Dou Po: Rebirth Ninth Grade Pill

What are you writing about? The hatred of destroying the Tao will never end, okay?

Did the author write it to disgust people?

Why do you write it like this? Brothers who read Shuangwen can run away.

With over 20 pieces of this garbage on the shelves, who would read it? Only elementary school students can watch it.

To fight against Xiao Yan, you must first deal with Xiao Xun'er's love brain.

The author shouldn't care about other people's comments. I think the writing is quite good. Just think of this film as a parallel world of Dou Po. I'm tired of seeing Xiao Yan pretending to be cool. Why not let Nalan Yanran be the protagonist this time? However, we should not overly suppress Xiao Yan. Xiao Yan is not as popular as Tang San, and his character design is not bad, and he attaches great importance to love and righteousness. Since the protagonist and Nalan Yanran robbed Xiao Yan of opportunities and women in the original plot, and they develop later, don't deliberately target them. For Xiao Yan, we can make up for it later by giving the original protagonist Xiao Yan some opportunities that are not weaker than those in the original work. It would be better if the protagonists, Nalan Yanran and Xiao Yan, become emperors, beat up the Soul Emperor, and then use the source energy to turn the original Five Emperors Po Kong into the Eight Emperors Po Kong. Wouldn't this be better? The readers are satisfied, the logic is fluent, and some regrets in the original plot are made up for. It is a win-win situation for both the author and the reader. I hope the author can adopt it.

Haha, that's interesting😁

The beginning is here, so poisonous. Don't look at it. What rubbish?

This writing is not bad, it is equivalent to replacing Yao Lao Xiao Yan with Nalan Yanran and the protagonist. It's like swapping identities. The first few chapters look like this, but I haven't read the last few chapters yet.

Xiao Yan has Yao Lao and Nalan Yanran has a fighting saint who takes the form of a ninth-grade golden elixir.

I think it's actually okay. I hope that the details of the original work can be closely followed. Fan fiction is most taboo about drastically changing the character's personality, so I hope to control the details. The plot of the personal grandfather is best continued until Nalan Yanran goes to Douzong, and after the three-year agreement is perfectly resolved, the independent entities can be restored. The plot and writing are both exciting. You can experience the small things in daily life, and I think the Yunlan Sect on Anti-Inflammation Sanshang can also be continued. The "rampant" of Yunshan, the wind and smoke, I can't let you go down Yunlan Mountain alive today, Haibodong's classic fighting skills, the black ice dragon flying, and the nobility and elegance of Yun Yun. So I hope to pay attention to the details, and you can also watch more videos to find inspiration.

Don't you dare to write invincible articles? Why should you suppress them?