Marvel: Control the Dark Energy and Become a Super Villain

I probably understand why your grades are so bad. There are too many daily plots. What you want to see is rivers of blood and decisive killing. You, Dr. Lizard, have already written half a hundred chapters. I can't imagine how long it will take you to write other villains.

Someone reported... The previous plot was changed... It's all the author's fault. The author will never write any plots about children again! If you write again, I will be sb! ! ! My heart is so tired... Writing this kind of novel is so painful... After this one is finished, I will definitely write a farming novel in my next one! I will never write this type of book again... …………

That Spider-Man anime that was shown many times on children's channels before? Black Cat, Madam Spider, Water-Man Mary Jane, and many other classic villains.

In fact, many people don't really like the dark novels, they just hate the Madonna and the licking dog. However, except for the dark novels, most novels like to write the protagonists are the Madonna and the licking dog. In the same way, most people don't like the Madonna protagonist, not because they hate the Madonna, but because they don't have a sense of substitution. You asked me to devote my heart and soul to strangers and risk my life to save strangers. This is unrealistic from any angle. It's not that such people do not exist in the world, but that I am not this kind of person.

Give the protagonist a picture

It feels like you, the villain, don't have any sense of beauty. You do evil simply for system mission rewards. Don't you feel like an ordinary killer? And if it's a casual, killing-and-killing style, and the protagonist is not invincible, it would be very depressing.

Eight Demons, Cthulhu version.

The villain is just a villain, it doesn't matter, you demon is weak enough to be okay, unless that's how you set it up. Because from your introduction, I didn't see anything about the first volume, and I don't know the setting. The demons in Jackie Chan's Adventures are not so weak. He is just a weakling when faced with righteousness. The most important thing is that the righteous energy suppresses the demonic energy too hard, so it appears weak. You have two abilities here. You can die if you hit a nuclear bomb. It's funny. The demon in the same adventure was so suppressed by the positive energy that he still couldn't be killed and could only be sealed. The eight demons represent 8 omnipotences or 8 rules.

I find that many people can't distinguish between anti-heroes and villains. Let me make a distinction here: Super anti-heroes: They are both good and evil. They are not very bound by the law, but they will restrain themselves with their own morality. They have a certain moral bottom line and a little bottom line as a person. Examples: Catwoman, Punisher, Venom... Super villains: almost no morals, almost no bottom line, completely unrestrained by the law. Maybe some villains have things they care about, such as relatives, lovers, power, strength, or a certain superhero, they will do it for what they care about. As they move forward, they will also be greedy for life and afraid of death, bully the weak and fear the strong, and be crazy or crazy, but these are not the reasons why they are called super villains. They are called super villains because they have extraordinary strength or power and have brought unspeakable tragic impact to others or the world! Examples: Joker, Kingpin, Green Devil...

This type of protagonist is difficult to write and is easily bitten by some people. I hope you can persevere.

Since it is written as a protagonist, becoming a villain must have its own charm. If there is no charm, it will just be pure scum and unappetizing

The magic in the Marvel universe has its own owner. Unless you create a magic that does not exist at all. For example, in the Kamen Rider series, there is a phantom that was born out of despair. The essence of the eight demons is attribute magic and black magic. They have long been occupied by Sissos. If the protagonist messes up like this, he will definitely die if someone comes to ask for debt.

The introduction should be talking about this version, with pictures for the protagonist.

The eight demons are intelligent, but they were worn out in hell and only their instincts remain. If you just use the worn demons, no wonder it doesn't work. The demons in their heyday were very strong.

The main character is just a punk with no brains. Being led by the system. Black energy is just a matter of strength and no brains.

As far as dark literature is concerned, your book is also unqualified. But writing a dark novel is not just about dirty means, the protagonist is still the core of the book. Yes, even a third-rate supervillain is still a supervillain, so why do you think he was reduced to a third-rate character? To put it bluntly, they are not distinctive enough and the audience does not like them. How is it different from the protagonist of your book? It is not that there are no good dark novels. For example, "Dragon of Infinite Evolution" is still a masterpiece in the hearts of many people (it turned out that it could not be written, which is really a pity) When the protagonist is not distinctive enough, then the protagonist will just become a crumb. Let's put it this way, you will know if you compare Dior and Muzan Kibutsuji. Or you can compare the super villains in Marvel that can be written in Chinese novels with the third-rate villains that few people know about in Qidian novels. Characters can be completely bad or not completely bad, they can bully the weak and fear the strong, but they must definitely have personal charm. In the past, the protagonists in some novels were not to mention bullying the weak and fearing the strong, and were subjected to human experimentation and torture. There are even massacres of cities and planets (and the descriptions are very detailed. I went there very clearly. The details of the massacre of the city are actually six chapters. Please note that this is a pure massacre of the city and not the massacre of the strong). But they write well. They don't seek personal charm. Their characters are like Dio's, but not like Kibutsuji Muzan's? As you said, a third-rate super villain is also a super villain, but why did he become a third-rate super villain?

After reading this, I'm not surprised that I was reported 😰

I changed the name, and finally many people read it, woo woo woo (crying) The author would like to say here that he has a deep understanding of the protagonist's apparent indecisiveness! In the future plots, I don't think this problem will happen again! Please feel free to watch! If you think there is anything wrong, you can leave a message below this comment! Here, thank you all in advance for your opinions on the author! Thank you all!

Nowadays, the dark genre is really out of date. Many of them are not as good as Lezi's writing, and the audience is also small. Most of them are just anti-routine white writings, with almost no highlights other than following the trend of killing and killing. Those who write well are those who describe the darkness of world society. The writing and plot are good, but the protagonist can only kill and kill.

Those who are shouting to report in the comment area can just ignore them. If you like to watch it or not, report it or report it. Others will not stop reporting you just because you are miserable. They read the profile tag and know it is a dark style video, but they still want to click in to read it. It already shows the problem. The classic messenger of justice, the more you ignore them, the happier they will be. They will either ignore it or delete the comment. Also, the first volume has been greatly revised. Can we create an original version for mass distribution?

Plant picture

I feel that the setting of the protagonist is completely unattractive. He obviously has a secret room where he can play love and kill, but his behavior is no different from that of a gangster, except that the pistol is replaced by a grab. You can also play many Uncle Saw games, such as Spider-Man opening the door and triggering the mechanism to kill the Lizard Man's family. The protagonist is just a petty and violent person, without high IQ or good use of strength.

Strictly speaking, only the Holy Lord has the demeanor of a devil, then the others are just like fools, and only Ximu can use some tricks.

Protagonist picture

The protagonist is named after a sanitary napkin

Why is it so messed up? The author will come out and give me an explanation.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the writing is above the standard, the characterization and plot rhythm are even better. I can call it excellent. Overall, it is very good. The only thing is that the behavior of the protagonist is really not in line with my three views, and there is no sense of substitution at all. I just want to skip to the next paragraph, and then continue to the next one ಥ_ಥ Readers who can't continue reading, please continue, I will continue to look for books 🙏

I like the Shadow Troops the most in Jackie Chan's Adventures. Should the author make a mask to summon the Shadow Troops 🙂

Peter Parker

There is also a picture for the heroine, the silly and sweet heroine