People Are in Douluo, Starting with Double Divine Power

I bet many people came to read this book thinking about Naruto Obito's superb Kamui. But unfortunately, the frequency of use and presence of Kamui in this book are very low (the Kamui Space is not included)

As a man, I think the main character is too trustworthy, but this is generally the case in the Douluo market. Now that there is a book shortage, and I just hit the upper limit, I can still read it, and I will see if I can write more later.

Those who have not watched Dou Er or those who have followed Dou Er think that Xiao Yazi is a good person, because at the end of Dou Yi, he only told the Seven Gods to ascend to heaven, and did not say that he would not inherit the Wuhun Palace to help people awaken their Wuhun, nor did he say that he would not help people awaken their Wuhun. After watching Dou Er, I later realized that no one in the future would help awaken the Wuhun for free. After seeing Dou Er, he also knew about the gold of living things and the golden ancient trees in the far north of whale glue.

Tang San, you disrupted the original note of Douluo Continent, dirty guy. This luck is not yours

Opinion collection floor. Dear adoptive fathers, the inappropriate parts of the emotional scene in the previous article have been changed. The dialogue that was too dramatic has also been changed. The young author has a new car on the road, and the road to online writing is full of ups and downs. He needs foster parents to point out his shortcomings. I will listen carefully to suggestions, work hard to improve my writing, and write better and more exciting plots. There are some plots that are not appropriate in the follow-up, and I hope my adoptive fathers can give me some advice. Thank you, little author! Meow Peanut.2023.08.09

There is also a way to strengthen the essence of life, which is to grind the gold of life into powder and drink it with water. It depends on the condition of the digestive system. After all, the essence of life gold is the accumulation of life force for thousands of years and is harmless to the body.

Don't write emotional scenes, or write less of them. The fighting power is too exaggerated. How can a child of a few years old have such a body? It's too exaggerated. How is it possible? I don't want to watch it immediately. It's too embarrassing.

The author uses the Hokage system to give the hydrogen man combat power 😅 The six high levels = God King, Otsutsuki God = the God of Creation 😰

Sometimes I feel that Ning Zhiyuan is quite stupid. For the Qibao Glazed Sect, the unification of the mainland is the best for him. His own martial soul has no attack power, plus it can detect ores, and he has business acumen. Can't he see that a stable environment with his own martial soul is more popular than a chaotic environment?

The pages were too long when I was a kid, and when I was 6 years old, I didn't have any sense of immersion, so I had to write like crazy. . .

Posaisi

The reason why I hate Bibi Dong is probably because she can throw her dignity to the ground and trample it for love. There are many love brains in works like this, but the other characters fall in love with normal people. Look at what kind of garbage Da Shi is, let alone the white-eyed wolf thing she did.

In fact, the idea is not bad, but the relationship between men and women is unbearable. Personally, I think it would be better to delete the female plot completely 😥

I'm convinced. If you don't know how to write a love line, you don't have to write it. Even if a woman licks the protagonist, a nine-year-old girl will not be angry because her penis is smaller than another woman's.

Emperor Qin, Demon Chef of Ice and Fire, Dzi Bead Transformation, Dionysus, Guardian God of Zodiac, God of Madness, Son of Light, Skyspeed Star Mark, Avenue of Heavenly Fire, Only One Immortal, and kind-hearted God of Death?

The only good thing about this book is that it doesn't overwhelm the combat power and kills ruthlessly. I hope the author can give more side descriptions. It feels like others don't realize how outrageous the protagonist is (beating a demigod at the age of six).

I was still pretending that it would definitely have a finale, but it turns out that it's already the 5th and it hasn't been updated yet. If you don't want to write about it, just don't write about it! I'm so goddamn blind that I subscribed to your book. I spent all my money in vain. You might as well not have written it in the first place! I don't want to say anything more, so I gave up.

Author, you have just updated a few chapters, and I feel like the main character is a bit neurotic.

The writing style is okay, the plot arrangement is also okay, and there are no shortage of interesting points. There are no other problems except the ending. The quality is more than 90% of Douluo fandoms.

Why did the protagonist become more and more subversive in the later stages?

I have applied to join the group, can you agree 😌

Excuse me, the group has exploded. Where can I watch the extra episode?

Author, your group is blowing up, how can we join it?

It's all booked, what should I do if the group explodes, where can I watch the extras?

Author update! One chapter is updated in one day, too little, right?

I applied, but you didn't get approved?

I have applied countless times and failed every time