Legacy 1

Why is there no one? Someone can read and reply to me.

It's not a novel, it's an imaginary background of multiple political struggles in the Western world. The level of science and technology is equivalent to that of modern society. It has elements of modern war conflicts and supernatural powers (seeing that now it is mainly about training and developing physical strength, exploring the ancient potential in the body, there are shadows of martial arts, and there are also genetic experiments), but the power system is not particularly supermodel, it is a reasonable fantasy. I would like to call it Mini "The Other Side of Deep Space".

The early introduction may be too complicated, with various settings, background introductions, and the appearance of many characters. It may be dizzying and may be a bit discouraging for some readers. However, this is a mistake that every new writer will make. It will be more comfortable to read as the plot unfolds later.

The protagonist is constantly fighting and escaping, and the things he encounters are getting more and more bizarre, his combat power is getting higher and higher, and his rationality is getting worse and worse. You said that the background of the world is the age of the end of law, but in the end, there are immortal cultivators. There are also a lot of foreshadowings or pitfalls, so let's start over and sort them out. The first point is the relationship between the protagonist and the bishop, Grandpa's friend, and Grandpa's entrustment. But later on, the protagonist became the bishop's training target. The second point is the abandonment of the parents. The father is a middle-level leader of the CIA, but he does not care about his son. He seems to have some feelings for him after they met. Your logical design cannot be rounded off. The third point is the problem of wisdom. Without spiritual energy, how can he preserve his wisdom for a long time? On the contrary, other practitioners seem to have disappeared. The fourth point is the issue of combat power. The Holy See has made great efforts to cultivate talents or cannon fodder. In the civilized era of guns, would it really carry out training with such a high mortality rate? The trained samurai are already the world's top mercenaries. How come the protagonist has awakened his spiritual power and started cultivating immortality, but he is still garbage and is being hunted down. The fifth point is the existence of the Wang family. The Wang family is so powerful. Why is it that they are just a local emperor in a backward place? Shouldn't they go to the United States to become the overlord? The sixth point is scripting. I clearly feel that the bishop is trying to trick me, so he just goes up to him without accompanying me to solve the problem. The Pope is obviously the leader of a mortal sect and a powerful reformer. He died just for a scarab. His death is too inconspicuous. Especially in the age of the end of the law, scarabs cannot play their role and they will die sooner or later. The seventh point is, taking Zhisou to the forbidden area of ​​the Holy See to cause trouble, is this something that a person with a brain can do? The key protagonist is still a scumbag in terms of combat power, so let's just cause trouble. Why is it that the gods of the Holy See have descended from the gods? Doesn't it mean that there is no master with the power of faith? The one who descended was not an angel. The soulless world also killed this god. The eighth point is to go to the North Pole to find wolf blood. This is under harsh conditions and being hunted by the whole world. He knew clearly that he was being hunted, but he didn't want to find a way to solve it, so he went to fulfill his promise first. The ninth point is the enmity between the Wang family and the protagonist. Can a family with immortal cultivators be worthy of the medicine developed by mortals? Can't you still give warriors the internal training methods? Moreover, the protagonist of this prescription does not pay much attention to it, which means that it is not highly effective.

The writing style is very comfortable to read. It is narrative, nothing funny, and serious style. It reads like an old book from the past. It has many self-created settings. The background is an imaginary Western world and is more modern. The protagonist is a warrior trained by the Holy See. The power system is probably self-created, but it looks reasonable and similar to physical training. It can be seen that the author has put in the effort. I haven't written much at the moment, I'll talk about it later.