Under One Person, Mixed in the Company

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It is indeed one of the better one-person fanfics I have seen on Dianjia. I also like this kind of writing style that unites the country. Although the author's IP is unknown, he is not from Shandong~! The only regret is that the protagonist likes to show off Zhang Chulan's intelligence and sophistication so much that it makes Bi Lian a bit stupid. Although Bi Lian is a novice in officialdom, his tact and sophistication are his strengths. It is unreasonable for the protagonist to point him out over and over again and use the same method to pretend to be stupid. This should be played Cheating when you are cheating, being sincere when you should be sincere, using the emotional card when you should use the emotional card, wrapping up in many aspects is Bilian, chewing up the mistakes you have made and grinding them into final products is the source of Bilian's sense of security. Bilian's image is a bit thin... The author who is also responsible for the wisdom of the original work always writes well, don't be too biased~

The author should change the company's attitude and be stronger. The company in the novel is too weak. The fact that the company looks easy to talk to in the comics may just be a matter of looking down on things in the alien world. After all, the company is the spokesperson of the state machine.

I have never understood why among the authors who write about being inferior to one person, none of them write about being stubborn.

It is said that the protagonist seeks strength, but it does not explain the protagonist's specific methods, nor does it describe how to practice. Let's say the protagonist wants power, but he is just the director of the general office and has no power to fight. Let's just say the protagonist is strong. He can compete with the Four Crazy and Barron when he appears. Let's call the protagonist weak. He didn't catch anyone, even if there was a plot of catching one of the four madmen and then escaping on the way. In the end, after more than fifty chapters, the protagonist has no sense of presence or participation. Without the protagonist, the plot advances and goes the same way. The protagonist met the four crazy people and was run away, which had no impact on the overall plot. He met Liu Qing of Valencia and was run away, which had no impact on the overall plot. Comparing with Wang Ye, the point is over, and it has no impact on the overall plot. The confrontation with Lu Ci and Wang Ai was fine without the protagonist Zhang Chulan, and it had no impact. Maybe it's just like the protagonist's suspected ability to see in the Daluo Cave. The problem is that the fan fiction is the same as the original work. What else should I read? It's as light as water.

The comments are deleted so harshly that I don't dare to read them. Let's be a serious Shennong!

More than 200 chapters and more than 40 comments, Real Jill is scary! Don't be so cruel when deleting comments. At least the whole thing looks better if it's almost a hundred.

The success reminded me of Su Haha, the beheaded girl The author should try not to write emotional scenes that would make me jumpy Reasonable, ruthless, and decisive in killing

I was speechless after reading the beginning. I encountered all kinds of evil characters, but I didn't catch him and let him go. Don't tell me why I was afraid of affecting the main plot. In this case, why did you write him out? If you don't know the protagonist's methods, you just brag about it. Zz If you want to read about the art of speaking, just read official novels. To survive under one person is to increase the interest of the story. Have you increased

At the beginning, the protagonist met the villain several times, and then threw a few broken needles to drive the opponent away. Later, while talking about the protagonist having sex, Barron was disturbed. . . . Written with a hammer

I thought it was a book, but it turned out to be a piece of shit I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 9. I wrote a fanfic without even reading the original novel, or did I just watch the anime? At the beginning, it was said that the protagonist was very skilled and was entrusted with important tasks, but in the end he ended up working as a few miscellaneous soldiers. I was speechless.

There are very few posts, and they are all negative reviews. The few that praise this book are as good as world famous books, and its effectiveness in dissuading people from quitting is top-notch.

What did you write? I've read a few chapters and still don't know what you're going to do? I don't even describe my situation, it's so boring to write.

Give it up and don't arrest anyone. Anyway, judging from the current plot, being alone and working as a dog for the company is no better than being alone.

I just looked at a few pictures, and it seems that the protagonist is 55-5 with everyone, and even the minions can't kill any of them.

The same old trick of fan authors, suppressing the original protagonist in order to praise the protagonist, which is too ugly.

Entering the limited exemption can explain a lot of problems, but there is no comment threshold. The author still has a pattern. At least you can't just criticize me, but I can make money.

There is no need to delete posts, if it is a hobby, then you probably want to write a good story. If you are making money to eat, you have to consider book friends.

Saying that the Eight Wonderful Skills are the art of causing chaos is actually just jealousy. I have worked hard to meditate and practice for decades, but nothing can compare to practicing the Eight Wonderful Skills for a few months. So my practice has little meaning, and tempering one's character is even more nonsense. Daying Immortal has been practicing for decades, but Wugensheng has not broken the Taoist heart all of a sudden. This shows that people with a Taoist heart have a Taoist heart, and those who don't have it will not be able to achieve it after meditating for a lifetime.

I have been poisoned, there is no climax, it is very bland. If it is bland, I can accept it. Unfortunately, when I read it, I always felt that this book is weird. The plot is very stiff and has no sense of pictures. The summary writing is not good.

Have you read Chapter 40 and still don't understand what the protagonist is going to do? What the hell did you write?

It's the best among the Qidian fanfics!

Let the author write the book. Barron 1 is not omnisexual and 2 does not want to kill people. Have you seen the original work?

I don't understand. Isn't this a complete copy? No change at all?

Well written, full marks for human touch and sophistication

To be honest, "Under One Person" is not a comic suitable for fan fiction. Why? Because this comic is fundamentally characterized by a "big group, small individual", even if the combat power is at the ceiling, the master who dominates the world cannot match the power of the group. This comic is actually just a story about human relationships, sophistication, traditional culture, and suspense. As for force, if you don't see it, even Nason Island, where strong men gather, was almost bulldozed by modern military groups. No matter how powerful a person is, what can he do to shake the world structure? So it's difficult to write a fanfic of "Under One Person". You can't write about worldliness alone, and you can't write about force alone. What's more, many authors can't even write a single point well. When writing "Under One Person", you must start from the overall pattern, and at the same time, you must go beyond the limitations of force in the original work, so that you can have highlights. But I have to say that Mi Er has not explained clearly the background and force settings of the entire story until now, which is really unfriendly to the fan author. So, I think the fan writer of "Under One Person" can use his ability to set the story, but it is best not to use his story background - this story is Mi Er's private place. It will be much easier to write if the person with the ability of "One Person" goes to other story worlds.

Additional refinement, understand?

A lot of things are not written clearly, it's a bit of a stream of consciousness

The writing is great. Traveling to the parallel world of China, of course you have to fight for the great rejuvenation of the Chinese nation. The secrets of the protagonist are not important.

This book is disgusting and opens the door to nausea.