Douluo Peerless: the Abyss of Extreme Martial Arts

Suggestions: Better segmentation, don't look uncomfortable in lumps [It doesn't affect me at all, I got used to it when I watched Xi Ling] The protagonist is on the martial arts route, and there are many ideas available at the moment One: Dragon and Snake Romance Chinese Martial Arts Light Darkness Hua Dan Gang Shen Two: World of the Holy King Cell Martial Arts [Godly Elephant Prison Suppressing Power], every cell is a divine elephant Three: Infinity of Ice [Early Infinite Flow] [Can be used as the male protagonist's step to ascend to the gods] The Four Heavenly Cares of the Divine Gate Care: Mind Body: Flesh [Titan giant ape, ocean giant beasts and other soul rings] Qi: the sublimation of the energy cultivated by oneself Soul: Soul [Evil Eye Tyrant Soul Ring] Four: Manipulate and rub cells, choose the electromagnetic soul beast soul ring, try magnetic field rotation Five: Douluo's own soul ring characteristics, each soul ring corresponds to its own organ, integrate the attributes to create the Douluo version [Chaos Body] For example: heart fire attribute, fire attribute, soul beast with powerful muscles br>Six: Pure physical school, the avenue of power explodes everything Skin: skin Meat: muscles Meridians: meridians Bone: bones, marrow Inside: internal organs Brain: cerebral cortex, hypothalamus, brainstem, cerebellum... Cultivate the ultimate body martial soul

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It seems that he doesn't know the plot, but he actually did everything he could, so there is really no need to forcefully write him as an Aboriginal (time travel, but he doesn't know the plot, he is considered an Aboriginal)

I feel like the protagonist looks more like a dancer than a martial arts practitioner. It's too danceable.

The protagonist of the Dou Er fanfiction comes standard with dark gold and a fear claw, and the author must arrange it 🙂

I think Huo Yuhao still has his charm

Not my buddy, haven't updated yet

The previous problem is that the paragraphs are too dense and lumpy.

Most people hate Tang San for the following reasons: 1. Tang San secretly learned the Tang Sect's Xuantian Kung Fu (Justification: Tang San was an outer sect disciple. If he didn't secretly learn the Tang Sect's secret skills, he would never have a chance to get ahead in his life. He might be working for the inner sect disciples until he died. Tang San secretly learned the secrets, but I think it was a sign of bravery.) 2. When Tang San had no strength, he was called Big Brother, and when he was strong, he was called Mu Bai. Tang San did not take his master Yu Xiaogang to the divine world. (Justification: When you are weak, you call me Big Brother, and when you are strong, you call me Mubai. It is normal. At least we are relatively close to each other. We are not called Dai Mubai. This is human nature. Different statuses have different names. As for not letting Yu Xiaogang go to the divine world, I just want to say that there are a few who have succeeded now. I went home and saw the primary school teacher who taught me how to study. Tang San had done very well. Yu Xiaogang broke through level 30, won the honor of being the best teacher in the mainland, fell in love with Liu Erlong, and became the master of the Blue Lightning Tyrannosaurus. These things didn't happen. Tang San, which one did he accomplish? ? ) 3. After Tang San obtained the Killing God Domain, he destroyed the Killing City (Justification: People are selfish. Since they have gained benefits, of course they cannot let another person gain the same benefits through this place. If you have it, that's it, and if others get it, then your sins over the years will be in vain. If you don't understand, you can think of it like this, do you want to be the only number one in the entire school, or do you want to be number one with a dozen people? Secondly, being in the Killing City is equivalent to Tang San suffering in a German concentration camp during World War II. Everyone will go crazy. Of course he wants to destroy that place after coming out) 4. Split his own daughter's soul into two halves and then combine them into one person, Tang Wutong (defense: it is divided into two people, that's right. In order to fulfill her ten thousand year plan, didn't they get them together again in the end? And wasn't this also for Tang Wutong to obtain the fortune of the auspicious beast? There must be some people here who are more competitive, but this is a fantasy novel. Some protagonists must practice some avatars, such as transforming into three pure beings in one breath. Aren't these secret techniques also divided? Split your own soul? In short, this is indeed a problem, but please remember that this is a fantasy novel, not the real world) 5. Treat your son-in-law like a trained dog (Defense: Ancient emperors probably treated their consorts no better than this. Before Huo Yuhao became a god, he believed As a commoner, Tang Wutong's status as a god king or the daughter of a dual-level god is comparable to that. How do you feel when your father's little cotton-padded jacket was stolen by another man? Moreover, Tang San's treatment of Huo Yuhao was far from being a good one. At most, he was just trying to protect his daughter so that Huo Yuhao wouldn't be killed in the future.)