Living in Troubled Times Begins with Liver Experience

Experience should be injected into the upgrade. For example, when moving goods, it should be injected into how to move goods with less effort and which postures will make it easier to move.

Let me give you some advice. Two pennies for a book is a bit unreasonable.

Some jokes are too distracting and lack attention to detail. For example, the shipping certificate uses an iron plate. The background is ancient and iron is a scarce resource.

Hurry up and change the map. It's confusing, the plot doesn't unfold, and the confusing way of writing is disgusting. The protagonist's vision is substituted, which makes people feel that the author is playing tricks on the readers 🤫 You don't write out what the supporting characters are doing, and you ask the readers to guess who I am? There are so many scenes described before the battle, and it feels like killing so many people just for the sake of energy, luck, and so on is very high-level and awesome. The result is that low-level warriors who are not even internal trainers are engaging in political struggles and conspiracy with each other 😅 As a modern person, the protagonist feels like an aborigine, and he also works as a porter? If you have force, you will have more free time to practice. With force, you will be protected. In a harsh environment, people will be destroyed for their own sake. With the improvement of force, it will be easier to practice exercises.

I just want to know how big the protagonist's heart is, so he dared to faint and ask the old man to take care of him in the black market. Could it be that the protagonist traveled to the Virgin's Paradise?

The protagonist wants to be stubborn, but he always seeks death. He feels that his IQ is a bit stretched.

I haven't read it, but the synopsis says that the protagonist is invincible. Why is it difficult to describe, but it's okay to just make someone laugh or cry.

Since it comes from modern times, if moving things can be included in martial arts, do the Tai Chi and radio gymnastics that I often practiced in college count? Has the protagonist not thought of this after carrying sacks for so long?

It's a bit messy, and it's very hard to watch. It changes from one scene to another, and it's tiring to watch. The key point is that these transitions are meaningless. The author may want to express a feeling of chaos in the current situation, but it makes people watch in a fog.

Thousands of people brought the leader to the world. Too out of character

What are you writing about? It's baffling, why do you write so much stuff at the beginning? Am I here to see you write a suspense novel? Just make the main character invincible and have a violent attack, and that's it. If you write it in the middle and later stages, some people may read it. Who will read it if it's incomprehensible at the beginning?

So you can't dig a tunnel to escape? Live completely by luck! This protagonist

The price of books and steamed buns is the same, and the early stage shows that the world is difficult. Later, the salary of three cents is actually exchanged for iron plates. There are so many workers, are you kidding me?

The writing was actually pretty good, but after a while, I wrote that many years ago, some people like to use something similar to stream of consciousness, which is similar to the fantasy in martial arts.

After reading the introduction, I wanted to ask if this was a studio article. Because I have already seen N books starting from porters.

I thought about it and set up a suggestion forum. If you have any suggestions, you can post them in this forum. Of course, it can also be a supplementary forum. You can speak freely, as long as you don't scold them without thinking. Generally, if you have any small details that you don't understand, you can post them here. I will explain them when I see them.

Write a yarn, dozens or hundreds of words, two or three paragraphs, change the perspective three or four times. You are not writing a novel, you are writing an essay. Write a yarn.

The first volume is fine, but after leaving the first volume of pig's feet, I just miss women. I don't want to be careless. This thought is whether other men are good to their wives? ? ? ? Did he awaken to some strange hobby? And holding an ugly doll? What? Author, did you forget to inflate yours in real life? With such a start, I knew that the pig's feet would start to be holy! [Why is the world unfair, why is everyone equal, etc.]

Self-recommendation: "You will become stronger when you fulfill your last wish" [Decisive Killing] + [Golden Finger] + [Secret Technique] + [Appearance - Black and White Pisces] ... [Eat another bowl of Yangchun noodles... Last wish reward: Thousands of troops breaking the formation. ] …… [Guardian of the Yang God and the flowers blooming... Last wish reward: dead wood turning into spring. ] …… [Kill the Six-Winged Snake King... Last wish reward: all cultivation bases. ] … [Snatch the Taoist artifact fragments... Last wish reward: Nirvana realm cultivation. ] … [Retaliation, kill the cub of the Golden Winged King... Last wish reward: Secret Technique - Heart of Frost. ]

Why doesn't the protagonist leave? Why is he still moving cargo at the dock?

It's too slow and it looks really laborious.

If one mile is equal to 500 meters, a round trip is one thousand meters. Three trips to three thousand meters. A lot of? Newcomers move two or three times a day, and old people move four or five times a day. Pig's feet can't surpass the old man in less than a week. A kilogram of rice is a hard labor to eat in a day. Introduction to carrying pig's feet and entering the house. No energy required. It went straight up. As the level increases, the quality is directly enhanced. It's better to just breathe and use up enough energy. Then just skip the meal and take the exam.

Do you need to move three packages a day at the dock?

The writing is good, the characters are delicately drawn, the writing is smooth, and it is very interesting. I hope it will be updated more. One chapter is really not enough.

The article is good. I feel like I can't help myself in troubled times. I unconsciously think of the numbness I feel when commuting to and from get off work at 12 years old. It is just a kind of hardship in the soul. I always feel that I am so small and walking on thin ice and cannot cope with any suffering. (We are far away, let's talk about books!) This article always gives people the feeling that we are in troubled times, and all kinds of people are like (eating) people! It's a bit too depressing to have him trapped in a spider web, unable to break free, and can only survive silently. If he doesn't go crazy, he can't survive!

What kind of Riddler novel is this? As I write it, the main character runs away and I still can't understand it.

There are too many gags, which affects the sense of immersion.

Liver experience is the most useless. It's better to add some points. Experience is good for ordinary people, but it can't speed up.

If these organizations are not liquidated, then the author does not need to write

The writing is really good, but some details cannot withstand scrutiny, but I can listen to the opinions and improve them. The problem now is not to be too pretentious, because you are on the fantasy channel, not science fiction. If you are on the science fiction track, everyone likes to watch the whole thing, but fantasy is not good at this. It is recommended to find out the needs of the audience first. Come on!