to defraud them of their money. Kunkun soon realized that he had been cheated, and he felt very desperate and helpless. However, Kunkun experienced electric shocks and wooden sticks and did not give up after that. He began to think about how to use his skills to escape this dangerous place. He found that the boss here was a person who liked culture very much, so he decided to use his singing and dancing rap skills to attract the boss's attention. Kun Kun began to carefully observe the structure and operation of this fraud group, and gradually realized that they were a well-organized criminal gang. He decided to use his skills and intelligence to gain the trust of his boss and gain insight into the inner workings of the group. With the help of his boss, Kunkun gradually became a member of this team. He obtained a large amount of information about this group through various means and gained an in-depth understanding of their criminal methods and processes. During a performance, Kun Kun was suddenly inspired and decided to use his performance to reveal the crimes of the group. He sang a song on stage that exposed the fraud syndicate, which aroused enthusiastic responses from the audience. The song quickly became popular on the Internet and attracted widespread attention from society. Kunkun's actions aroused the vigilance of the boss of the fraud group. He began to doubt Kunkun's purpose and closely monitored him. Kunkun, however, was undeterred. He decided to use his influence to guide more people to pay attention to this issue. Under the close supervision of his boss, Kun Kun still persisted in using his performances and remarks to expose the crimes of the group. His performance attracted more and more people's attention, and more and more people began to recognize Kun Kun. In the end, Kun Kun successfully escaped back to China. Through his own experiences, he realized the dark side of northern Myanmar and also realized his own strength and value. He decided to continue practicing hard, improving his skills, and fighting for his dreams. After returning to China, Kunkun continued to develop his career in the entertainment industry. His talent was truly recognized and his performances attracted more and more true fans. In a national talent show, Kunkun won the championship with his superb basketball skills and singing and dancing talents, and became a nationally renowned entertainer. Despite the success he has achieved, Kunkun has not forgotten his original intention. He decided to use his influence to speak out for those who were unfairly prevented from pursuing their dreams. He actively participates in charity activities and provides help and support to those in society who are unable to pursue their dreams. In a charity event, Kunkun met a woman named Xiao C. Little C is a woman with a musical dream, but she cannot continue to pursue her dream because of her family's poverty. Kunkun decided to help Xiao C realize her dream and provide her with education and training opportunities. With Kunkun's help, Xiao C gradually showed his outstanding musical talent. She participated in various music competitions and won many awards and honors. Her success attracted more people's attention and inspired more people to pursue their dreams. The story of Kun Kun and Xiao C has inspired countless people. Kun Kun used his actions to prove that a person's power is infinite. [Content fictional]

I don't want to watch it just because of the heroine alone

Writing about Liu Shen as the heroine would be like a fucking eunuch, right?

Some people may say that what I wrote is a bit of a bitch. But I still want to say that Shi Heng killed various ferocious beasts in the wilderness and was affected by Chi Yu. When people from small tribes died, I didn't say anything, even though I felt a little uncomfortable. But this is a relatively normal thing, but killing so many beasts with inscription mirrors caused the array mirror beasts to chase them, and then even went to the human race. Taking shelter in the tribal city caused the city to suffer disaster, and some people were killed. This thing makes me a little sick. , He doesn't know. If you come here, you will be massacred. I think he should know that, but he still travels to other worlds in the human city. This is a bit strange, after all, in lies, it is actually the same wilderness.

To be honest, Perfect World has a single female protagonist. The original protagonists all have a harem with four female protagonists, Huo Ling'er, Yunxi, Qinglian, and Yuechan (Qinglian and Yuechan are reunited) And your protagonist is Liu Shen, Zhen 6 And the meaning of your chat group is that everyone else is completely integrated, and you are still a noob there? Really poisonous.

Everyone, please feel free to read. As long as I have a friend who supports me, I will persevere. Writing alleviates the book shortage. It is my first time to open a book and my writing is limited. Please forgive me!

The same applies to the Zhetian trilogy. Being able to travel to Zhetian means that the future body will be comparable to the three future emperors.

Don't understand! Not many people will watch it! A perfect protagonist who is like a teacher and a friend, a person who has no gender until the end. Only Shengxu said the gender, and a fan protagonist came from nowhere and wanted to climb a tree. 6

I think your author's setting is outrageous. The author set the Immortal King to be equal to Da Luo, and the Immortal Emperor to be equal to Saint. But it turns out that the jade purifying bottle of the best innate spiritual treasure is useful for worshiping the Tao? According to the author's setting, the way of sacrifice is equivalent to the way of heaven. But in the end, a top-quality innate spiritual treasure is useful to the way of heaven? 😅

Author, are you writing about a low-profile Immortal King and a low-profile Immortal Emperor? The Immortal King's full power destroys the star field with a beam of light? The Destruction Star Territory Supreme can do it. The battle between the quasi-immortal emperor and the immortal emperor opened up the prototype of the universe? Can't the original quasi-immortal emperor be able to open up a world larger than the immortal realm? 😅

What a perfect fan novel, it will soon be turned into a romance novel...

Behind it is written that the world suddenly jumped to a modern city. Don't you think it's very sudden? There is no front cover at all. It really can't keep up with the author's brain circuit 😅😅😅😅

I feel like I'm crazy. I feel like this after reading two or three chapters. I don't know why I feel like this. Some people feel like vomiting.

The first few chapters were normal, but later on when he started to do those miscellaneous things, starting a sect, etc., The author was already addicted to his own world and couldn't extricate himself. The main plot was very confusing, that's one thing. The second point is that the protagonist is a m, who gets whipped at every turn and also likes to be licked. Third, author, you are really not suitable for writing emotional dramas, it is too blunt and embarrassing. I suspect that the author has deleted all the bad reviews. There are many very toxic places that should have reviews, but there are none. In summary, if you have never eaten Shi, you can try it.

What are you doing writing about reality lately? If you don't want to write about the later plot, you can write about other worlds.

A tiger that is four to five meters long weighs a thousand catties (the author did not explicitly say whether the tail is included or not, but I will assume it is). Do you think this is reasonable? In a fantasy world, a four- to five-meter-long tiger dominates the area ten miles away. Who do you want to laugh to death? Thousands of catties, even the flying dragon you wrote earlier can beat this tiger, leaving me speechless anyway. . 😅😅

I didn't want to read it after reading the introduction. It was so embarrassing.

Your video chat is so awesome. You can go to other universes. People in all universes can interact with each other as long as they have a video chat with you. You can bring as many people as you want. There is no limit. You can also travel instantly. You can bring as many people as you want. No matter which universe, as long as you are in the group, for example, bringing all the people from the perfect world to the Swallowing Star Sky to practice, it is better than the perfect world.