
As the Empress Who Breaks Off Her Engagement at the Beginning, I Choose Xiao Heilian, the Demonic Path
开局退婚女帝,我选魔道小黑莲
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Tell me a little about the author and the shortcomings of this book
Let me start with the summary: It cannot provide what readers want, but it has to work behind closed doors and not listen to opinions The author said that the results of this book were not good, so you did not continue to write it, so why did it get poor results? First of all, it is because you, as the author, do not provide what the readers want. Why are you attracted to this book? I believe that many people, like me, came to read this book after watching some book promotion videos. The reason why I came to read this book at that time was because this book had several systems, and it also added Nanyi's mind-reading plot. Several golden fingers are fighting each other, and this kind of plot attracts people to watch. But after leaving the early stage, this kind of plot of several golden fingers fighting each other has almost disappeared. Later, Nan Yi and Shen's Shura mode appeared again. So after this early element of attracting people to read is gone, it will already cause a certain loss of readers. Later, the main point that supported readers to continue reading was to know what the protagonist and Nan Yi were like in the last five years, and how they were killed by Shen, and then watch Shen break the defense. As a result, the author has now talked about the ending, but you still haven't given the plot that readers want to see. The key points that attract readers in the early stage are gone, resulting in the loss of readers; in the later stage, the key points that support readers to continue reading are not met, which will cause the overall evaluation of the book by readers to decline. But in fact, there is no problem if the key points raised by the author when he wrote it failed to support the readers to continue watching. This is fine as long as the author incorporates the reader's ideas and then makes changes. Just like the author, you can't figure out how to let the Demon Lord choose the protagonist and make the cause and effect between the protagonist and the Demon Lord develop in a good direction, but I have given some feasible suggestions. But the author has no intention of listening at all. You are just doing it behind closed doors. The group that originally invited readers to join and listen to opinions was disbanded within a day. It was this behavior of neither providing the elements that readers wanted, nor listening to readers' opinions to make changes, that ultimately led to the failure of this book. On the contrary, the severity of the behavior that suddenly eunuchs or accelerates to a bad end is the least serious. Because I know an author. Her books often have eunuchs and accelerated plot cuts, but basically every book can reach tens of millions of clicks, and each chapter she writes will earn a royalties of 2,000 yuan, and her monthly income from writing books can reach 100,000 yuan. The reason for her success is that she captured the readers' hearts and wrote the elements that attract them. So even if her book is too late or the ending is accelerated, everyone is still willing to watch and support her next work. If the author you and I know were compared to a chef cooking, it would be like this: She: She is a famous chef with a certain number of customers Author: A little-known chef who is making her debut She: Every time, she tells the customers in advance what materials (elements) and dishes (theme) will be used for the banquet, and then cooks them with exquisite techniques. Sometimes during the banquet, they would say how many courses there would be next, but they would break the promise and the number would be smaller than promised. However, because each dish used the mentioned ingredients, the dishes were in line with what was said before, and the techniques were exquisite, so everyone was willing to pay the bill and attend the next banquet. Author: The technique is green and the dishes are niche, but because the ingredients used (various gold fingers) are rare, it attracted a lot of people at first. However, these ingredients were only served as appetizers and then not used for a long time, so some customers were lost. But because the food tastes pretty good, and the chef hinted that there will be several big dishes next (the last five years, the way to die, the relationship between the Demon King's sister and Liu Zhenzhen, Shen and Zhu Jiu in the previous life) and a heavyweight dish (let Shen watch himself kill the protagonist), there are still some guests staying. As a result, the chef not only said that the banquet would end early, but also did not have these dishes as hinted before. The final dessert considered by the customers was also replaced with an incorrect version (the protagonist was with Nanyi instead of with Tutu), and even this dessert came with a disgusting foreign object (the Nanyi that readers always thought was the heroine was discarded). In this case, the author thinks that the readers will be satisfied with the banquet you have done as a cook and support your next banquet instead of ruining your experience? All I can say is that the author is thinking about eating peaches. The final conclusion is, if you, the author, cannot correct the problems mentioned above. I still suggest that you, the author, should not continue writing a book, so as not to waste the time of you, the author, and all readers
I guess the phaseless mother-in-law who appears when the hero is licking his wounds alone is the future Shen Xiaoxue. At that time, he said: No need to be grateful, no need to miss me. The Phaseless Demon Emperor Shen Xiaoxue. She probably felt shameless in the future and had to pay a lot of money to resurrect the protagonist. I really can't understand you who are lickers. If two people who love each other treat her well, then your parents' unnecessary sacrifices to you are also licking you, right? Do you also lick your doting on your younger siblings? Do you also lick the various efforts you make without any complaints to the people you give your sincerity to? So what does it mean to make people feel disgusted when they give you gifts and keep you hanging as a fish, or when they don't accept you and make mistakes? Is it true that in most real worlds, you give so many ungrateful gifts to others that you don't get what you want? So now, whenever a male protagonist appears in a novel giving a gift or constantly giving, you have to scold him and lick him 🐶? So drunk!
Update soon, I just love watching women fight
I really like this novel
I must say that this work is my favorite among the many online novels. When I first heard about this novel on the Internet, I was attracted by the content and setting. The more I read, the more exciting it becomes. It is really rare! There are many parts that I like. First of all, the writing is really good. The words used in the content, the description of the characters, and the description of the inner world are all written very profoundly and contain poetic flavor. It is really relatable to read. The setting of the world view is also very complete. Although it was a bit difficult to understand at the beginning, as the plot develops, the structure of the world view becomes more and more complete, which makes people feel refreshing! The next step is the setting of the plot. The arrangement of the plot whets the reader's appetite, and then turns the foreshadowing into exciting plots step by step. The plot design will not fall into the cliche, and is even unexpected in many cases, making people want to keep reading and wonder what kind of story the author will develop! The most important thing is that the portrayal of each character is very successful. In my opinion, there are no characters that are written crookedly. What is even more surprising to me is that the author also portrays many unimportant little characters vividly and makes people feel deeply involved. Not to mention the protagonists, even the character cards can be described with care and bring out a lot of emotions and imagination. It is really successful in character portrayal! I really like this work so much, so when I found out that the author was heartbroken in the end and chose to end the work directly, I felt really sad. I felt sad not only for the author who created it with such care, but also for this work and every character in it whose soul was written out! Their story should have continued, even if the protagonists live in a sad world, I want to see it till the end even though I shed tears! If I want to talk about a shortcoming, I think it might be that the name is too casual, right? Finally, I would like to thank July Wutong for creating this wonderful novel, and I hope that the author can continue to write. Whether it is this work or the next work, I hope to read July Wutong's works again! If writing a novel is really too tiring, I recommend the author to write a script for Killing. If July Wutong releases a script for Killing, I will definitely buy it and play it!
After reading the introduction, I feel like another person is licking again 😜
No brainer, the writing is broken.
Before the protagonist awakens to the system, even if the root bone is not very good, all other talents are at full level. The only function of the root bone cultivation is to personally participate in the battle and achieve immortality. Whether it is the realm of creating powerful puppets to explode troops, elixirs, healing, or various methods from all walks of life, the protagonist can bypass the gap in basic skills and reach the full level. Through these methods, the protagonist can explode a lot of powerful combat power. This kind of genius actually has a bunch of ignorant clowns who repeatedly make mistakes. Even the original heroine and the experienced old lady are ignorant and subconsciously look down on the protagonist. And as far as the content of the article describes the training experience of the protagonist, my dear, this person has already damaged his bones and potential and cultivated himself several times, and yet he has been able to practice martial arts from scratch many times. This talent and bones are much more powerful than the original heroine.
You can't just watch memories year after year. What the male protagonist cares about is the female protagonist's efforts to advance the loser, but she has not done anything for the male protagonist, so is there any meaning in re-watching the male protagonist's efforts for her? ? ? ? ? ? , As a husband should not pay for a wife? It should! But you can't pay for a wife who keeps giving but doesn't give back, so what's the point of always showing the heroine the efforts of the hero without showing the harm the heroine did to the hero in her previous life? ? ? , Emotions have never been able to sublimate. Therefore, there is no problem for a man to join the army in place of his wife. If there is no memory of how the heroine behaved after returning from the battlefield, this book would not be written at all. It doesn't make any sense.
The female protagonist is green tea + the gold-worshiping girl, and the male protagonist lives a dog-licking life. What's there to see?
It's funny, the plot is a bit broken, right?
Although in principle there is no need to think too much about the novel, I thought the protagonist kept licking the heroine at the beginning But in the emotional fragments, they seemed to have a good relationship, and I was very curious about how they would hurt each other before they became enemies How could those five years be greater than so many years of tenderness... In the other relationship line, so far, there has been no good response to the male protagonist, only the feelings in the system have been upgraded. Isn't this just another person licking (
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Protagonist: A spiritual mistress and licker who has been a fiancée for five hundred years in her previous life. The fiancée of the protagonist in his previous life: As a ruthless and unrighteous person, he became the leader of the righteous path in his previous life, but as a cold-hearted and ungrateful person, he actually got the husband-chasing crematorium system in this life. The protagonist's current fiancée: a woman who is good at wielding a hoe. Original Moon Lord 69: A rabbit who cannot wield a hoe. In his past life, he clearly hinted that the protagonist was treated like a donkey many times. In this life, he was almost made into a braised rabbit head by the protagonist when they met. I probably couldn't stand the rabbit part anymore. The plot can basically be guessed at a glance.
I really can't blame the heroine for being like that. The main reason is that the hero licks too much. He licks his own status to the point where he is worse than a dog. Everyone who licks him feels like a waste. As long as you can show off your talent to others, the final outcome will be more than that.
November 15, 2023
The doting wife system in this book is a failure. If this book is not written about this system, it will be a good book if it is written well. If it is not written about this system, this book will be a real wife-loving article. Author, when you decided to write a system, did you ever think about whether this so-called wife-loving is really a wife-loving article? Just like if you are very rich and then donate 1 million to charity, various media outlets are eager to tell the world, are you really doing charity for the sake of charity? Are you sure you're not a loser who loves her dog but can't help but never forget her? Why does the love between the male protagonist and the female protagonist need an outsider to support it? Come on, let's change the route. Without the system, the protagonist takes the protagonist's Yangguan Road, and the empress takes the empress' single-plank bridge. The protagonist and the heroine love each other every day until the end of his life, and the queen finally walks towards the throne. But what does this have to do with the protagonist? After all, after rebirth, the empress is just a stranger who was once engaged to the protagonist. The empress didn't love the protagonist in her previous life. Will she love her in this life just because the protagonist stopped licking her? What is this "cheap" love for? Is this love? It is better to make the empress into an emperor who only has grand ambitions and the world in her heart. She can no longer hold anything else in her heart. When writing the protagonist, write about how to use the memory of 500 years in advance to develop the love between the family and the heroine. In other words, after the male protagonist is reborn, he doesn't want to leave his fate in the hands of others. He wants to surpass his previous life and become stronger than the empress. Let the protagonist swing the sword for 10 years, 20 years, 30 years and 100 years, 10,000 times, 20,000 times and 30,000 times a day. At the same time, he still has the energy to carry out daily life with the female protagonist. Even if he loses in the end, I will praise the protagonist as a real man.
If you dare to go back and get back together with your ex-wife, then give up the book
I always feel that the plot is a bit inconsistent now
I feel that apart from the initial statement that the Queen was too indifferent to Su Yan, there are only 18 memory fragments. In fact, Shen Xiaoxue also does special things and has the emotions she should have. The problem usually lies in Shen Xiaoxue not knowing what the male protagonist has done, and the male protagonist himself has no idea. Said, if it is not to prepare for the clean-up in the later stage, I think it can pave the way for some of Shen Xiaoxue's utilitarianism. For example, but if it is to prepare for the clean-up in the later stage, the male protagonist's disgust for Shen Xiaoxue feels a bit too much.
Kill kill kill
Can Shen be killed? If she doesn't die, how can the protagonist repay the injustice he suffered in his previous life?
A group of people surrounded Shen, who was destined to suck her blood, but she thought she was really stunned. The truth was that she was not useful. She sucked her husband's blood, but she also needed her husband's blood to support those people. She could do whatever those people wanted her to do, Feiwu.
Who copied whom
According to the title "In your previous life, you married a good-for-nothing woman despite everyone's objections", station b can publish at least five or six books, and a bunch of QQ books have different titles, so who is firing whom?
Chapter 266 The deep night
Shen Xiaoxue was lying on the bed. I don't know what year or month this is. I only remember that day when she looked for Su Yan and told him the truth. Su Yan's response was expressionless: "I know, you go, we don't have to see you again." Then Shen Xiaoxue's Taoist heart was broken, her cultivation was no longer there, her aura was greatly reduced, and her appearance was also aging rapidly. Shen Xiaoxue stood like a dead tree for a long time. She didn't know how long it took before she left. She knew she didn't have much time. In the days that followed, she learned how to live the dead, found a quiet and uninhabited place, and slowly waited for death to come. I am so confused that I don't know how fast time passes. Yes, how can I live with Su Yan by my side. Su Yan doesn't see her, and she doesn't want to see Su Yan anymore. It wasn't because she didn't want to, but because of his appearance. She didn't want to see Su Yan with this appearance. Shen Xiaoxue also tried it, cheered up and continued practicing. But the old wounds on the body can be healed physically, but not the heart. The broken state of mind is too serious. The collapse of her Taoist heart prevented her from any possibility of cultivation. "Is this the day?" Shen Xiaoxue muttered to himself in a cave, as a former genius. She also had some foresight about death. Shen Xiaoxue closed her eyes and recalled everything in her two lives. I don't know whether to laugh or be annoyed. But tears kept falling from my eyes. Just like the drizzle outside the cave, it blurs the scenery. Her eyes were also hazy. At this time, in front of Shen Xiaoxue, a white light lit up, which was a door. A figure walked out. Shen Xiaoxue was confused and said, the resemblance is too great. His body was shocked. "Madam, I'm late." That voice must be him, it's him, Su Yan! Even if they haven't seen each other for many years, Shen Xiaoxue can still confirm it. Because that was the sound she wanted to hear day and night! Shen Xiaoxue seemed to be saying something, but it felt like something was stuck in her throat, and she cried even harder. It was better now. She couldn't even see Su Yan's face clearly before she died. She worked hard with both hands and kept wiping away tears, but in the end she couldn't keep up with the tears. Seeing her like this, Su Yan stopped talking. Instead, Su Haha laughed. "Madam, please take this elixir first." Su Yandu's voice was too gentle. Shen Xiaoxue wondered why Su Yan was doing this. But now she has so many thoughts in her mind that she doesn't know how to speak. Su Yan walked to Shen Xiaoxue's bedside and fed the white elixir into Shen Xiaoxue's mouth. The elixir has no grade or anything, just like a white glass bead. But it's too round, smooth, and white. The moment the elixir was imported, it disappeared into nothing. It's like there is no entrance. But Shen Xiaoxue felt it, and her body was recovering. In an instant, all her cultivation levels were back, and her innate spiritual roots were completely gone, something that no one had ever seen before. This is not over yet, her cultivation is still rising until she becomes emperor. Her appearance finally changed back to that beautiful Shen Xiaoxue. Without the vision of heaven and earth, there was nothing. Shen Xiaoxue became the emperor in such an ordinary way, as if it should be like this. "Su Yan." She could only say these two words now, but there was a sense of grievance and sincerity in her tone. She is so confused now, why is Su Yan here, what is the elixir, and how did I become an enlightened emperor? "Hey~ Madam, my husband is here." Su Yan replied, his tone still too gentle. Shen Xiaoxue doesn't care anymore. She doesn't care about anything. Nothing is important anymore. She doesn't want to think about what's going on now. Nothing is as important as Su Yan in front of her now. Shen Xiaoxue hugged Su Yan's neck and hugged her tightly, fearing that Su Yan would disappear in the next second. His face rested on Su Yan's shoulder. If an ordinary person was hugged like this, his body would explode and die. "Wow wow wow, why are you tired, wow wow wow, I thought, wow wow wow." Shen Xiaoxue cried so hard that she couldn't even speak clearly. To be honest, it was quite ugly to cry. The rain outside the cave also became heavier, the trees were blown wildly, and the flowers and plants also swayed here and there. Su Yan let Shen Xiaoxue hold her like this, crying. Su Yan was heartbroken when he saw Shen Xiaoxue like this. Su Yan then put his hand on Shen Xiaoxue's back and patted it gently. After a while, the crying stopped and the rain stopped. "Madam, let's go." Su Yan said with a gentle tone. There was no sound for a long time. "Asleep." Su Yan looked at Shen Xiaoxue, the tenderness in his eyes almost overflowing. Shen Xiaoxue is very beautiful. Even if she cries like this, she will be confused. Su Yan can't help but be stunned for a moment. Then, Su Yan felt funny, this girl actually fell asleep like this? Shen Xiaoxue's hands were still wrapped around Su Yan's neck, and Su Yan gave Shen Xiaoxue a princess hug. Then he walked into the portal with Shen Xiaoxue in his arms. There is nothingness inside the portal. There is only a spherical object that is as big as the mouth of a bowl, glowing, and floating in the air. There is a transparent ice coffin not far away, but there is a layer of fog on the surface of the crystal coffin, so it is difficult to see clearly inside. Through the blurred shadow, there seems to be a peerless beauty inside. After entering through the portal, Su Yan just held Shen Xiaoxue, motionless. Su Yan looked at Shen Xiaoxue with a beautiful heart. Su Yan didn't dare to move because he was afraid of waking up Shen Xiaoxue, and it was not bad now. A moment later, Shen Xiaoxue woke up. It wasn't that she didn't sleep well, she slept very comfortably. Over the years, he had been hurt both mentally and physically, and he never let her have a good night's sleep without letting him go. When I woke up, I just thought of Su Yan. Why did Su Yan come to her? Is it a dream? She wanted to make sure. Shen Xiaoxue opened her eyes suddenly, only to see Su Yan staring at her intently, and her face turned red. But she thought this was good, so she had to shyly bury her head in Su Yan's chest. "Madam, wake up!" Su Yan said excitedly, still gentle. Shen Xiaoxue became even more shy when she heard the word "wife". She tried her best to bury her head in Su Yan's arms. "Well, I'm awake," Shen Xiaoxue said softly. Then the two of them stopped talking, and Shen Xiaoxue actually fell asleep again! ? Maybe it's because I feel safe in Su Yan's arms, or maybe it's because I haven't had a good night's sleep in these years and I want to sleep again. After an unknown amount of time, Shen Xiaoxue finally woke up, her eyes blurred by sleep. Seeing that she was still in Su Yan's arms, Su Yan was still standing, still holding her, and still looking at her. Then he got down from his arms shyly. "Su Yan, what's going on?" Shen Xiaoxue said in confusion. She was awake now and it all felt weird. Then Shen Xiaoxue used his spiritual consciousness to explore Su Yan. Su Yan didn't resist, he couldn't resist anyway. She found that it was Su Yan. In addition to his physical body being too strong, his spirit was also stronger, and he also had no cultivation. He was like a mortal, with no cultivation at all. These points were very strange. Others are exactly the same as Su Yan! It seemed that his talent and talent were better, but she couldn't recognize the talent and talent in Su Yan. Shen Xiaoxue was about to speak again. Su Yan blocked her mouth with his lips. The shy look on her face finally disappeared, but it rose again. Parting her lips, Su Yan said, "Madam, just listen to me." Although Su Yan's words were gentle, they were a bit sad. "It was a long time ago, and I don't remember it. Anyway, it was a long time ago. It was the same as the "previous life" you experienced, you couldn't practice. I also never gave up on you, and I loved you very much. The only difference is that I am an unprecedented world-destroying genius. When I was young, I was overwhelmed by the beauty of heaven and earth, but you, my wife, are a mortal and have never had any chance to change your life. " Shen Xiaoxue was confused and wanted to speak again. Su Yan pointed at Shen Xiaoxue's lips. "Madam, listen to what I have to say." Shen Xiaoxue calmed down. "I created my own cultivation method, which can only be used by me. It was later confirmed that the method of immortality and the method of reincarnation are all self-created, and no one can practice it anymore and cannot pass it on. The method I created has made full use of my talents. During this period, I also loved my wife. But the lady is a mortal after all! A mortal's lifespan is only a few decades. So I tried my best to find heavenly materials and earthly treasures for you, but the effect was not good, but at least it worked. I am getting stronger, but the lady is slowly fading. The lady herself is just a medicine, hahaha. Many people wanted to steal you and use it to make elixirs, but they were all destroyed by me. After a few times in the future, no one dared to challenge you. We lived in peace and harmony until your 499th birthday. During this period, I also traveled across the past, present and future. I already thought I had found a way to live forever for you! But when it's time to approach your 500th birthday, I realize there's a problem. You can't absorb the medicine any more. If you do, you'll probably explode and die. Why am I so stupid! A mortal body can only endure so much! 500 Years is the limit. I went crazy. I started to pursue the way of heaven, to ask about the way of heaven, to pursue all things, and to ask about all things. Finally, I reached the time of Hongmeng Yiqi, and that was the beginning and the end. No matter how much I chased or asked, there was absolutely no result. My wife's 500th birthday was getting closer. I was anxious, and I used the last resort to save you even if I destroyed the world. I built this ice coffin. By absorbing the Hongmeng Qi, the Hongmeng Qi is the beginning and end of all things, and is the reincarnation. After that, I will use all my cultivation power to wrap you up, and use the ice coffin's stopping effect to save my wife. It's just that these are all false. If the lady stops thinking, she will be no different from a dead person. After that, I stayed with the lady for a long time. I began to recall the past, trying to understand the secret of immortality. I carefully watched and pondered the memories of everything in the past, present and future. I don't know how long it took me to understand. Although I am an unprecedented genius, everything can achieve eternal life! Why? I have traveled through the past, present, and future, and I have met several immortals like me. But I ignored one person. She was the first immortal I met. At that time, I only asked about her method of immortality, but not her birth. After asking about it, I realized for the first time that the method of immortality is my own, and no one else can use it. Even if it is taught to me, it is useless, so she passed it on to me. I can see that the method she taught me is the method of immortality, but I can't learn it. What she said is true. That was the first time I was desperate. The treasures of heaven and earth are useless, and the method is useless. Later, I realized that when I recalled her past, I thought she was a genius who could transcend eternity, but I was wrong. She was born as a mortal and realized the Tao with her body and mind. So, that lady must be able to do it too! So I took out a piece of my wife's soul, took out Hongmeng, put our souls in, and started to calculate our eternal existence. In fact, I created a world and put the two of us in it, haha. It's just that in case something happens, everything in the world is set to a fixed value before we are born. Then it's you and me, who are constantly enlightening in Hongmeng." "So that trace of soul is me?" Shen Xiaoxue asked. "Of course it's my wife." Su Yan smiled. "Then are you still my husband?" Shen Xiaoxue asked carefully. "Of course, every time I reincarnate, I put away the memory and merge it with myself. In my head, there are trillions of lives of you and me." Su Yan said. "What about me? What about my memories of each reincarnation? You said that my thoughts are no longer functioning. Even if I wake up, how can I remember spending all the eternity with you. Then am I not a tool for you to use? Even if I wake up, it will only be your Shen Xiaoxue waking up!" Shen Xiaoxue was furious. Although she was dull, she understood the problem. "Madam, you are indeed a lady. She has a straight temper, but she is still stupid. Hahaha, but this is my lady." Su Yan was not ashamed or angry, but smiled. "Let's go, let's take a look at the ice coffin before we leave." Su Yan took Shen Xiaoxue's hand and walked to the ice coffin. There is a thin layer of water mist on the ice coffin, but you can still vaguely see a peerless beauty inside. Su Yan gently wiped away some of the water mist on the ice coffin with his hand, and through that point, he saw Shen Xiaoxue. Still beautiful. There were stars floating around her, but they didn't move and felt lifeless. "I have put all my wife's memories of eternity in this ice coffin. Those stars are my memories of eternity. But inside the ice coffin, everything stops, and I wrap you with all my cultivation and stop your thoughts. So these memories can only be melted into it when you wake up." Su Yan said, his tone of voice was very gentle, but a little sad. "Husband..." Shen Xiaoxue knew that she had wrongly blamed Su Yan again, and her tone was full of guilt. Damn it, why can't I change my temper? , Shen Xiaoxue said in her heart. "Hahaha, I know what the lady is thinking at the moment, but I just like this kind of lady. This kind of lady is my wife!" Su Yan laughed.
My current personal preference is that Shen is greater than Gu
It's really a joke from hell
It's really a joke from hell. The male protagonist is not incompetent, nor is he without talent. His talent is purely based on the path of immortality. In this broken world view, only martial arts is the mainstream, and immortality has not yet been born, causing the male protagonist to waste a long time on martial arts.
It's a very well written book. Why does it end like this? It's so annoying.
At first I thought the male protagonist was miserable, but now I think the female protagonist is really miserable.
It's disgusting to write this.
So the emotional lines written by all the female characters are not as good as those of the heroine Shen, and then the author is crazy about coding Unless one day you tell the readers that Gu is Shen, who escaped death as a substitute in the past life, and is the current devil of TM The heroine was protected by the male protagonist in her last life. It's great. I can't say whether this is good or bad But I just said Isn't it worthy of the seven-generation pure love God of War? (In one chapter, the male protagonist recruits the incarnation of the Sixth Shen Shen) The male protagonist and Gu gave birth to two children. The key is that these two children are demon seeds under the influence of the devil I didn't know who was cheating on whom for a moment
There's something about this comment section
When I came in and saw more than 400 entries on average, I thought the writing was okay, but it turned out that the two of them had scolded each other for hundreds of floors, hahaha.
This book is so depressing. Personally, I feel that the author is excellent at describing the miserable environment and the emotional line. After watching it, I didn't feel that Shen Xiaoxue really felt sorry for the male protagonist. Even though the male protagonist did a lot silently behind the female protagonist's back, the female protagonist didn't know it. After knowing it, she still felt very guilty about the male protagonist. She would also seek revenge for the male protagonist. She even had a daughter, and Shen Xiaoxue also loved the male protagonist very much. Personally, I feel that the female protagonist did owe the male protagonist a lot in her previous life, but it was done consensually, so there is no need to vent in this life.
The female protagonist of this book is really miserable. The male protagonist works silently and does not say anything but pretends to be trash and a clown. In the end, he is rejected by the female protagonist and hates her because of love. After rebirth, the heroine still has to pay silently and be tortured by her conscience
It's hard to calm down
We owe each other nothing in the world of mortals. In the second life, I don't want to be associated with it and be contaminated by cause and effect. Why let Shen see the memory I feel pitiful for Shen
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{"NickName":"Book Friends 20190329154023398","UserId":329471888} Can you tell me clearly what is so miserable about Gu Flies?