While Others Are Practicing Leveling, I Am Cultivating Immortality, and I Will Survive Until I Reach Mahayana and Then Leave the Mountain.

No matter how much you delete the comments, your novel is still a piece of literature. It starts high and ends low. The description is very good at the beginning, but there are a lot of details in the back. You have buried all the foreshadowings and don't fill in the details. You can forget all about your settings. You only used two color talents. This is not a bad ending. You are trying to sublimate the dog's tail.

The whole thing reveals the beauty of AI writing. 🙂

Sorry it's really ugly, The following lightning protection - - - - - - - -- - - - In terms of subject matter The simulator novel is not bad But the plot is the same The male protagonist always looks dead no matter what talent he draws Every time he draws any talent, he only has a sense of existence for the first time. Body, if you don't practice Qi well, you have to do dual cultivation. Just practice it. If you don't need it, just use swordsmanship all day long. After the swordsmanship of human earth and heaven, body training is useless. Why practice this body? Isn't it good? Concentrate on one thing and change what you want at a time As for the setting, this book has been eating and drinking. The author himself does not admit it. At least you have to round it out, and it is not round at all It is said that the Nine Turns Golden Pill is so awesome. You can fight across realms, just like eating and drinking water. But there is no such thing at all. Just fight an old dog. At the beginning of the simulation, he was seriously injured by Luo Shuying's move. After Luo Shuying became a legend, he could only fight for dozens of rounds. It was said that Zong Laogou was just an ordinary god. He lost three Nascent Soul puppets and many magic weapons, and was finally defeated. Zong Laogou turned into the Great Perfection of Soul Transformation. He was a veteran transformer who threw out seven Nascent Soul puppets to resist ? ? ? ? Brother, what do you think of and what do you write? The books that are popular right now are either the plots are exciting, twists and turns and bizarre Or they are the masters of simulators Your simulator is so good at simulating things, why don't you do it well The plot is not twists and turns nor bizarre The information you can get from each simulation is only a little bit You never make good use of the information you can get The point is that you keep simulating like this You might as well just live for several weeks What difficulties does the protagonist encounter when he ascends to a certain state Then there is the matter of cultivating immortals The only profession seems to be quite advanced In the end, as long as you have the cultivation techniques, spiritual energy and spiritual roots, you can practice Other professions have experience in killing monsters, and they can level up by killing monsters. It's good to level up, comparable to the Fourth Natural Disaster As a result, you are the only hidden profession. Not to mention the difficulty of upgrading, you need to take pills to break through. It is worse than ordinary immortal cultivators. If you were any other professional, even the most ordinary one would have succeeded long ago What is the significance of your only hidden profession? The protagonist has nothing to compare with others Even if he keeps piling up perfect cultivation every time and lays the most stable foundation every time, it is difficult to achieve the same level of fighting ability It is like two people with the same weight A person who punches 100 kilograms and a person who punches 50 kilograms stand and fight each other You told me that the person who punched 100 kilograms took a lot of effort to win Did you eat up his power? It is said that cultivating immortals is the evolution of life levels As a result, the protagonist's brain is not very good, it is difficult to even carry something, and he is in a different state later on. His memory is still as bad as that of a thirty-year-old middle-aged man. Headache? ?

It's hard to evaluate Poor writing, poor logic, a bunch of bad jokes, and a running account. It seems mindless, but it's addictive. The most difficult thing to accept is the irrigation, but the others are fine.

Progress: Chapter 50 Overall evaluation: Taibaijinxing Problem: After all, the simulator is just a tool, which can bring profit predictions. In at least the first 50 chapters, the proportion of simulators is ridiculously high. People become the starting tools of the simulator, and reality is unimportant in comparison. The simulator is indeed very easy and comfortable to write due to its repetitive nature. The character image is very poor. I feel like I have never written a biography of the character. The character's personality jumps repeatedly. The name of the protagonist can be changed 3 or 4 times in a short period of time. The dialogue also lacks personal personality. It was easy to write, and the characters have nothing to remember except their names. Xiasanlu warrior, for the simulator events that need to be repeated crazily, it is necessary to write down the Xiasanlu every time. It is of little significance and is very watery. The dialogue is sparse. I don't know if the author is not good enough. He doesn't like to write character dialogue. He always uses some third-person perspective to fool the past, and expresses it in the form of "What did A do to B next?" This is a huge reason for the thinness of the characters. Character creation is stretched. Nowadays, template villains are not a problem, but it is rare to see so few protagonists. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is as casual as a flesh-and-blood business. There is no foreshadowing and no meaning. It is no different from the heroines who click and get away in the trash emperor game (others at least have Zhang Lihui) The writing style gap does not refer to the writing style. Obviously, there is a big problem in characterization. I hope to compare it with better books to see the details of the description, write a little biography of the characters (at least the protagonist), and don't jump around repeatedly in the character.

If you don't spend any money and don't take the time to play, you'd still be willing to watch it.

It was okay in the early stage, but errors started to appear frequently in the middle stage, and the pace was too slow. At the same time, the logic started to have some minor problems.

Understand! ! ! !

It's too much like a matryoshka doll to break up the facial features. I feel quite bored in an inexplicable moment. I have entered the sage mode. Goodbye!

The biggest shortcoming is that it focuses too much on the simulated world. There is not much description of the plot of the main world, but the main line is very clear. The protagonist has been changing in order to save the world. If you ignore some poisonous points, it is still possible to pass the time.

The writing is quite good, but I feel that the internal strife of the human race is serious, and this advent sect is so extreme. Why are there so many people? Could it be that at that time people's outlook on life was so explosive?

Please allow me to rant. Did the author suffer from an attack of Mary's disease? In the simulated situation, I transformed into a foreign race. I didn't even think about climbing to a high position so as to steal information. I just thought about not killing other people every day, thinking about leaking information, releasing information, etc. Please let the author think clearly, this is a simulation, a simulation, not real. The simulated character will be reset after death. Since it can be reset, why do we have to care about the human casualties during the simulation? Just like when you play a game, do you care about the death of the characters in the game? Since it can be reset, and since everything is virtual, what does the author want to express by still acting like this?

I'm paralyzed. Not to mention killing enemies across levels, the protagonist can't even do it when he's invincible at the same level. He was blasted by a dragon guardian of the same level. What's the use of the limit breakthroughs and perfect advancements that were mentioned earlier? Or is it because the protagonist has made perfect breakthroughs in the past, otherwise, would he still be defeated by the dragon guardian?

I finally couldn't stand it anymore. The author has no basic respect for the strong. He speaks like a dragon when he opens his mouth, and an old dog when he shuts up. He is only the imaginary enemy of the protagonist. The author turns into a low-quality person and talks nonsense. This shows the author's character! It is not easy to keep writing the novel until now. I hope the author can save a little bit of moral integrity for himself and leave a non-vulgar novel environment for readers!

I'm so frustrated, over and over again, a red moon chapter 400 is still the ultimate villain, don't always catch a boss. The plot basically doesn't advance, it just simulates, upgrades, and simulates again. For similar movies, you can check out "My Simulated Path to Immortality" or "I Kidnapped the Timeline". I've never seen you so cool.

Before it was released, the protagonist worked hard to break through the Yuanying. After taking the medicine, his consciousness could actually cover fifty meters. When I saw this, I took a breath. The ancestor of the Yuanying was so terrifying 😰

The level of combat power is really amazing, return to void = legendary. The protagonist practices both physical and qi cultivation, and each stage is maxed out, but he can barely compete with others of the same level, 👍👍

I can accept that the author's article is bad, I can accept that the author cannot do arithmetic and cannot calculate various prices, and I can also accept that the author's writing is illogical. But author, can you write more pleasantly, can you not make the protagonist such a waste, can you not suppress the protagonist's combat power, the protagonist is such a waste, I really can't stand it. Will the protagonist die if he is more awesome? Or would you not be able to continue writing if the main character was too awesome?

It's outrageous, what kind of god can read this with such water? It's a top-notch product. It's really hard to stay in the top 20 on the monthly ticket list. It's best to have a big hand to control it.

After half of the problem, I found 7 or 8 ways to start restricting it. I didn't dare to write a novel about the concept of a multiverse before it even started, for fear that the protagonist would be too powerful to write. How outrageous.

The most ex I have ever seen. I thought I would be happy after entering the Qingyun Sect, but I was soul-searched again in a few seconds. This is the most rubbish protagonist I have ever seen. The whole process is either tortured or tortured. This is not how to suppress the strength. The whole article is about small ones, old ones, old ones, dead ones, and even older ones. Is there anything else besides matryoshka dolls? I can read the title and read it. The whole process is exactly the same. Please give me some money.

This must be my first comment or post after reading a book for so long. I really can't stand it anymore. It stands to reason that if you have achieved Dzogchen, you will be at the pinnacle of the peer-to-peer legend. Good guy, with your physical and mental abilities, you can fight against the legendary peak monsters. So what's the use of the Nine-turn Golden Pill you did earlier? When each realm is reached, the result will be a back-and-forth fight with the same realm. That's it?

Let's just say, Nascent Soul can't fly yet? I understand that your foundation building can't fly. I can barely understand that the golden elixir can't fly. But the Nascent Soul can't fly yet? ? ? Then you, the only cultivator of immortality, are so weak? ? ? I suggest you read the table of contents after reading a hundred chapters of this novel. It is no different from reading a novel.

I'm very curious how this one got 10,000 monthly votes 🙂. After seeing chapter 300, I can only say that the author is too good at suppressing the battle.

The content is quite interesting, but the logic is confusing, you deny your own setting, you make the attentive readers uncomfortable, and the ending ends hastily, which is a pity.

Pure dry food can be regarded as the creation of a new school. It takes decades of practice to become a god before you can cut out the sword light. The most serious cultivators of immortals have this ability, right? The protagonist is really a waste, with a bunch of heaven-defying talents in him, not to mention leapfrogging even a person of the same level who came from the end of the magic. You are not as good as Gui Gui. At least Gui Gui Gou became a killer of the same level after he started, specializing in killing Lao Deng.

The novice author is trying to lower his wits. He doesn't match the previous and the last. It doesn't matter what the water is. As long as you can see it, it's fine. But can you change the word "God's Mansion" to "god"? Shen's Mansion means "mansion," the residence of the gods, and "god" means the god. This typo makes me uncomfortable 😅

This is the first time I've posted a post and I've read about a hundred chapters. I really can't stand it anymore. The elixir I practiced was upgraded layer by layer by others, and I ate the same elixir a thousand times that of others without any upgrades. That cultivation of immortality is useless, it consumes a lot of resources, has useless combat power, is slow to upgrade, and is beaten by people in the same realm. Except for its longevity, it has no other merits. Really awesome. The good reviews are all other things. For the sake of word count, I kept simulating and lifting my hips to death.

I couldn't stand it anymore, and I became addicted after seeing more than 200 chapters As a novel that is obviously a refreshing novel, it is basically not refreshing at all! Upgraded -> got blasted by a higher level one -> continued to upgrade -> got blasted by a higher level one Just like this, the cycle goes back and forth, highlighting the difficulty of leveling up first, then after leveling up, you should be blasted and continue to be blasted.

Really stupid to the extreme. I just want to ask, why? Before this Red Moon was resurrected, she only understood the seventh law of death. As a result, the great human race has wasted millions of years without reaching the eighth place. How could he reach the eighth place from the seventh place in a hundred years, if they were really so strong when they first came out. It is simply impossible for the human race to persist for so long.