Open up the World in Journey to the West

I finished reading all the chapters today, and judging from the reading experience of more than ten years: 1. The power of this book is basically about to collapse. The worldview is too much and too big in the front, and it is weak in the later stage. Many books written in this way are basically eunuchs 2. The storyline is just for my own pleasure, and the supporting characters are regarded as fools. For example, the Tianmen promoted, the Tianmen trained by the fairy boy himself can actually be promoted to a magic weapon. Can't Patriarch Bodhi see it? When Wukong carried away Tianmen, all fools knew there was something wrong. How could so many immortals and gods not notice it when they were always staring at Sun Wukong? The author did not fill in these unreasonable plots. 3. As the way of heaven in the world, if you don't sense the invasion of alien ways at the first time, how can you let it go? What if we don't take any countermeasures? 4. The protagonist boasts, has messy skills, and is too greedy for quick success. Even if the fake exercises become true in other people's world, the power will be reduced. How can it go beyond that? 5. The author can optimize these unreasonable places, reorganize the force values ​​​​and skills in the book, shrink the world view, and gradually reveal more of the world as the plot develops, so that it will be more attractive. Now it's really shameful to rush all the people to show off. 6. The character portrayal is too popular and has no characteristics. In fact, if the brothers on Fangcun Mountain are well portrayed, they will definitely be a selling point. I hope the author will work harder and update more, don't be eager for quick success, and be more patient in shaping the characters and plots, so that the IQs of the supporting characters and villains can also be improved. It is difficult for beginners to read novels without IQ at the beginning. It has to be distinctive. The creativity of this book is good, so I insisted on reading it.

I don't know why writers who write about Journey to the West always like to define Sun Wukong as a demon clan. He is obviously an innate divine being created by the heaven and earth. According to Honghuangliu, he is an innate god and demon. How can he be called a demon if he has not joined the demon clan? Taking traditional mythology as an example, there is no such thing as a "monster clan" at all. The distinction between demons and immortals is actually a distinction between good and evil rather than a distinction between races. Those who are aliens who achieve enlightenment and do good are also immortals, and human practitioners who do evil are also demons. To put it bluntly, "demon" is a purely derogatory term.

Horror and shock are two words that are used too much. Everything else is fine.

Write a different Journey to the West, write a different prehistoric era. The protagonist wants to open up all the novels he read in his previous life into a real world. This should be the biggest highlight of this book. Readers, if you have traveled through time, you can also give it a try. If I succeed, give me a world where I can be the world leader.

Is the monkey's understanding so outrageous? If you just describe the effect of the technique, he will be able to understand the method of cultivation on his own. Then you might as well show him Tom and Jerry. The monkey should be able to understand Tom's immortality technique on his own. After all, Tom is actually demonstrating how to not die. Bullshit.

As soon as I see the monkey blowing, I leave immediately

This book is so readable that it rubs the reader's intelligence to the ground. Patriarch Bodhi, what kind of existence can't see whether you have spiritual intelligence? The protagonist's character keeps falling, and his aura of intelligence is full.

In fact, I really wanted to keep reading because of the subject matter, but the previous content was really unbearable. The biggest poisonous point was why I was always worried that my intelligence would be discovered. 1: Do you really think you can hide the fact that you were born with spiritual wisdom? Do you really think of Bodhi as that kind of pseudo-immortal who only practices rubbish and destructive power? It's at his home. Doesn't he know everything about the situation at home? 2: There is no reason to worry about exposing spiritual intelligence. Who would erase the spiritual intelligence born from their own fairy weapon? Are you not happy that my things have evolved? This is Journey to the West, not Xiao Huan Xi. If it were Xiao Huan Xi World, if my family became a spirit, I would call the police directly. If you don't change the big poisonous point in front of you, you will dissuade a group of people. I will correct it first. If the author changes it, I hope some kind people will give me a kick.

It's all nonsense and no logic at all.

The realm is confusing, the combat power is confusing, the logic is confusing, this book collapsed!

In the first chapter alone, this 4-5-7-8-meter figure is simply ridiculous. If there really is a mythical world, the real bodies of those practitioners are probably bigger than the Milky Way. If you use meters to describe it, it looks like garbage at first glance.

Even the real Gate of Eternity is just an incomplete mastery of 3000 avenues, and it cannot be compared with the supreme prehistoric world. If there is the Mythical Da Luo Jinxian, there will be a mythical world. For example, Wukong is also the projection of the Myth Da Luo's Wukong.

Why is he another one claiming to be a god?

All kinds of nonsense, hydrology, and descriptions of mythological immortals and above are also poorly written. They are not qualified to deceive powerful people. If they are not changed, this book will be useless.

There is no logic. It is just like building a high-rise building without laying a foundation. As for the exercises, I am wondering about the power, right? Give me a name and describe it, and you can practice it. Can you show him the three body and he can rub the water with his hands?

Can you see it? This introduction is so silly that I dare not read it. The author doesn't think the thing on the top of his head is very handsome, right?

If the human race doesn't give you a few benefits, it will only be given to the demon clan, and the benefits will be given to some demon clan. I don't ask you to be a cow or a horse for the human race after time travel, or to help the human race, but you don't cause trouble to the human race. No matter it is the journey to the west or the background of the ancient times, humans and demons are incompatible and are mortal enemies. You are so crazy about giving benefits to the demons.

The writing is all about nonsense, and the following writing has no preface and follow-up. Was it written by Ai? It is recommended to subscribe with caution!

It doesn't have the flavor of Journey to the West, or the flavor of prehistoric times. Instead, it has the flavor of fantasy.

You can see it earlier, see Chapter 35, teach six monsters. Abandoned. I can only say that the saints still have the final say. Can those monsters keep this secret? If the saint finds out, will he come to skin Wukong and cramp him? A saint cannot be counted as Wukong, and he cannot be counted as a Bull Demon King? Frontfoot just told him not to pass it on to others, and Wukong was passed on to six monster brothers in the author's writing. The laughter broke out. In the original Journey to the West, after Wukong became a master, he did not say that his master was the Patriarch Bodhi. What a failure.

The opening is so bad, it's too watery

You are the first book that makes me want to vomit before I read it

Are you the one who teaches people like this? Let me show you a video of the lithography machine working. Can you rub the lithography machine by hand?

The logic is really confusing and I can't even watch it without watching it.

The logic is too confusing, and there is a lot of water. One page has 4,000 words, and I just can't understand what you wrote!

The biggest bug in this book is the world it opens up? Are there any characters in the world you open? Otherwise, you just write about Journey to the West and I don't even need to click in and look at the table of contents.

Just help the monster race, not the human race? If it was prehistoric, the demon clan would kill a lot of people

On June 3, 2024, the eunuch was sent, and the eunuch did not dare to say anything. Was it because there was an accident in reality? Writing books is a high-risk industry. Hope people are still alive. If you send it, please let me know, brother.