Gaowei Douluo: What Should I Do If I Travel Through Time and Become My Father-In-Law?

I just looked at the catalog and when I saw the words Sidongquan, I just wanted to laugh.

6. The main thing is ethics 🤓

6 Ah Yin is also very beautiful. 😍

After reading Chapter 12, I finally couldn't hold on anymore. The writing is good. It mainly focuses on ethics. It makes people smile when they read it. It's the character of the protagonist. Alas, I came to see the ethics, to see the blood flowing in the river, not to see a shark-maniac protagonist who was brainwashed by his father-in-law and turned into a maniac who will die if he is wronged. Watch this This book is really both good and bad. The good thing is the plot of this book, and the imaginary setting is very suitable for me. The bad thing is that the character of the protagonist has been brainwashed. It makes me feel like I am watching another Tang San. I kept having a thorn in my eyes while reading. I really can't stand it anymore. I will put it on the bookshelf for now. I will read it later when I become evil and have almost no three views.

Good guy, it's so weird, take another look

It seemed quite novel at first, but when I saw Chapter 6, I became a disciple? I just vomited. A Lan Orange is also worthy. The children are all born from other people's genetic factors. They are not ejaculated to her. Huo Yuhao also has to be a disciple. Who worships whom and what to teach Yuhao. He was the God King of Emotions during his lifetime. Douluo Continent Ultimate Douluo complementary dual soul cores. Whether it is a soul guide or a soul master, it is disgusting. If you want to write about Wang Qiuer, I can still accept it, but this Lan Orange, I vomited it.

You've been trained to be a dog, why travel through time?

I've uploaded the poison, click in and you'll find it's finished 😅

I couldn't stop laughing after reading the introduction and character profiles... How did the author come up with this ethics?

The author is new and can't write novels well. Please give me some advice. Then if anyone thinks the author's writing is too rubbish, please recycle the book directly into the trash can. There is no need to curse.

Do you want to join the brainwashed Shrek who bullies the weak and fears the strong? If you join, you will become famous later. Do you want to worship the big shit? The theory of the king of kings will be of great help to him. Should the name Tang San be thrown away? Traitor, rogue rabbit, how to grill the head of a spicy rabbit?

In order not to change history, I have a bold idea😁😁

As long as there is no serious illness in the fanfic, minor problems are understandable.

You wrote Huo Yuhao's character as Tang San,

I feel that this Huo Yuhao is a bit childish, a bit unlike the battle-hardened emotional god at the end of the original work, but more like the 12-year-old boy at the beginning.

6The subject matter is very good. The outline is very good. Why do you want to deliberately add poison? Overall, it seems fine. If you continue to write like this, you will become an eunuch.

How could he have the intention to kill just because he said a word?

I'm wondering about Myth Douluo. Why did the author cancel his account?

This idea is really outrageous😏😏😏