Since You Are Reborn, Let's Not Let It Go Bad

[Recommendation] Rebirth, returning to the year when you ran away from home, should you choose to make the same mistakes as before, or should you stay where you are and try to change everything? Why do those who love me cage me, why do they wait in vain? I must try to change everything, definitely! [Status of the work] Book title: Since you are reborn, let's not let it go. Type of work: Urban Tag of the work: Rebirth, counterattack, pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, teacher Author: Yang Zaijia [Summary of the work] Lu Zhongwen was reborn and returned to the year when he ran away from home. He decided not to leave this time, but to stay and try to change everything. My father made that phone call and became a teacher. A teacher is a role model and a student. A warm yet romantic relationship, a sincere yet regretful relationship, is slowly unfolding for us in the author's writing. [Reason for Recommendation] The author has profound writing skills and is very experienced. The pace of the whole text is very brisk and not lengthy. The description of the characters, especially the protagonist's father, made me burst into tears when I saw him calling his former student Guodong late at night. My father's love is silent. Although he is not good at expressing it in words, he is always giving silently. Similarly, the author's description of the environment is also very detailed. Regarding the details of that era, thinking about the bus driver, the specific decoration of the avenue, and the buildings, they are all very detailed, which shows that the author has put in a lot of effort. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

My dear, since we are all Laobiao, I suddenly came over to talk to you. I see that the two Hong Kong comprehensive novels written by you are quite good in terms of writing style and creativity. But it will die because you are superfluous and superfluous. The first time I read your novel was Gandhi's fruit book. How can you write about Gandhi? Gandhi is the only one who has experienced Infernal Affairs. When you write about Nidhi, you will have customers to support you. It's like when I write about the dwarf gentleman, there are no others. It's a first-come-first-served basis. The second book is by Shi Jian. I decided to read it because I read a novel three years ago called "Nine Uncle Series: Laozi Shi Jian". The story is really well written. But you went too far and went so far as to write about a second personality. You are anti-Leftist and very few people are willing to write like this. As I said at the beginning, I think your writing style is really good. The writing style is average and the creative framework is not bad. I don't know if you just wrote it casually to pass the time, it must be to promote Cantonese. If it is to pass the time to promote Cantonese, as a Guangzhou native, I very much agree, but to promote Cantonese using novel software, it is better to make popular science videos. If you write to make money for a living, how willing are you to change? I have an idea that you can try. Continue to use the name (Shi Jian) ​​and write about Hong Kong Gui, because many people in IKEA see Senior Brother Shi Jian's thunder skills, and compared with the little golden finger, but it cannot be a system flow (such as a family heirloom jade pendant for time travel, strong mental power, etc.), Everyone is tired of being an undercover Gan in the system every day. Then use the orthodox writing method, don't add any unnecessary extravagance or go eccentric. From the shallower to the deeper, fight monsters and upgrade the flow.      ，，，（） Just because you like to write novels in Cantonese, I suddenly write reviews in Cantonese better than you. You are considered the first. I hope you can write a complete Hong Kong mystery novel, and I hope you can make money writing novels💰    I hope you know.

It's a mule or a horse, I can tell at a glance

A large section of Chapter 3 has been removed from the shelves. I'll see where I can post it and make it up later.