After Being Terminated, I Dominated Football

The author's book is considered good in the entire football literature, but the reason why it is not very popular is from my own point of view. The protagonist should have special skills, that is, what makes him different from others (maximum header level, full body level, maximal shooting skills), so the rhythm of improving a little bit first and then slowly developing other things should not be messy, and the six dimensions of the protagonist are a bit average. Secondly, the existence of golden fingers is too low 😥

The rhythm is quite good, but I can't stand the fact that the protagonist is a banana man. It's like planning a big boss, and I feel uncomfortable just looking at it.

{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}{"TopicId":"883753710793785344","TopicName":"Chui Ding"} A passionate white football article! Being chased and abandoned, the protagonist was terminated by Barcelona at the beginning, gained the system, joined Manchester City, and gradually brought a mid-to-lower Premier League team to the top. The whole book is a very standard football article, every point is very standard, there is no ink at the beginning, the traditional system, investment and making money. The rhythm is tight, the plot is refreshing, the writing is smooth, and there are no obvious shortcomings. It is recommended for book friends who like football articles. Book title: After being terminated, I dominated football Author: Mr. Xi Xi Type: Sports, football Tags: system, counterattack, passion, Premier League Number of words: 30,000 words, serialized Evaluation: seedlings, food and grass Overview of the work: The protagonist is kicked out by Barcelona at the beginning, gets the system, gets rewards for completing tasks, adds points, joins Manchester City, gets a red card in his first show, and then starts a journey to dominate football... Brief comments on highlights: 1. The rhythm is full, and he is sent a red card in his first show, which is unexpected! There is no sloppiness in the rhythm. Different from other football articles that start with a lot of foreshadowing, this book directly introduces the identity of the protagonist without even mentioning what happened before the time travel, which is not important at all. Then he was directly kicked out by Barcelona in the first chapter, gained the system in the second chapter, and later joined Manchester City, received novice rewards, and completed system tasks... Standard dilemma - golden finger - a pretentious plot. Of course, just when I thought the protagonist would show off his talents in his debut, something unexpected happened: The protagonist won the ruby ​​battle card. This red card exceeded my expectations and was a surprise. Secondly, it can make players more integrated into the team. After all, taking a red card is regarded as one of their own. 2. The interaction with the characters is real and vivid. The protagonist interacts with his agent La Fatty and Basara Porta at the beginning, and both images are perfectly displayed. The profit-seeking businessman and the hostile Laporta. After joining Manchester City later, his interactions with teammates and opponents also showed the style of the Premier League of that era. De Jong, Kompany, Joe Hart, the still-growing Little Fulden, the old youngster Milner, Torres... As the new season is about to start, people can't help but recall every detail of the previous Premier League. To sum up, it is recommended for book lovers who like cool football stories to read.

Ma De: The purpose of writing about national pigs is not to disgust the protagonist, but to disgust the readers.

I have no objection

There is nothing wrong with the attributes, but the protagonist is really funny. I don't know why the authors of football articles now like to write the protagonist as violent and violent. And you, a reborn person, can't be calm at all. If you can't control your emotions on the football field, it is a typical failure.

Is there a book where the main character has been famous since he was a child? Just like LPL Jack's Dirty Dancing, all fans across the country know that there is such a super genius who has not yet debuted, and he will be at his peak when he debuts.

You can write a purely foreign football novel about the mental journey of the slums of Argentina and Brazil. Cristiano Ronaldo can be used as a template. His father is an alcoholic, his mother has never wanted him but she has no money to have an abortion. Ronaldo is also a tough man who runs every day and does all kinds of things.

Is there anyone like Lao Tie who can give you money? I told you not to write about the national football team!

Are there any domestic female celebrities? It's all written badly abroad.

Once you develop a habit, you are afraid of eating it💩

When writing about sports, it's better not to write about football, and what's more, it's about the national football team. If you want to write about the national football team, you can't watch the national football team at all. Raising any hope is disrespectful to the national football team

The initial attributes are too low, the writing performance is too good, and it feels weird.

It looks good, but it doesn't feel good. When it's time to feel good, I'll give you a basin of cold water 😅 Speechless

I am an Arsenal fan, and this book was okay at first, but then I started saying Nana, which is really outrageous. Today I say Nana, but tomorrow I might say Nana, mango, or toilet.

Chapter 1 What the hell is like Sergi Roberto? He is 1.84 Meters tall, has certain foot skills, has no shortcomings in all aspects, and has superb shooting skills. Isn't this template the model of Shevchenko? In the UEFA Champions League from 1997 to 1998, Dynamo Kiev beat Barcelona 4-0 at Camp Nou, and Sheva was all-powerful in white.

In football novels, when the protagonist is Chinese, the results of the novel are often not very good. Because it's easy to get into trouble.

If you don't understand, just ask, is Barcelona very hateful? I have read several books about people who were trained in the youth training of Barcelona, ​​and were eventually abandoned and then took revenge.

What's going on? Let me know if anything happens.

Does anyone have any spoilers about whether he joined the national football team? If he did, he would withdraw in advance. Thanks 🙂

What would a game be called a popular game if it didn't have a shady undertone?

If anyone has stepped into a thunderstorm, please tell me whether it involves the national football team, so that you can avoid thunderstorms. This national football thing is pure shit

When did you have a girlfriend? Which chapter😰

Why did the update stop? I didn't ask for leave and didn't say when I would update again.