I Was Dumped by Reba at the Beginning, but I Became Famous in the End

Author, if you continue to write like this, this book will be useless. I read it in one sitting from the beginning. There are quite a few problems with the plot, rhythm, and writing style of this book. As a reader, I can't let you continue to make mistakes. So, you can post the next hundred pictures and I'll see if I can make corrections.

Reba also has white legs, an interesting figure, but a not-so-good-looking face, and any average female star has better looks than her.