The Road to Immortality

Another thing to say, don't open it too high, otherwise it will collapse. . . . . .

The writing is as chaotic as the author constantly changing his mind and outline.

From listening to reading, I feel that it is really good to enter the country. The friendly atmosphere is harmonious. Many readers will definitely like it. Nowadays, people prefer peace. There is no overpowering plot of revenge! Come on Xiao Shu, I like this story, it feels good to watch, I don't like hatred and ugly people doing bad things.

It's a bit bland. Even if this book comes out later, I'm afraid it won't be very good.

Is a tiger at the seventh level of Qi training not as valuable as a person at the third level of Qi training? You say that a sect-building sect doesn't have a single spell?

Come on

I am a reader of Zinba00 By the way, why doesn't the author recommend the new work to the readers of the old work? If I hadn't suddenly wanted to check out your updates today I wouldn't have known you had published a new book.

The pig's trotter in my current story is called Shen Chi, and the next one will be Qi Ji, 😄! Finally released a new book, come on! Xiao Shu

Finished? Congratulations, the flower sprinkling is completed👍👍

Not bad, but too bland. I hope the author can work harder.

Opened a new book? Congratulations😰

I wonder if there is a female protagonist? Please give me an accurate answer

I suggest you read what the author said. Whether you change it or not is up to you. I pointed it out in the chapter. There is also a chapter where the main character is in a daze while fighting monsters in Chapter 7. Let's change that too.