The Ultimate Fire

Your handling of character relationships is a bit too abstract 🤔. Even if he confessed to Huo Yuhao at the beginning, the reason was acceptable, and he also became sworn sworn friends and recognized Huo Yuhao's mother as his godmother. It always felt like he was trying to catch up. Even if Huo Yuhao only had the memory of the God King, he couldn't do this. Even if it takes one day in the divine world and one year in the lower world, Huo Yuhao would be a hundred years old, so he really recognized the protagonist as his brother. Isn't it awkward? Also, the protagonist's brain circuit is too abstract, especially where the wind baboon is. Just one sentence is enough, and a monument is built for the wind baboon. Two outsiders can tell at a glance that the protagonist is a psychopath. You also said that with Huo Yuhao, there is no need to think about it. Let's talk about it. Is it possible that the protagonist of this book is not Huo Yuhao. Others write the protagonist as a fun person, but you wrote the protagonist as a fun person. If the author really wants to write this book well, he'd better pay attention. If he keeps treating the protagonist as a fun person, he probably won't get far.

You can refer to it.

Xiao Xiao

Although, but that's why the color of the soul ring will change later (._.)

How come you have finished the book? Are you a eunuch?

I feel like I've read your book three times, it's so familiar.

The author's writing is very good (≧∇≦*) and the joyful atmosphere is really enjoyable Recognition from Zhouchu 😏

Finished? ! You are so awesome, author! (Gritting teeth)

Are you a eunuch? Why isn't it updated?

The author deleted a few misleading comments and then explained it again: 1. The first is the white ring. If you think that the benefits of three low-life soul skills are greater than strengthening the martial soul to the extreme, then this book is poison, and my suggestion is to abandon it. Trap 2. The second one is Shrek. Shrek and Tang Shenwang are not separated here. They are all anti-() 3. As for why he is a dog with authority, it is probably because he can scold me, but at least he has to look at me before scolding me. I haven't read a chapter of the book, and I'm scolding you without missing a single sentence... I'll just QAQ it.