After the Palace Change, the Little Medical Girl Took the Prince to Farm

The writing is okay, but I can't read it with my brain.

As a reader, I respect the author very much, and generally don't like to judge whether the author's writing is good or not, but I really want to say this because I feel sorry for it. The first chapter is well written, it can arouse the desire to read further, it is not procrastinating, the logic is self-consistent, and the writing is good. I thought I found a good idea, but... The second chapter started to be a bit off-kilter and illogical. I have room to tolerate it, but I mentioned poisoning, broken legs and chest injuries many times, but there was no follow-up. I have been running away for half a month. Broken legs and poisoning in this half month are not debuffs that can be ignored. At least there is a realistic logic. Poisoning can cause organ failure. A broken leg will start to grow bones and heal after half a month. There is really no way to deal with these wounds. It also does not explain what the poison is. What is the situation of the broken leg? Just bring something out from the back space to treat it. The reaction of the Soapfield family members is also the same as that of modern industry. In ancient times, it was considered a high-end item, but it was really alienating for the Tian family to just accept it without any suspicion. Also, there was the character of the prince. As a prince who was almost killed in a palace fight, when he was on the run, even if you wrote that he had a sinister personality and a weird temper, or a smiling tiger who begged for mercy in order to survive, it would still be acceptable. Moreover, after being hungry for so long, it is impossible to be picky about food, threaten the heroine, and be pretentious in the bath. This is really impossible. I am not saying this to be critical. I really think the first chapter is well written, with a tight rhythm and logic. I hope the author can write good works in the future. Good articles are becoming less and less now. After seeing the first chapter, I think the author has the ability to write good articles, which is why he has so many bbs. I hope you can work hard.

Others are miracle doctors who make a fortune from farming and then meet the prince's womb to have family fun. This one is different from other routines. The main theme is to share weal and woe with the prince and gradually make a fortune. It's quite interesting. Work harder and come on.

What I wrote at the beginning was quite good, but there were too many short stories about parents in rural areas. I think it would be better to cut them down a bit. As a person who grew up in a rural area, I felt very annoyed when I saw these plots where the east and west parents were short and short. I will wait and see what happens later, and when the time comes, I will read directly from the middle.

No matter what the score of this book is, you, the author, have great potential. If you really decide to end this book, I will respect your decision. You can keep writing and you will definitely gain a lot.

Recently, I haven't found a few new books by new authors that I can read, but this is the one that suits my appetite. Although it is a farming novel, the author designed a lot of new plots, which is rare and fresh. It is really great. I really like this book. The author has great potential. Tell you loudly, I like it😍

Please pin my previous post to the top. I don't want to see those critical comments on me.

Very interesting ~ Come on, author⛽️

Is it going to end so soon? Less than half a million words.