Doomsday Warhammer: Start with a Gollum

A high elf recruit dares to call the protagonist a monkey when he comes out 6, even the boss who is the younger brother is also awesome 😅😅

I thought it was like being a war lord, but now there are only two lizards and one ogre, and the ogre is still dead. The number of zombies is comparable to the game of World War of the Dead, 😅

Using a cowardly and cowardly person as a pig's trotters. The author is Shi Lezhi and directly withdraws most people.

As a 40k hammer, I have nothing to say

After reading a little bit, I couldn't stand the writing. The pig's feet described looked like a fool.

The protagonist is like a little fairy who can't think of anything in her head. She is always afraid and talking nonsense, and she has not grown at all.

I haven't played the game, but I've read the novel. What route do you want to take, author? The protagonist's ability is to summon, and depending on the situation, it should be a large army. You are a corps-style summoner, but you haven't shown the ability to lead yet. "Generals and commanders", the protagonist has not shown it! The author should think about it and try his best to show the protagonist's advantages and portray the protagonist like a "protagonist". The protagonist Wu didn't show any attractive sparkle. He felt that he was not as good as a supporting character. Otherwise, we should revise it now and change it to a protagonist.

I feel like this can be remedied if you don't know the background of Warhammer, but there are a few points that I think may be for screening readers. Anyway, I find it quite uncomfortable. First of all, don't suppress the protagonist too much. There are also high-level zombies in the entire world, and there are more than ten chapters. Nearly 200,000 words, no matter how much we suppress it, we should have a thousand troops. Thousands of people are not enough to control an administrative district. If this continues, it will actually be enough to write about two million words. And let alone the invincible flow, at least the protagonist must be the eldest brother, not the younger brother of others.

The evaluation is that the plot is not like the novels of 20 or 20 years old. Not to mention, more than 70 pictures are still playing house I am really curious whether the author knows about the unpopular thing in China, apart from the game Total War, is there any other way?

There can be a whole behemoth. Who doesn't have a behemoth in total war?

The writing is quite clumsy and the main character is annoying to watch. The inner drama is not well written and has to be written. It seems that the main character is grinding and grinding, making him look like a third-rate literary youth.

This protagonist makes people feel very irritated after watching it

Rubbish, the protagonist is rubbish. Goldfinger is obviously very powerful, but he never knows how to use it. He spends the whole process on the run, causing trouble, and then being blamed by his classmates and teachers. After that, the protagonist feels guilty. He has the ability to kill the little boss, but he insists on letting it go, waiting for it to grow up and hide in the dark to cause trouble for himself. The protagonist has no decisiveness and wit.

After reading Chapter 2, I sighed: To be honest, you are really useless. Opening the door and leaving a ten centimeter gap to block it with the sofa is 100 times safer than running out to kill. You are such a useless person and you have killed one, but their recruits are ten times stronger than you.

I can actually read Chapter 22... I won't comment on the subject matter, but the writing style is truly new. Suggest changes to the content? After writing, do you read it yourself before posting?

I can't stand it anymore. You have a powerful ogre and you are afraid that a group of students will escape.

After reading the comments, the author has a skill 🙂

The weasel was written so disgustingly. Not only was the style wrong, but it was also very clever. It made a bunch of college students play around, and they were not sure whether they were dead or not in a head-on confrontation. Also, the mythical beast couldn't accurately find the location of the little demon. This mythical beast was too lame.

Is the protagonist based on the author himself?

😥It's really annoying to keep writing about political correctness

Is the protagonist going to hide in the room and starve to death at the beginning? How many years do you need to consider a decision?

Soon, we will enter the real main plot. I wrote these mainly to reflect the contrast. Blood for the Blood God, skulls for the Skull Throne!!!

Just two chapters? That's not enough.

It can develop stably. I feel that if there is no stable place in the end of the world, it will not last long. I don't want to write too much. As a writer, I should pay attention to these things.

Let's see how it is written later. The current mode is mainly based on small team combat. We need to speed up the current progress so that it can be transformed into large-scale combat relatively smoothly. If it is the kind that only summons elites or heroes, the monsters can be written in a small-scale way, with more elites and less expensive ones. But now we have to have cannon fodder, and ghouls are okay. Personally, I think the most suitable cannon fodder is skeletons.

It's reasonable. It's okay. Come on, author.

It's well written, why don't you update it?

The author is actually from Daqing. It's amazing. I'm from Daqing too.

The writing is okay, but it's a bit confusing. I've just finished reading it now. Why don't you say it? There is a lot more that can be written later, but seeing as the author has the attitude to finish the book, it may be because there are too few readers The protagonist has a growth process, and the writing is very good. The wariness of the four gods changes from heavy to light, and the plot of being stabbed in the back is not unexpected. I just can't take care of people who want to have fun. Come on, author, there are not many novels that respect one's summoned objects in one sentence It is not an exaggeration to say that they are rare. Looking at those novels, the plots that treat a life as a plaything are really enough.