What Bad Intentions Can an Alchemist Have?

The subject matter is good, but it's too wordy. Half or more of a chapter is explaining things, and the word count is too low. I really can't subscribe to it, so I have to abandon it.

It's a pity that this book, which I thought had great potential, really doesn't have an audience for little girls like this. Especially when the characterization is unrealistic and heavily facialized, it fails to arouse the reader's desire for protection and feels very artificial and fake. I feel uncomfortable when I become a girl-obsessed person. A girl like this, who is sensible and makes people feel distressed, will not chat in the way you wrote. Guoguo and the like are too goosebumps. After seeing Chapter 18, I don't have a strong desire to continue reading. In fact, this can be seen from the dozens of comments on the first chapter to no comments at more than ten chapters. The other settings are very good, but this kid really... slipped away, helping the author to sell well as soon as possible.

A vicious middle-aged woman, a kind old woman, a sickly sister from the beginning, and a hidden professional alchemist. . . I'm tired of seeing it.

What you wrote in your last book was not as good as The Alchemist

Mr. Author, I'm numb

There are too many narrations, and there are descriptions of how strong the succubi is when they come out, and how easy it is to kill the protagonist. You said that the protagonist ran away, and I won't say anything. But the protagonist didn't run away and returned the contract. I thought I needed to strengthen it, but I didn't expect it to be slashed and pressed again. It felt a bit uncomfortable.

Will the protagonist be the kind of person who can only make things according to drawings, such as an electric fan, a washing machine, an ordinary wooden crossbow, a compound bow, a Kirov incendiary bottle, a table, a chair, etc. Just because there are no drawings? This knowledge is dead knowledge with a memetic lock on it and cannot be used flexibly. You can't design it yourself instead of relying on system randomness.

There are two points, one is that it is too watery, and the other is that it may be a personal reason. I originally thought that skeleton was just a pet, at most a growth-oriented pet with wisdom. I didn't expect to directly create a big daddy, fight against the protagonist as soon as he comes, and then run away? ! I didn't expect it. I can only say that it was beyond my expectation. At that time, I didn't think about it and was not interested. Later, I saw two pictures and said that the skeleton was not under control. I couldn't understand it, so I gave up on understanding it.

Handan's layout and planning like a toddler? The introduction is that I have lived in Bengbu 😅 This story is about a Handan man who has a good walking posture, and then he learns it alone, but he can't even walk until he learns it 😒 Using idioms, it is true that Handan is learning to walk

To give a brief review, the author of this book wrote it with intention, which can be seen from the various terms and knowledge modules listed. But stacking so many nouns is not a way to attract readers. You can integrate a large number of technologies under one long noun. Then, regarding the problem of the little girl in the early stage, I suggested deleting this character. She did not have any effect in attracting readers, but made people feel disgusted and boring. If she really can't delete it, the author please don't let her say some repetitive words like "guoguo" and disgusting words. How disgusting! So greasy! Secondly, please don't design the plot conflict according to the ancient Internet articles, like the vicious maid stepping on the protagonist's foot with high heels, it's very poisonous! Finally, why can't your protagonist devote himself to the truth? Why is he pursuing his wife in the game like a stallion? I'm sorry >people<, I wanted to comment seriously, but I just couldn't help it.

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 24. What is it? Both humans and dogs can step on the protagonist, but somehow there is an enemy who can crush the protagonist to death at any time.

The conflict in Chapter 11 was too blunt, so I went back and read it, and I remember correctly. In the third chapter, it was written that the protagonist's right hand mutates, and the protagonist has no hidden abilities. In the context of the wasteland world, how can ordinary people dare to mess with such mutated people?  Get a part-time bully to bully the protagonist...  I tried my best to read it without thinking, but I can't write inconsistently... 

I have started to let myself go. Sooner or later this book will be closed.

When I read novels about alchemy, the first thing that came to mind was the alchemist's eldest brother who had to make it without funding.

Ah, the main character in the introduction is so awesome, who can point at his nose and question him?

The plot is old-fashioned and nothing new. Your novel should have been a hit 10 years ago. The world background and career system are somewhat interesting. The first few dozens of descriptions in the article are okay, but there is very little in the rest.

I don't understand the power system very well.

The writing was okay at the beginning, but after the protagonist became a master, it became a bit wretched! The author said that the protagonist is not a good person, but I think the protagonist can be bad, but not as bad as a pervert, which makes people feel disgusting. He flirts with a girl he has met a few times for the purpose of the mission, which is too disgusting.

It's all like this, why don't you update a little more? ? ?

It's a bit interesting, I'll save it and read it 😁

Have I read an identical book? What kind of salvation will be a pawn shop, reincarnation sister Shangguan and so on. A few months ago.

It seems okay for now, looking forward to the follow-up

Come on

The training system is a bit broken! It's better to change it back to the alchemy book. There are five levels of awakening, and each level is divided into early, middle and late stages. It's better to just go from level 1 to level 100.