
Daoist Priest, Stop Fighting. the Avenue Is Almost Gone.
道长别打了,大道都快磨灭了
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- Completed
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- 2.4M Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Cultivation Civilization
- Updated
- 1y ago
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- Qidian
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[Yeluo Canteen] High Sweetness-Relaxation-Daily
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The Spiritual Food of Salted Fish
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After eighteen years of waiting for the system to travel through a strange world, I want to be invincible!
Popular recommendation: This is a imaginary novel about cultivating immortals. The work is mainly about time travel and the system. Through relatively daily plot descriptions, progress can be made through defeating demons and slaying demons, and the male protagonist's growth can be completed. The work is basically based on the writing style of imagination and humor. By describing the people and things around the male protagonist, it depicts a world view setting where monsters are rampant, people are unpredictable but the male protagonist is invincible. According to the introduction, there may be joys and sorrows later, which is worth looking forward to and recommending. Work panel: [Author] Yi Huowang [Bookmark] Time travel, system, cultivation of immortality [Rating]🌸🌸🌸🌸 Content review: I will test the novel, and review the good books here. Hello everyone, I am Jiang Liuer, an ordinary book friend. Let's get back to the book, today I bring you a new book with 130,000 words on the new book list. First of all, the author was attracted by the introduction. This book tells the story of the male protagonist who accidentally traveled through many years and was still unable to make any further progress when he was about to reach adulthood. Therefore, he became a scumbag and obtained the system after the death of his master. He completed progress by adding dark blue points and became invincible from then on. Secondly, it can be seen from the above plot that the male protagonist of the novel cannot practice quickly after traveling for many years. Until he obtains the system, he can also defeat demons and build monuments. Although there are some loopholes in the plot, you can still know whether this is a fairy tale, or a fairy tale with a world of evil. The description of the plot is mainly based on imagination, and this is what attracts the author the most. As for those flaws that are not covered up, they can actually be ignored in the face of the entire plot. In terms of characterization, the author mainly focuses on the male protagonist and his junior brothers. But the author still wants to say that except for the male protagonist and the second junior brother, the other characters are more like tool men. It is really a long story, but there are no memorable points. The two characters that I personally like the most are the male protagonist and the policeman. Of course, there is no need to say much about the male protagonist. The main focus is still on him. Although there is not much space about the policeman, his old-fashioned image and careful thoughts when facing the male protagonist are like the finishing touch, making this character very vivid and one of the points that makes the author interested in reading. Finally, the author knows from the known content that the work is actually a strange fairy tale that uses the system to provide ways to make up for the character's lack of ability, highlighting the novel's cool points. And by slaying demons again and again, the reaction becomes better. The author's work is qualified in terms of story and is worth recommending. {"TopicId":"804728532092780544","TopicName":"Book Famine Terminator"}
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The example is uncomfortable. Say goodbye.
Just write it well, and you have to write about controversial events. The ending of "The Place in My Heart That Has Not yet Broken" contains E6 (piano meter), which is clearly written on the score. This year I went to six shows, three with watch recordings and four with mobile phone recordings. In short, I don't like self-certification traps. This year, the Bird's Nest opened ten games, and Shanghai, the center of the storm, even opened eleven games, which is quite illustrative.
Can you stop growing in height? 2 Meters is enough😓. Adding a little more height is an old trick and has been written badly🥴
Why is this book so popular? I just read dozens of them, high-quality and refreshing articles for beginners. At least it has a score of 7. Those who think it is rubbish should recommend at least the novels written by disciples on their own homepage.
Yi Daochang Jing! Jin Jin Jin Jin! ! ! ! !
Tied overnight, 7.5 Points, high-quality grain.
The first thing I have to admit is that this book is indeed very white, and it is indeed very enjoyable. But he is very organized and logical. First of all, in the early mid-week, the protagonist encountered conspiracies twice. Once he was at home, and once he was Xiaoyao Wang. But they will all be discovered. Although people who come here will still be tricked, at least they found out. Unlike some novels, where the villain is about to detonate a nuclear bomb, the official doesn't even know the damn thing. Another point is the master's teachings to the protagonist. Or persuasion. The protagonist has been complying. Although it sounds a bit nonsense, the protagonist is indeed very restrained. It is also rare to find such a protagonist with a bottom line. If you look at the rankings now, it's harder to find a protagonist with a bottom line than a tmd virgin. Of course there are shortcomings, too frequent psychological descriptions. It's a mess, and I've gone astray as I write. I guess the author was overjoyed. There are also some plot designs that are too far-fetched, as well as writing problems. But these can all be practiced. To add a little extra chatter, someone like the author is actually a mature author. The stories he writes can make people immerse themselves in it, and can make people imagine that there is indeed such a world where such stories are happening. The reason why a large number of authors have poor results in writing. It's because they themselves don't believe the stories they write. The mysterious point is a sense of belief, and they don't have that sense of belief. For example, to get back to the subject, his first Li Changshou had good grades, and he also wrote well. He himself believed that there was such a story, and he was very happy to write it, and it became obvious to him later. I feel guilty, and I no longer have that sense of belief. The two books I wrote cannot be said to be a hit, but they can only be said to be untrue.
…((Low-match) Advantages: It is fun to play, and the story is told fluently. It is better than the young literary author who has good writing but the story is fluent but the plot is disgusting. It is better than the novel with "gorgeous" vocabulary and the story is not told fluently. Disadvantages: The combat power collapses too quickly, the story details are inferior to rolling, and the combat power rolls up too smoothly, like diarrhea. If you say go away and your combat power collapses, go away and don't reply. If you say your combat power collapses, you say it was carefully designed and it didn't collapse. Go away, the daily disposable supporting character in the book that people dislike is printed toilet paper, which is slightly memorable; the daily disposable supporting character in this book has basically no memorable points, but the supporting character in the Yakuza version is not important, so it doesn't matter. The excessive smoothness of the combat power roll means that the protagonist has never suffered any setbacks. In the story of Get Out, the protagonist suffers a lot. He is on thin ice at the beginning, only to rise again after a few days, and the rhythm is more attractive. The protagonist of this book is too smooth. I skipped any technique with any number of crimson dots. Anyway, it just stabilized half of the opponent's head. Opponents whose combat power was much higher than the protagonist's were unable to see the protagonist's face-riding output like NT. When the protagonist's combat power caught up, he said, "Oh, did you kid mock me before? I have realized it now, so I'll punch you twice first and then you can kill me." In short, it's a difficulty setting like diarrhea, and it's far away. But go away, the topics of the recent books are not attractive, I like this one better. In short, Shuhuang can be read, it can be enjoyable, and it doesn't require using your brain, but I don't want to pursue it.
Uncomfortable 😣
Why do you want to include that girl from the Hehuan sect? It's too abrupt I can't figure it out. Isn't it too bad to be with the junior master? At least there is a foreshadowing I haven't seen anything since the Hehuan sect, and I feel like I've eaten a piece of shit. It's really uncomfortable Hey!
I would like to give some advice, if you are a big muscle tyrant, it would be better if you are more pure. The peachy smell is too strong and it is annoying to look at. There are women everywhere you go.
These battles of wits don't have that flavor. Since the beginning of the book, they have been all about overwhelming others. Why did they start to calculate? They seem to be the same thing.
So verbose
Battle scenes, talking to oneself, all kinds of verbosity
It's not bad, but there are too many bad memes, and there are too many Internet vocabulary. A few words that pop up at the right time are very good, but too many of them are small poisonous points, and they are the kind of small poisonous points that can be accumulated.
I just saw where the pet eggs are
I thought I had taken a supplement, but it hatched. This is a small point. Books like Dajiba emphasize that all great power belongs to oneself Having a pet also requires resources to cultivate it It is a waste of time I saw later that it was said to stay in the sect as a bodyguard. This explanation is acceptable It depends on whether there is much plot behind the pet. If it is too much, it is better to eat it directly
The author is so interesting. Chaozi book
The male protagonist is a muscular man over two meters tall, and there is no female protagonist. You need to consider whether to enter the trap. The plot is good but the sense of substitution is lacking. None of the novels about "Go away" have the male protagonist as tall as this, and there is a female protagonist in the novel about "Go away." And this novel is a novel about impotence of a eunuch without a heroine, and only has an occasional touch of obscenity. If there hadn't been a novel like Crimson Get Out, I would have given up reading it.
The writing is very good. Come on, author. When will the protagonist awaken his substitute?
You don't have to watch it if you don't like it
If you like the sissy male protagonist who is 1.61 Meters tall and 7 meters tall, you can go see Qing Yu Nian. Those who like Mr. Zhou as their role model can watch Xinwen Lianbo. If you think you will be the elite of the Chinese Academy of Sciences after graduation, please stay away from us ds
Although it is a bit rubbish to say that it is a waste of life to keep spending your life. But I still give you the monthly pass. Because the enemies are all beaten to pieces, haha.
Almost meaningless!
Now that I have read about 100 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. To be honest, the author's writing skills are quite good. The characters are very likable in the early stage, their words are humorous, and there are many jokes. It is very enjoyable to read. And I decided on the current main story line early, character conflicts, dungeon stories, etc., And flexibly connected them together, but I don't know why the more I read, the less interesting I am, and now it has no appeal. I personally think that there are several reasons. First, the realm of cultivation is not clear, and there is no concept of whether the protagonist is strong or weak. This is a chain reaction. If your realm ability is not clear, there will be no sense of immersion in the fight. At the beginning, there is the pleasure of adding dark blue points, but it becomes more and more boring after that! The character portraits are too poor. They are almost all for jokes and humor. There are no details of the real characters' behavior, the charm of the characters themselves, etc. As a result, the other characters are not realistic at all and have no charm at all. They are completely leftovers for the protagonist! But it's so easy to get bored just reading about one person in a novel! Finally, I still hope that the author can focus on writing characters while using humor and tricks, so that the quality of the novel can be improved to a higher level, so I will withdraw it first!
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Recently, there is a shortage of books, so I accidentally discovered this treasure. The author's writing style is quite good. Compared with ordinary cool novels, the protagonist is not brainless, has an online IQ, is affectionate and meaningful, and is worth collecting.
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Has the author ever been chased or frightened?
Wangzi, when will the new book be released? Brothers are all looking forward to it.
It's been several months, why haven't I updated the novel yet?
Hurry up and learn more 😂 More chapters It's great
It looks good, I love reading it, I will update more. I just love to see Tao grow strong, strong, strong
Wangzi, where did the new book go? ? ?
Damn it, why is he missing?
It was really fun to write, but why are my grades so bad?