Ultra: Collector of Evolution Elements

Personal standards: I always use cat-colored ones as the standard for your type of Owen, and currently it is above the passing line. Plot: First of all, the part where the protagonist pretends to be cowardly at the monster merchant is not very good according to my standards, even a bit annoying. In the eyes of others, it may even be a poisonous point, because the monster merchant did not show that much strength in the original play. You can set him to have special power (after all, you have set the background of the devil and can use the power of the devil), and can suppress the protagonist, but there is no need to set it to direct strength crushing. Originally, the protagonist has been suppressed at the beginning. After finally getting a copy of Triga to upgrade, he was suppressed again before he was satisfied. It felt aggrieved and his happiness was in vain. It feels like (and you still have the Naraku Sword Technique and a sword that is described as an artifact). Without these two things, it would be better if the protagonist is naked and suppressed. At least the readers can find a reason to comfort themselves, but your setting causes this to be plot suppression, and the protagonist is going to be suppressed (￣(エ)￣) It's not that being suppressed is not okay, but you suppressed it so hard in the early stage, at least it makes people feel refreshed. The plot of the current Gaia copy is well written at the beginning, including this human body and the crushing situation of the two Ultraman Gaia Aguru. The human body does not want to be the reason for Ultraman to fight (although I think it is easier to find the mother with Ultraman's power, and this mother always feels that she is in danger when she is sick). The reason is tenable, but it is a bit reluctant, but okay. You can write a little more about the plot of crushing the copy of Gaia. After all, strictly speaking, from the reader's perspective (referring to the individual only), your book only starts to feel good here. If you start to suppress it after a few chapters, I can't guarantee that I won't curse ಥ⌣ಥ You don't have to write about crushing at full status, this residual health state will do. There is also Camilla who was parasitized and assimilated by Sphia. This always feels like a bit of a joke? After all, Carmilla was also a BOSS in the Final Holy War, so she was parasitically assimilated by Sphia? It's a little unbelievable (if Sphia is set as a demon, it can be understood that Camilla is parasitized, but I just feel it is too hasty here) Setting: The level system (ABCD system) in the setting actually feels a bit broken personally, because the protagonist has been suppressed after upgrading so far. Basically, the power of level is only reflected in a short space, without a specific concept (it may also be because I like to ignore the original content with specific numerical content). Because) There is also an evolution point system. If the system with clear values is not very detailed, try not to write it, because it will most likely collapse due to numerical expansion later. If the author is not prepared, it is better to come up with an upgrade plot early to upgrade the evolution point system and blur out the specific values. In terms of skill learning, the learning progress of ordinary skills can be improved a little. It is okay to learn Ultraman's ultimate move slowly. It is a ultimate move after all, but ordinary skills can be faster. After all, other people's ordinary skills are average. It took you a long time to learn an average skill? (The above is purely a personal opinion and does not represent other readers. The author can read the plot of Mao Se when he has time. Both of you are the same type of books. The suffering buff in his plot is stable. I feel sorry for his protagonist ಥ_ಥ)

Don't you want to add points to the protagonist's other attributes? In reality, it is impossible for the protagonist to only evolve spiritually, it will be unbalanced

It can only be said that the protagonist in the author's novel is still very addicted to food, and he has not yet finished it.

1: Setting problem, because I only watched TV movies, many settings are missing. I want to try my best to make it more realistic, so I have some limitations in my free play. I'm very sorry. 2: The question of character is to write the arc of the character, which will gradually change. 3: I am extremely grateful to those who have supported me. Your support and comments are the motivation for my efforts (it seems polite, but I really mean it.) 4: If there is anything wrong, you are welcome to correct me. 5: Created a QQ group where everyone can chat casually, 130692651

I want to follow others in writing invincible stories, but I also have to suppress the protagonist's combat power.

Kirialodians are not even worthy of carrying Sophia's shoes.

How many chapters into the series will the protagonist take the initiative to attack Tiga? Okay, let's have big news at the beginning, aren't you afraid that readers will run away?

The plot is okay, but it's just not exciting enough. The protagonist is forced to become stronger and solve a problem, and then a greater despair comes.

It's pretty good. Among the Austrian novels I've read, it's at least in the upper middle range.

There are fewer and fewer Ultraman writers, and the popularity of the new generation of Ultraman is not as high as it used to be. They are facing the same dilemma as Conan and Douluo Dalu humanities. Come on, write well, and definitely read it!

The protagonist's character is so disgusting. . .

The protagonist seems to be a route without a heroine, but written like a eunuch. You can have a good impression of the heroine, but there is no need to force an encounter or misunderstanding without going further. (It feels like a scumbag who goes around teasing others without taking it any further) If the author likes this, likes to tease others or be teased by others, just pretend I didn't say it.

When I see people trying to grab the Great Ancient Divine Light Rod, I can't help complaining. They keep saying that humans can turn into light on their own, but even if they try to grab it, they don't even have a skill to transform and they can't defeat the enemy. What's the point of grabbing the Divine Light Rod? Become a blank slate? At least Dagu can give himself the idealistic buff for his talk. What can the protagonist do?

This novel has so many twists and turns, covering almost the entire plot and every monster, and the supporting characters are not very good at it. Obviously he is the protagonist of the original TV series, but his performance in this article is unsatisfactory. Although there is a butterfly effect caused by the protagonist, this effect is too big. Every time, the protagonist is emphasized to be cautious, but accidents will happen every time. Occasionally, this is okay, but often, it will be a bit aesthetically tired... Of course, I am not against the author's writing, but I am too picky... In addition, except for the plot related to Ultraman Galaxy Fighting, normal Ultra TV actually tells most human stories. Relatively speaking, although there are also Ultraman stories, they are not too many.

My bottom line is that Lina cannot be dismantled, and anything else can be done as you wish.

Basically abandoning the original plot, using Ultraman as the framework to introduce a lot of the author's personal opinions into the creation, the idea is very good, but it is too subjective, the forced additions are too obvious, and the character description is too stiff

I said before that it would not be permanently deducted, but in the blink of an eye, attribute points were permanently deducted.

I think one of the problems the protagonist has now is that he is too weak, but with too weak potential, he always provokes stronger enemies. He is about to fight Gatanjie, and he is still hovering at c

It's an okay book in the Ultra Evolution stream, but it's really tepid. Searching for the words "Ultraman" requires scrolling down for a long time. If I hadn't known about this book, I wouldn't have been able to find it.

No matter how good it ends, the original routine of constantly suppressing combat power and completing dungeons is really meaningless. Conceive and write the next book carefully

Traveling during National Day? It's time to write a book

Update quickly

I didn't watch it for 20 days and it ended suddenly, I was caught off guard

Why is it gone when the National Day comes back?

The protagonist in the early and middle stages of Tiga was okay. After the middle stage of Tiga, I jumped directly to the Gaia chapter. In the Gaia chapter, there was no improvement in the mentality of the protagonist in the Tiga chapter. Instead, I felt that he was floating 😅

You've already written 1.3 Million words, why don't you stop writing?

No? ? ? The end? ? ?