American Comics: Super Sentinel

The driving force of the protagonist's actions in the early stage is too poisonous. The end of the world is coming soon. He is being chased by Laughter. Moreover, he has just experienced a life-and-death battle. The protagonist acts for money. . . . . Other American comic book protagonists pursue money in the early stage because the environment is relatively stable and money is still useful. Is money still useful in your situation? Even if you are pursuing power, you are stronger than this. I know you want to write that the protagonist has gained power but his mentality has not changed. Spectrum, I know that in order to write a Bat plot, you have to deal with the Bat Family, and the only outstanding point of the Bat Family is money, but it is very poisonous. You can write that the protagonist asks Ah Fu for some equipment, or you can write that the Bat Family gave the protagonist a lot of gold bars. Gold bars are very vulgar, but a large amount of gold bars affects the protagonist's ordinary mentality and makes him temporarily violate his idea of ​​wanting to escape. This is also a solution. The only way to sign a contract with how many shares is the worst one.

If you don't look carefully, the transition will be messy And then you always ask the system to do something, especially when Chapter 23 is about to be teleported away, you shout "system" crazily! ! This feeling is not burning, it feels like self-excitement, like when Cyborg was dismantling the mother box, the person he originally shouted should be Superman, but it turned out to be Doraemon🤤🤤🤤

The writing is very messy, with a hammer here and a stick here and there. Your book really won't last long if you write like this, and what you're writing is Sentinel. I don't expect you to be as powerful as you were before, but don't be too overwhelmed. As a result, your template still uses percentages to reflect combat power, not to mention not many people will like it. Readers will just think that you are suppressing combat power and then leave. I'm destined to read your book again.

I've always felt that making a second creation based on this kind of big brawl is like carving something out of a shithole. For the reader, it is simply a Cthulhu-like contamination of their rational thinking.

Self-titled article, the plot is very messy 😅

Comics are directly suspended, and your golden finger can only open to 1.33%. You can't write a book if you don't stress your fighting ability?

1.41, There are more than 10,000 suns in the body, you are so scared that you laugh wildly, this protagonist is too cowardly

This is my first time writing an American comic book fanfic. I may not have written the power contained in the Million Stars template and the performance it brings to the protagonist, and I have to consider it carefully. Thank you for your pointers in the comment area. I will pay more attention to it in subsequent updates. Please continue to support this book. Thank you. 🙏🙏🙏

Reality modification and molecular manipulation are the real abilities of the Sentinels. Abilities such as thousands of stars, millions of stars, and billions of stars are all based on reality modification and molecular manipulation, and even nothingness is only the product of the Sentinel's modification of reality.

How to prove that one percent of infinity is not infinite

The writing is too messy, and some things are not very good in the first place (the Loki drama). I had been putting up with it, but when I saw Time Administration, it was completely boring. I skipped it and it became even more messy and boring.

The Sentinels have more than the power of millions of stars, they are essentially reality warpers.

My brain doesn't support me reading this novel, it's a bit knotted

What kind of thing? You don't know them. If you want to leave, you can just walk for a long time. Come on, you are a sentinel. Can ordinary people stop you? I've been gone for several chapters and I haven't left yet. I've been comparing myself to each other. What the hell?

It feels like a mess, here and there, and here and there

Now DC as a whole passes through the normal Thor box first

After reading it, I briefly commented that the author's writing skills are pretty good, at least it's not the kind that makes people look embarrassed and dig their toes on the ground. However, the plot feels too messy, as if the author wrote it wherever he thought. Every plot, even if it is temporarily away from a world, feels a bit anticlimactic. I hope the author can polish the plot a little more. I am personally very interested in The Power of Millions of Stars. Unfortunately, there are too few people writing about Sentinel on the Internet. I hope the author can work hard. If nothing happens, I will continue to pursue it. I hope the author can finish it.

Well written, can you support each other with comments?

I haven't watched it yet, but I'm curious whether the protagonist's millions of stars are just a setting or if he really has this ability. If so, the entire earth can be evaporated, right?

The reading is not very smooth, and the writing feels a bit messy. I hope it will be better in the future.

It is not recommended for ordinary book lovers to watch. Unless you are a loyal fan of American comics, it will be really confusing.

Come on! Come on! Come on! Come on!

Why write a system and just give it a hang? To be honest, 98% of the system writing is brainless writing. Only a few can read it. Most of it is a big hang-up, just like playing King of Kings and beating the bronze round without coming back. Most American comics are written as nannies for the protagonists of the original novels, or they are either mindless pretentiousness, or they directly copy the original novels, or the villains in the original novels are so smart that they easily crash the system. The hook is so powerful that millions of stars will be born in a few years. In a few years, God will be punched and Superman kicked. Also, if you don't explain the origin of the system, the time-traveling belt system will make people think of a conspiracy, right? Traveling through the inherently abnormal system of the earth with billions of people, the protagonist was chosen and he was the illegitimate son of God. Shuangwen doesn't need to go into details but it must be consistent with common sense.

Author, I kind of want to ask now, where did Harley Quinn, who ran into the Marvel Universe with the protagonist, go? Is she a long-term character, or is she just a short-term role that needs to be brought in for the plot?