I Became an Observer, an Alien God

Let me first explain that the following is just my personal opinion. It is not my pointer or inexplicable preaching. It is just my thoughts so far. At most, it can give the author a reference or feedback. I feel that this book becomes a bit "bland" as it goes on. It's not that the plot is bland, but the senses and descriptions are a bit bland. The part where the gods rise in the early stage is the most interesting part to me so far. Up to what I have seen (not long after the Yi people met Su Qi), the parts of the Eternal Day Empire, the Game of Gods, the Dreamland, the Origin of Extraterrestrials, other races, etc., Made me feel very mixed. Most of the plots in the book took place in the Eternal Day Empire of the Son of Light, but other parts always suddenly appeared. The key to the description of many consecutive chapters is that there are too many different maps. The changes these parts have brought to the protagonist, the Children of Light, and the Eternal Sun Empire are always mentioned in one stroke (or there is no positive description). It is difficult not to give me the illusion of a hammer here and there (note, I said an illusion). In addition, I personally think that since the protagonist is a god and the main race is a race that is very different from humans like the Sons of Light, when writing about Dreamland or other races, why not describe more about the Sons of Light and the god Su Qi in their eyes? Since it is a Cthulhu theme, the unknowns and secrets represented by gods, alien races, etc. Should account for a large proportion. The more powerful or mysterious the records of the Children of Light and Su Qi from other races are, it will bring a lot of satisfaction to me. After all, the main person I am representing must be Su Qi or the Children of Light. Other than these, I think this book is pretty good, especially if the author is a newcomer (seemingly). The description of each Su Qi, the description of the beliefs and characters of the Sons of Light, the respect and reverence of the Sons of Light for the god Su Qi, especially the description of time. Finally, I wish the author will get better and better as he writes more and his grades will get higher😃

I feel that the main character is a bit low quality, and the group portraits are also average. For a novel like this, you can actually refer to The Soul of Negri, but it is also very good for the first time to write to this level. Come on, let's just practice it.

The author is so inspiring. You can still persevere with such miserable data. Come on.

Your book is probably a reference to Godzilla the Old Ones. The book talks about how dangerous water is in the middle and late stages.

I invested, I hope the author will update it stably and help me earn some coins (funny)

I have seen a world that has been interfered with, where history and society have been distorted, and people danced the dance called destruction along their fingertips. But when they got tired of playing, the merciless doomsday was given, and countless cries and prayers were ineffective. Even the desperate struggle of mankind was used as an accelerant for destruction. Even if there were kind-hearted beings who wanted to protect mankind in the end, they only allowed mankind to survive for a few years before being completely extinct. "The weird things on the ground seem to be born to destroy humans" "The gods in this world are evil and willful" Having experienced a world where "the continuation of the race is a luxury", it is incredible to see any neutral or kind gods.

Recently, due to Jian Ying's increasingly busy schedule and the fact that he has run out of manuscripts, many problems suddenly appeared which caught me off guard. Many readers must have also discovered that there are quite a few problems with the latest chapters. Based on this problem, I decided to temporarily change it to one update for two days to sort out my outline and fine-tune the plot. In fact, I felt like I was in a hurry before, but the first book has just begun to take shape, and readers who don't want to read the book or support it think I want to delay the update. However, the problems of the book itself have begun to appear, so I decided to adjust the plot in a single update first. I am very sorry to the readers of my book, I'm sorry! <(_ _)> I also remembered that this was my first book. I didn't want to become a god at the beginning, I just wanted to write my own story, but I was still blinded by all kinds of things... I would like to express my gratitude and apology to the readers who gave me monthly tickets and rewards, the book friends who are reading my book, and the passers-by who accidentally clicked in...

By the way, can these light beings evolve into Ultraman?

Not bad, very good. There are no big problems. Except for the slow growth of clone level, the construction promotion is very attractive. At present, overall the fairy grass

After reading the first dozen chapters, I would like to talk about my own reading experience. It is well written and interesting. It makes me want to read. However, the sentence language needs to be refined and polished, so that readers can have another great writer 😌 Because when I read it myself, I have to be a little more careful in order to clearly understand the meaning to be expressed and to connect the pictures in my mind. This means that reading is a little strenuous, but the author's first book can be written to this level. It is really awesome, and he has the talent of a great god. (Only personal reading experience, there may be errors, please forgive me if there is any offense)

Very well written, good luck to the author!

Would a Cthulhu god care about bacteria? That's ridiculous

Refining

It was originally good, but why did I create a human clone again and keep writing about the clone? 😡

Descriptions such as fighting style and extraordinary abilities are too barren. Even though the protagonist is now in ancient times, there is basically no description of the characteristics of the extraordinary race. It feels so boring to read, and the protagonist, as a time traveler, doesn't know about Cthulhu or anything like that? And it's all about Cthulhu, but there's not much madness and mystery in the text. It feels almost meaningless.

When will the author's protagonist go to Earth?

If the author wants to write about technological civilization, he can refer to the civilization levels of "Rebirth: Super Battleship". I feel that the book is well written.

It's a good book, but why aren't there many people reading it? I hope this book can become popular. I don't want to run out of books to read.

The protagonist's current physical form (Ability is limited, just have a rough idea)

I fell into deep grief. I only raised it for a few days. Why did it end? I doubt that there will be no female protagonist in my life (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ)

It becomes boring after Chapter 40. The protagonist is like a black hole spirit, a black hole spirit ps alien god

It's similar to the book about Godzilla the Ancient God.

Salted fish spikes!

I have something to do today, so I may have to post it a little later. I'm very sorry <(_ _)>

Refining

So far, it looks pretty good. The protagonist needs to explore more of his potential and develop his brain. Knowledge is power.

Did the author make a mistake again?

The word "memory" is missing, Chapter 25

First

I would like to give you a suggestion. If the plot cannot be broken up and seems very scattered, try the book "Surviving the Fourth Natural Disaster" to increase the information density