I Have a Volume of Mountains and Seas

Popular recommendation: When you first look at the classification and title of the book, you will subconsciously think that this is a traditional systematic book. After reading a few chapters, I found that the writing style is somewhat similar to a survival game novel. Through the help of the system, you can gain skills and experience step by step and complete your own progress story. Although the work does not have many words now, it reshapes the direction of the Xianxia system through writing, which makes the author's eyes shine. This is worthy of recommendation. Work panel: [Author] Gu Deng Can Xue [Bookmark] Time travel, system, upgrade flow [Rating]🌸🌸🌸🌸 Content review: I will test the novel, and review good books here. Hello everyone, I am Jiang Liuer, an ordinary book friend. Let's get back to the book, today I bring you a new book with 10,000 words on the new book list. First of all, the author was attracted by the introduction. This book tells the story of a male protagonist who accidentally travels to a parallel time and space, obtains a map of mountains and seas, acquires related abilities by killing the creatures on the map, and grows up step by step. Secondly, it can be seen from the above plot that the early stage of the novel is mainly guided by the mountain and sea map and encounters by chance. Through the combination of the mountain and sea map and the system panel, it guides the rapid growth of the male protagonist. There is not much foreshadowing in the novel, and the straight-to-the-topic style made the author's eyes shine. Later, the scope of the male protagonist expanded and became more flexible, but the story was still single. For example, in about twenty chapters, the male protagonist's initiative can actually be written better, but the development of the entire plot always makes people feel that the protagonist is also like a tool. In terms of character portrayal, as mentioned just now, the character's initiative is not strong and they still follow the instructions of the system. If this continues, it will only be limited. From the latest chapters, it can be seen that the author wants to write some vivid characters, so I think it is better for the author to slowly let the characters out of the system, and maybe the story can be more exciting. Finally, the author knows from the known content that the work is a monster-fighting and upgrading text based on more than one ancient immortal warrior. The work uses the writing method of desert island survival to give a new feeling to an unfamiliar subject matter. Although the author's writing style is a bit jerky, I believe that as long as the story does not collapse, it still has a great future. {"TopicId":"804728532092780544","TopicName":"Book Famine Terminator"}

Is there a female protagonist? Wouldn't it be more than one girl? I hope there won't be a female protagonist

A Xuanjian Sect with a small world was wiped out. Even if there were no elixirs, no magic weapons, and the core inheritance could not be given, ordinary Qi and physical training methods were better than external ones. Jingran refused to learn, but went outside and was fooled by a wild Taoist priest's Qi training method. What's the logic of this? I had some feelings about it when I watched it earlier, but I was so disturbed here that I couldn't stand it anymore.

I beg you all to read more. The only useful data in the new book issue is to read more. If you continue to read more, you will kill the book. 😭😭

I can only say that it is inexplicable. The plot at the beginning is really good. It is about ancient mountains and seas exploring strange beasts, and the intersection with crabs, white birds, etc., And getting in touch with ancient human myths and different races. Suddenly the ancient times turned into modern immortals, and Golden Finger suddenly lost its sense of existence and turned into a third-rate immortal novel.

Are you stuck and just want to practice hard? ? ?

It would be okay if you can activate the illustrated book through enough observation and then see its weaknesses. Besides, it's boring to take one bite and gain abilities just by looking at it.

I'm disgusted by the fact that there is a female protagonist, I wish there wasn't one

This book doesn't have much to do with the introduction. It's quite confusing, but the writing is rubbish.

A sect with a small world only has one sword? How about playing? How funny! What do you practice yourself? No follow-up? The previous plug-in also provided follow-up exercises, but what was the result? Plug-ins are even more useless! What are you writing about?

Can Shen Nong tell me whether this thing is poisonous or not?

It's okay, but there's just too little written about it.

What about the fish caught? I also want to see if the fish will become Kun. There are more than 20 pictures and the humans have come out. Where did the fish go? Have eaten?

It felt good at the beginning, but suddenly it turned into a third-rate immortality novel, and I lost interest.

I haven't read the novel yet. I saw your introduction and I didn't want to read it. So high-level golden fingers are used to collect those little bugs and little things. They don't open up when the pattern is clear. It's bigger.

You are not even sure about the function of the golden finger. After reading three chapters, you are getting more and more confused. First, make sure whether you gain abilities by killing monsters or by meeting monsters. If you can record and gain abilities by encountering monsters, it will be difficult for you to write.

There's not much to eat, so what's the point?

The first part is about survival, but the later part is inexplicably turned into an article about cultivating immortality! !

I'm really convinced by Qidian's review mechanism. It doesn't matter if it involves ghosts or ghosts. Why do I have to re-review a review after I just change a word? 😊😊

Keep writing. I will vote for you regularly in the future. I hope there won't be a female protagonist. Too many emotional scenes will make it unsightly.

Did the author write carefully? There is no explanation for the storage bag and magic weapon obtained earlier. After getting the lava fire, there was no further explanation. I don't know what to write

It's so sad that the author didn't write about it when I saw it.

I don't know whether the author or the protagonist has amnesia, and he forgets some things. Although it is a small thing, isn't writing a book all about the details?

Good! Supported by one monthly ticket!

Come on, author, the writing is very good, please give me some comments