Versatile Mage: Devour the Awakening Stone at the Beginning

I don't like the so-called not dismantling the CP. It's just to cater to some readers and write a book for the sake of writing a book. If you really travel to another world, the so-called not seizing the opportunity and not breaking the CP are just nonsense. In order to survive, in order to live better. Seizing the opportunity and seizing the heroine is just the most basic thing! ! !

Is there Mu Ningxue as the heroine? I think falling in love is not conducive to Mo Fan's cultivation. After all, Mo Fan still has to save the world. How can he be disturbed by these irrelevant things? The protagonist can bear all the suffering 🤭

The writing is very good. This is the first time I have seen this idea and Golden Finger. It is very novel. However, can the author add Mu Ningxue as the heroine?

Are there still generals Shaoxu, Irene, Heidi, and Nanjue who won't be accepted?

I beg the author to let the protagonist awaken the spiritual system, curse system, water system and ice system. These systems are very important in the later stage, but there don't seem to be many people writing about them.

Don't worry about the heroine Tang Yue. I'm tired of watching it. She has become the exclusive woman for the protagonists of all French fan fiction. Tang Yue has the best guide, which can be said to be given directly for free. Chao He, the matchmaker of all the protagonists of the French fan fiction, has made a great contribution. He has used countless kilograms of love potions, died countless times, and helped many fan protagonists.

There will be a fusion function later, there are too many abilities to remember Similar passive skills can be directly fused: toughness + wolf's body + diamond body + strong flexibility + spring breeze blowing again + enhanced blood = sacred body. Fire resistance + lightning resistance + poison resistance = elemental resistance. Active skills can be directly integrated into the magic system. Flying sand and stones are equal to wind and earth fusion magic, and wind blades are directly added to the wind system. Functional abilities can be listed separately, which are metaphors for independent awakening, collection and integration of residual souls, and acceleration of cultivation.

This book I wrote is so beautiful, come and read it! !

Many fans can't stand it because there are so many weirdos licking Mu Ningxue and Xinxia, ​​and each one of them asked the author to add a harem in their comments. I'm really speechless.

I have read many Quanfa fanfics, and now I have been chasing the White Tiger Pendant. These two books by Mo Fan and his sister mentioned a few common points of outstanding Quanfa fanfics. The author can refer to them: 1. The protagonist must be able to show off, not in small fights in competitions or in front of the original heroine. It's a real show-off in a big scene, like the one in the original book where Ye Fan opens the demon system. 2. If you have an excellent original plot, you can follow the main line of the original work, but do not follow the rhythm of the original work. It is best to have your own complete and real outline. For example, the main character in White Tiger Pendant did not stop school for a year at all, but was directly recruited through special connections. Enroll a year earlier, get resources a year earlier, and enter the Three-Step Tower. Isn't this nice? When Mo Fan entered school, the protagonist was already the student council president of the college, and there were a lot of original plots interspersed throughout the year. In Mo Fan's sister's book, the protagonist is three or four years older than Mo Fan. From the university setting to the protagonist's experience, and even the plot of the government (the protagonist is Mo Fan's previous government), everything is original. 3. When you know the plot, you should make full use of the advantage of foresight. Don't be afraid of grabbing Mo Fan's resources. You are the author, and you can arrange other resources for Mo Fan. And as long as the protagonist grows much faster than Mo Fan, he doesn't care about Mo Fan's resources at all. 4. The settings of the golden finger should be carefully considered and should not be too flashy. For example, what element is controlled? You already have this name, why not just set it to improve the magic control level of this system, which allows the protagonist to have high-level fields, super-level transcendental power, etc. In advance, so that the protagonist can completely create all kinds of magic by himself, without having to draw it from the monster at all. What is drawn from the monster will not be used in front of outsiders. 5. The settings must be rigorous. Be sure to read the original work more often. The obvious differences between fan fiction and the original work can easily become poisonous points: For example, you said before that the remnant soul cannot be killed! ! This is nonsense. For example, all magic in the curse system attacks the soul. How come the demon's soul is not a soul? Another example is that a little guy in Bo City actually had a full-body magic weapon! ! Still the kind that can withstand the protagonist's red ray for a long time! ! Even if it is just the processing fee for this kind of thing, it is calculated in tens of millions. Even if he is an intermediate mage, if he has this money, why can't he allocate some spiritual seeds to himself? It's obvious that the author forced it on himself and wanted to add an extra chapter. There are more than two similar points. In short, before you sit behind you and write, you must think more about your design. Is it reasonable? And many of the settings of the full-time mage also have flaws. For example, there is no complete description of the top ten masters. How strong the Roof of the World is is not stated in detail, so you have to complete it yourself.       ，，，， What I said may not be entirely correct, but I hope there is something that can be helpful to the author.

All French is a high school memory, an old book that is unfinished. What you wrote is not bad, but it is too white. We are destined to meet each other, and the monthly tickets are given to me. The mountains are high and the rivers are long. I wish my little brother's new book a great sale!

Regarding the Golden-Crowned Peacock, I seem to have really written about it. I just added three paragraphs to the second half of Chapter 15, roughly explaining why the Golden-Crowned Peacock is so weak. When writing a book for the first time, there may be many problems, and I will work hard to correct them! ! Thank you all book friends for your support! ! !

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When I saw Di Shengquan, I was about to say that the writing was pretty good, but I was immediately shocked when the protagonist joined the trial meeting. What would he do if there was a system to join the trial meeting? After eating too much, he had to put chains on himself. He followed the old bad street routine again and retreated.

I wouldn't approve of the heroine without Yanshi 😌

The description is too brief and lacks depth.

I'm thinking, can people in this world be trained into elixirs👿