
Dou Po: Xiao Yan Is My Brother Galeo
斗破:萧炎,是我加列奥的兄弟
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 574k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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279Chapters
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The harem then licks the male protagonist of the original novel and then refuses to accept popular female protagonists such as Xun'er and Medusa... What kind of fan harem novel is this 😅
When we broke off the engagement, did you think people couldn't hear you bickering in a hall? Did you think there was a meeting in the school playground?
. . . . Why do you think you can safely hold what you got from Xun'er? After getting the news you want, why does she still keep you, a thoughtful and talented little trash full of uncertainties who can foresee his little brother's problems?
Heroine based on popularity
Nalan Yanran is currently very popular, so she should be one of the heroines. There are also the Little Medical Fairy and Zi Yan. The little medical fairy must be from the main palace, because it takes a lot of effort to solve the evil poisonous body, and the first baby is mentioned, ahem. If there are any deficiencies, I hope everyone can tell them and the author will listen to everyone's opinions.
The protagonist has a crazy harem. But that's right. In this world, there is no system, no golden fingers, and no special talents. It's better to just apply for anti-inflammatory thighs. When the boss flies across the world, the protagonist follows him
The part where the protagonist acts as a magic stick in front of Xiao Xun'er is so poisonous. He became a fighter at the age of 11 after he was cured of inflammation, and the fighting spirit disappeared at the age of 12. This part is too poisonous. He runs in front of others to predict the future for no reason.
It would be difficult for Xiao Yan to become a semi-sage if he continued to lick like this, and he might die in the illusion of the bodhi tree.
When I read fanfic, I like to read about the original protagonist.
It's pretty good. You don't need to waste everyone's time after reading the introduction.
It's really just Teddy, no matter who appears in the original work or not, I won't let anyone go.
By the way, the Oba family in Wutan City has produced an American president! 😏😏😏😏😏😏
Ling Ying is like that. He just wants to kill the protagonist without killing his whole family.
Judging from your profile, you are planning to lick Xiao Yan to death 🙂
Xun'er is too smart, and the protagonist doesn't keep a secret when doing things. If you keep some information, you can at least save your life. You have told everything, and whether you die or not is just a matter of other people's words 😅
Those who write fan fiction and lick the original protagonist will generally not end well. What most readers of fan fiction want to see is to make up for the shortcomings of the original work. In other words, it's better than the original. Of course, there are also people who read fan fiction because they haven't read enough of the original novel and want to see the protagonists of the original novel and a few other people. Which novel is best about licking the main character? Lord of Mysteries, for many reasons, including his readers, there are many women, and many readers want to see the various interactions of the Tarot Society. Which book is best not to lick the protagonist "Douluo Dalu"? The reason is simple. Everyone knows it even if I don't tell you. "Fights Break the Sphere" is better than "Douluo Dalu". If you just write a licking protagonist, people will accept it better than "Douluo Dalu", but it will definitely not reach the level of Lord of Secrets. The purity of the fans of the Lord of Best Friends is determined
Shennong tried poison. If you can accept the dog-licking article, you can read it.
The language used when writing characters is so confusing that I don't even know who is speaking. I have to look back a few times.
Heroine
Let's see who is the most popular and decide who will be the heroine. Yun Yun and Medusa are not among them.
Talent, have you added Leo? Villain novels are forcibly whitewashed. Do you think anyone will read them?
After seeing a few pictures, all I can say is that they are too toxic! The later chapters may be well written, but those who can resist the first few chapters only have full anti-poison points! Go directly to Xiao Xun'er to ask for the Earth Level Kung Fu, and then tell Xiao Xun'er that Xiao Yan was a fighter at the age of 11 and became useless at the age of 12! What do you think?
You need to be able to write a book. If you write it like this, people won't want to read it at first glance.
The two-star Dou Zong's earth-level fighting skills can't kill a low-level Dou Zong. The protagonist woman has kidney deficiency after doing too much, and she looks like shit.
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Those cards that I asked Xun'er to ask for fighting skills are really poisonous. If you don't change them carefully, you will definitely turn away many people. There are also some details. For example, the protagonist always likes to clasp his fists when he meets everyone.