I'm Just a Novelist

The subject matter is okay, but the plot and writing are stupid.

How about cutting off a line? I feel like the author has no control over it. The writing is up to standard and the story is told clearly, but it seems that I don't have the ability to "have both."

The idea was interesting after reading the introduction, but after reading the first chapter, it was too hasty and the logic was too rough. I need to polish it a bit. (Even if you add a Blue Star novel, it will be as influential as Weibo and Tiktok.)

I also wanted to write a book like this before

If you write according to the introduction, it will look much better than what you are doing now.

The title of the book should be changed to "My fiancé has lost his memory, watch me train him properly"

Not writing a novel? As a singer, what you say is inconsistent with what you do!

The introduction is very attractive, but the main text is readable, but not so good. There is a big difference between primary and secondary.

Other stories have been too emotional and too much, but this one is calm and serene without any ups and downs. It doesn't feel good when it should be. It obviously has everything the plot should have, but it seems like robots lack human emotions.

I had this feeling when I read the introduction to the novel, and after reading it I felt a bit speechless and unhappy. As for your subject matter, the choice is quite good, but for a novice author, if the writing skills are not good, it is easy to get scolded when writing. Do you want to say that the writing is poor? Not at all. But there are so many people scolding you, what does this mean? The threshold is high, the coolness is good, but the writing power is insufficient. In fact, for a novice, what you wrote is quite good, come on

I know a good electronics factory. Has the author considered it?

The stitching ability is okay, but the writing is a mess. It has the beauty of copying and pasting, and pulling the words out without thinking about it. And this amnesia + Qingmei, you can write a book or a field better than this idiot like me. I still hope that this book will become more popular and that a down-and-out old author, Kakashi, will be involved. If it really doesn't work, the studio AI can still accept it.

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 11. There's still a lot of room for improvement in the writing, but it's so mindless that it's really disappointing. Suitable for those who love to lick.

You're not a buddy, just complaining about writing novels and pretending to be cool, but you're kneeling there and wiping people's butts while writing songs. If you want to write songs and be a game anchor, other writers are not much more comfortable than you. . .

Looking at the introduction, it seems like a weird stitch. My first impression is that it is a story with novel writing as the main thread throughout, one novel for each theme, and other branches attached to the process of writing novels. Actually, it can be said that the author's heart is wild and wild, and various elements are mixed together. Amnesia, a fiancée, and an immature protagonist. This requires not only writing songs to be a singer, but also writing novels and playing games to be an anchor, and then there is the daily life of a rich second generation, family business, and love. Leaving aside the issue of the inconsistency between the title and the content of the book, I just want to ask, can you write the content in the introduction?

It would be great if the content you wrote was as exciting as your introduction, but it's a pity.

The author should quickly go back and use his imagination to sell his ideas directly to the studio!

I don't even know why my fiancée came out of nowhere.

😒 A lukewarm plot in an entertainment novel is a dead end. The subject matter is quite tricky but the writing cannot convey the charm of an introduction. The plot and pacing are also poorly controlled. When it's time to feel good, it's briefly touched upon, and when it's time to be touched on, it's long-winded. The song was released as if it was free of charge, but the previous song died before it even got up, making way for the second song, and then kept repeating this rhythm...

The author adds too many things, and the author's writing power cannot support both wanting and wanting. Songs, games, live broadcasts, there are too many involved. It's too fake to be an all-round master who knows everything. You can do everything yourself and not earn a share for others, right?

No, suddenly a eunuch? ? ?