Traveling Through 90: I Just Want to Eat My Old Age

I can personally give you an opinion. I can understand that the author wants to hurry up when describing the separation of families in the early stage, but I feel that there are too many characters appearing, especially for me who is a fast reader. Even if I just glance at it, it feels a bit confusing and I can't tell them apart. I don't know if it's my problem or the writing style, but it looks a bit tiring. Then I hope to streamline it a little bit in the future. I just hope I can change it a little bit later.

Has the author read through his novel in its entirety? The names of the people in it are all mixed together. Sometimes it is the character who speaks but the name is not the person speaking. It still needs to be refined before publishing. It's worth saying that the work is pretty good so far.

It's well written. Although the protagonist is small, he can influence the people around him through what he needs, and let the people around him embark on the road of business and get rich in advance.

Did the author forget the age of the protagonist? The protagonist seems to be 6 years old, so he just gave him 20,000 yuan. Does the protagonist speak like he is 6 years old? Why is it so awkward? Give advice to your father

Elementary school student? Doesn't read smoothly

The update is discontinued. The author will come out and explain.

I hope my father will become a dragon, I hope my mother will become a phoenix

The book is very good. I have cut it up and am ready to order it all.