Live Forever in the World of Mortals

I have to say that this longevity book is very good and can be said to be outstanding among its kind. In terms of plot promotion, it not only has the calmness and smoothness of the classic longevity novel routine, but also can effectively stop losses in time before stepping on the poison, which satisfies the reading needs of most readers as much as possible. Looking at it as a whole, although the plot sequence of the first ten chapters is a bit stiff and the details are not perfect, in the later stages it gradually becomes smoother, the writing becomes more concise and skillful, and the climax plot is masterfully grasped. Finally, in terms of length, I can only say complete! No! Enough! Look!

I am also an old bookworm who has read hundreds of novels. Regarding the immortality of the protagonist, its plot almost made me cry three times. The last time I felt this way was when I chased the poor ghost for two thousand years and chased hundreds of chapters. The loneliness was so vivid that I don't want this kind of good book to be buried by the cliches. Come on, I will wait until your finale.

I'm done chasing. Update quickly. Ordinary life is the only way to live forever.

After reading three pictures, the fighting force was so strong, I knew it was another poisonous book, so I came out and read the comments, there are so many poisonous points, bye bye

Don't you know that if you build a giant panda, you will have to poison a lot of people?

When I first saw the giant panda, I felt it was so inconsistent that I couldn't stand it anymore.

In this kind of immortality novel, why do people always argue about whether the protagonist should find a woman? Just write it like this next time. The protagonist finds out that he is immortal, cuts off his son with a knife, and says: "I am already immortal, what is the use of my son!" In this way, no one will argue. Those who don't like women can continue reading, and those who like women can just abandon the book and everyone will be happy.

This kind of eunuch literature is so anti-human and disgusting

Articles that imitate tomatoes, I am a cow, you are a giant panda

I found that in many longevity questions, the protagonist becomes inaction, which is the inaction of Lao Tzu. He doesn't care about anything, does nothing, and just waits and sees what happens. Since you want to wait and see what happens, why do you enter the game? Since you are already in the game, what's the use of waiting and watching what happens, playing in the world? Wow! The game of gods does not break the common rules in the world, and breaking the rules will become a sinful evil way. This kind of writing is a prehistoric version. You can't make a TV series by doing nothing, and the second reader will feel aggrieved after reading it. Are you here to write for fun or to make money? To make money, you write something like this, and you won't buy it after reading it. After all, there are many articles like yours on the market now.

I wonder, are you just being stubborn? You can either be a heartless person and live happily, or you can control everything by yourself and just stay behind. Are you a fire-fighting hero like this?

This kind of book is most likely a studio book. Most book friends pointed out the error in the introduction that "the car is the same as the text, the book is the same track", and the first few chapters are full of mistakes and plug-in settings. For example, in the first chapter, attribute points were easily obtained and fifteen years later, only a few attribute points were obtained. The author did not give feedback or answers. It's obvious that either the author is amusing himself or it's a studio article and he's too busy.

The front is okay, but the back is severely fragmented. It doesn't look like it was written by one person. The back is just a piece of shit.

Judging from the works, the character of the protagonist is not very good.

How should I put it? I've seen the same type before, but that one came with an old cow.

This introduction, come on, tell me, cars share the same text, books share the same track, what is this? ! ! Grass!

Isn't this just like the novel about the time-traveling boy who is bound to a buffalo for immortality, and then slowly adds some attributes?

Nowadays, it is easy to write about immortality because there is no theme. It is interesting at first, but later it is just like a running account. The purpose of longevity has no purpose. It is just thinking of the word "gou", but it has no meaning. People live like turtles, so does immortality have meaning? So the author doesn't know what to write as he writes. This book is the same, it has no content

When I read Chapter 85, it was annoying to watch a small country with only three cities and a hundred miles in radius. They were doing a lot of things all day long.

This book is for children of what age, right? Everyone, can you see it?

I can't read more than two hundred chapters. The plot is completely broken. Is the ending of Beiliang written by a retarded person?

I haven't read the book, but this introduction has a strong sense of contradiction. What does your immortality mean? Have you been farming? Become a hermit with no desires? What is the difference between you and a lump of stone? If this kind of immortality really reaches a certain level, it will immediately create an earthly immortal dynasty or a religious state that combines politics and religion. It will become a god and ancestor myth, search for all resources by itself, establish a promotion order, and live a long and prosperous life.

After Beiliang, you can abandon the book. Later, it feels like the AI ​​automatically generates the wrong words.

After reading Chapter 62, I really couldn't stand it. The two big plots were all about the author insisting that the protagonist should be stubborn, so he let the supporting characters make everything into a mess, and then the protagonist came out to clean up the mess. But it ended in just one or two chapters. Is it because I want to have a high court and you can't do it? It's too poisonous. This author's material is shocking to the public.

Panda, why didn't you say you were Ximen Hei Niu?

Just look at Beiliang and don't waste money by looking behind.

It feels like the AI ​​automatically generates it starting from chapter 30, and it keeps talking about chariots, a lot of narrations, and exclamations. Alas, the world is declining, and people's hearts are not as old as they used to be.

I suggest you give up. What kind of thing is this? Immortality cannot be suppressed like this. It's 15 years, only 7 attributes and a few skills. What a mess later.

As long as you have no CP, we are good friends

What is this last paragraph about? Messy