I Became a Fairy and Lived Forever in the World of Immortal Martial Arts.

It's rare to find another readable novel. The author is not good at all. The main character's personality is also to my liking. There are just a lot of typos.

Alas, there were so many transformation essays in the past. Young people nowadays don't even know about this genre.

Can you please delete those comments about female videos? I find them annoying.

I feel like the transformation area is already a vicious cycle, with a high rate of eunuchs, readers dare not pursue it, and if they don't, it will be even worse. Transformation text is difficult to write, and the quality is generally not high. However, if you can't write it well, it will basically fail. It's been a long time since I've found a transformation article that I can read on Qidian. Let's give it a try when you have time.

Can some people please stop mentioning female channels? Isn't this obviously a male channel with a female protagonist?

Transformation writing is a genre! But that's gone now, and the transformation has been attributed to the female channel! I can't accept this kind of setting at all. It has never been popular before, right? Or maybe people were just curious about it at first? Then it became GG later on, and the transformation text was no longer suitable. It was a curiosity at the beginning, but it became disgusting when I saw it later!

In fact, this book is basically written with the female protagonist as the male protagonist. To be honest, on a male channel, this is really unnecessary. Either write the female protagonist in a more feminine way, or just write the male protagonist directly. If you treat the female protagonist as the male protagonist, you probably won't get good results, right? She crosses her legs at every turn, no serious heroine would do this. . .

Everyone, take a look

After reading novels for more than 10 years, this is the book with the most typos I have seen

I've read all the free ones. How can I say, I didn't see the role of the longevity talent. At first I thought it was to use the longevity talent to master various genres and use life-burning skills to improve the realm and cultivate something. However, the free chapters are not related to the introduction. It's like a skin-changing process of defeating monsters and dropping treasures to upgrade

The heroine is actually not suitable for Gou Daowen, because Gou Daowen's characteristic is that he rarely causes trouble. You are so beautiful that you attract attention wherever you go, and you are born to be the source of trouble.

Apart from the female protagonist, is this book any different from other books with male protagonists? Just look at the behavior, adventure, and practice. Change the protagonist and all creatures will be the same regardless of men and women. There is no difference between men and women at all! ! !

It doesn't feel like raising a daughter. Changing the main character's name to a mainstream male protagonist doesn't feel out of place at all.

I saw it online and I think it can be used as a character drawing

In fact, the most incomprehensible thing is to create a sect force. Unless there are too many wives and children to settle and establish, this will be a drag. The casual cultivator will have a hard time in the early stage until he is a mid-to-high-level person. Taka can be completely lawless. Without worries, he can trade or rob, kill, and plunder. Running around has the power. I have worked so hard to raise my children. Isn't it the exhausting work of my own life? Today this disciple is fighting this and I have to fight back. Tomorrow, there will be other things dragging down the problem. The problem is still uncontrollable because the human heart cannot be alone. The biggest problem is that the target is too big. If something goes wrong, you can't run away. It's so good to run around when you are advanced. You still have strength. Only those without strength will join a group to keep warm. The problem is that you are strong enough to get resources. I am strong enough to find a disciple who dares to ask for orders from a force.

It currently looks much better than 90% of the Immortality Stream in Qidian. It doesn't matter whether the protagonist is male or female. The various mentally retarded male protagonists in Qidian are not as engaging as this book.

I would like to ask you all, how do you read the transformation text 🤔 I feel that this setting is completely unacceptable 😥

There are often typos and redundant words in the whole text. Occasionally, the sentences may not be smooth or the sentences may be tangled in the head. Many of them seem to be typos in voice input and the text is published without proofreading. I read it every day and see that there is not much improvement in these problems. I would like to remind you.

Overall, it's pretty good, except that some parts look like they were coded by AI, and some of them are incomprehensible. . .

... It's outrageous that a mere person who needs five innate spiritual treasures to build the foundation of heaven to practice qi and build the foundation. Does building the foundation and entering the golden elixir mean refining stars to make the golden elixir like other novels? . . . . . The Nascent Soul refines black holes and transforms into gods to destroy the universe, right? . . . . . . .

I have a question. Although the plot and writing are very good, why can't the author's grades improve?

I just finished reading it today. The following dozens of chapters moved forward the plot very quickly like an assembly line. I can only say that it didn't meet my expectations. I didn't expect it to end at all, and it ended suddenly. 😭

Change order, little by little, the next few dozen chapters are not interesting, I skipped to read, but overall you can take a look, I have written it from beginning to end.

What about the new book? Stop being lazy and publish a new book soon! ! !

No, brother, where have you gone? What about the new book?

Have you noticed that the middle and later stages are like the plot of Perfect World?

The writing is quite good, but the listening experience is very poor. Many sentences are not fluent, and some settings are written repeatedly.

There are too few updates. Am I a person who lacks coins?

"I can analyze and identify everything, but it's all wrong"