If You Are in Conan, I Will Send You Hospice Care

How about Spider-Man in Conan? Since this is Japan, the Four Hundred Aunts appear

It is suggested that the protagonist can draw someone with the ability to see death. Otherwise, it would be unreasonable to rely on the protagonist to remember the plot and force guessing every time.

Reveal that Conan is Kudo Shinichi and let Xiaolan know

This protagonist is actually a criminal

Who is the author? Have you forgotten the title of the book? The subsequent mission process will be over in one sentence. You can change it to [If you are in Conan, you will be rewarded for watching people get killed] Forget it

After reading Chapter 102, it was boring. He treated Conan as a retarded person. Every time someone died, he would tell the murderer. Mao Li noticed it. Conan didn't take it seriously, thinking that the protagonist was talking nonsense.

It's quite interesting and funny at the beginning, but it feels uninteresting at the end, like a running account.

With this system, you should be a prison guard and care for the prisoners who are about to be executed. What, Conan, that's okay😝

I've read almost 90 chapters now. This article is a good subject, but Jiang Lin feels so weird! Always do things that make fun of the protagonist! But these things are not a joke. It was an outrageous joke, one that made everyone involved except Jiang Lin sad. It's like bullying the protagonist group with his own foresight, and he bullies repeatedly! It feels very boring! Jiang Lin has no life of his own at all. He keeps hanging around Conan and makes one-sided bullying jokes with Conan. The description of these things may not be accurate and may not be funny.

This novel reads so strangely. It is clearly written in the third person, but it reads like a first-person novel...

I felt very uncomfortable when I saw the department store plot. It's a bit closer to the wizard's book. Except for the protagonist, everyone else is not even a human being. You can play with it at will. If you want something to happen, something will happen to you. If you don't want something to happen, you will be blind for a few minutes and it will be fine.

Although I am also a scrappy author, my novel has 150,000 words and has been put on the shelves. After three rounds of recommendations, I would like to make a small suggestion. If it makes sense, just accept it; if it doesn't, just ignore it. The subject matter is really good, and there is a market for focusing on comedy. But comedy flow, in addition to requiring imagination, also has high requirements for writing skills. How about your novel? It's a bit awkward to read, and the quality of it seems to be high and low. It is wrong to say that your writing is not good. Some parts are really funny. At least the introduction is good. I said you wrote well, but I felt a little uncomfortable when I read it. I can't give you specific opinions because I don't write about this. Yes, you can read some well-written Conan fanfics, especially those that are funny. I don't recommend specific works, lest anyone think I'm trying to praise others and promote books. The subject matter is really great, keep it up

The fat man persuaded him to quit, but he could not be brought in, and the thin man was forced to work

I'm just curious, don't you have any requirements for punctuation when reading novels? There are no double quotation marks in those dialogues and psychological activities. It is like a diary narrative. If you read too much, it will really affect your sense of immersion. Sometimes you even need to be distracted to judge whether he is talking or doing something, interrupting your reading experience at any time.

The first few chapters were quite interesting, but what happened when you suddenly let yourself go?

After the identification, the protagonist is a gray fun man. He doesn't look like the red party at all, but he doesn't take advantage of it. In addition to engaging in funerals and fun, it only makes Conan's case even worse... He destroys evidence, steals evidence, and sometimes plans to kill someone... If the red party can recognize this, there will be something wrong.

What was written about the man dressed as a woman and the corpse behind? It's better not to save it.

The Conan and Hattori exchange was too long. It was interesting to write a few chapters, but after a long time, it felt so confusing that I didn't know who was who.

Author, please cut it. Take a look at the original cool points and take a look at the current running account.

The writing is okay, but I don't know why it feels dry when I read it.

Keep writing, it's very interesting.

Actually, the front was okay, but it's a pity

It's a pity, I think this idea is quite interesting...

Mainland lottery does not pay dividends 😆