Torres at His Peak at the Start

Let me share some reasons why I personally think this football article is a masterpiece. The first is the visual sense of event scenes and personal highlight moments. Throughout the description of the game scenes in the work, the words and sentences are concise, clear but not pale. Teacher Qiu is good at creating scenes and atmosphere through many fragmentary elements such as the character's own actions, the perspective and behavior of the supporting characters, the words and deeds of the "background" characters, and so on. Just like Mr. Qiu's favorite game narrative method of "one score and one total", it accurately summarizes the ever-changing and fierce game of the entire game. The protagonist is the most outstanding and calm and unrestrained in his skills. Clip 1, excerpted from Chapter 45 - "Look at his position selection, center of gravity movement, stopping the ball, judgment of Vidic, De Gea and even the goal behind him, and the technical choice of the final shot, perfect!" Clip 2, excerpted from Chapter 47 - "Facing the unexpected throw-in ball by Baynes... He decided to break into the penalty area in an instant. And then faced the players in front of him. People's defense, without panicked kicks or other unnecessary movements, connected with several people, raised the knife and dropped it..." It is precisely because of Teacher Qiu's skill in refining and depicting game scenes that he allowed countless fragments to be aggregated and connected together to construct a lifelike grand picture, which vividly and gracefully depicts the dynamics of the players' fierce competition and deepens the readers' immersive sense of presence. The second is that the rhythm of the story is appropriate. There is no over-preparation or too much detail in the progress of the game. The rhythm is tight and interlocking. The background and character of the protagonist are also well controlled and conveyed in the chapters. The third is the shaping of the protagonist's character. The protagonist's character interpretation and emotional expression in the game won my heart. He is calm but not indifferent, calm but not enthusiastic, restrained but not stubborn - this is the true attitude of a strong man. Football is played with your feet, how can you play football well by describing piles of trash talk? Many authors now set up the protagonist to be trash-talked by other characters or both sides trash-talk each other, and they are complacent when they win. I don't like it. But it must be understood that the plot needs to be understandable, just one or two sentences or even once or twice, but the continuous and repeated trash talk output plot recurs. Don't tell me that this is a tactic or a need for story advancement. I just want to yell - garbage! Get out of this scum plot full of excrement! This [Beep One One]! It's just that the author's writing skills are not good. Enough, a "disgusting prop" that forcibly promotes the plot! Returning to this work, the interesting adjustments, exaggerations of the military and even daily plots interspersed in the work are relatively moderate. This does not mean that you cannot tell wisecracks, make jokes, and write about family reunions. The key is to master the work-rest balance of the storyline and the appreciation of both refined and popular tastes, and you must be good at writing these plots. The plots that are always funny and cute, malicious slaps in the face, and other plots, as well as the so-called warm daily plots of love exchanges and so-called self-admiration that are based on experience, or the pure love of the perfect match, and the Neptune Theater that passes through thousands of flowers without leaving a single leaf behind, will only appear to be empty and vulgar. So far, Teacher Qiu's work has not shown any obvious poisonous points. Finally, I would like to make some personal suggestions: do what you are good at, add scenes appropriately, and do not let small decorative emotional scenes and daily plots ruin the excitement of the main line of the work. 😄 I wish Teacher Qiu's writing will be fruitful and her talents will spring up.

What's the matter with the current writers? They are so secretive about everything they do. The team is useless, the coach is useless, and the opponent is useless. Because the data is too good, injuries occur and they are treated as glass. Wouldn't you be able to write without these?

Torres was not as cool as he was in his profile when he was at his peak.

Is the author talking about the peak Ultraman Torres?

I feel that if a 17-year-old body is paired with Torres' skills, it will be easy to hurt the body, because the body is not fully mature yet.

Niubi, others screen readers at the beginning, but your introduction screens readers from the beginning.

Just a personal opinion. If you are a fan of Torres, you won't want to read this book if you see the Torres template appearing at Everton.

What you wrote is a bit nonsense. Don't say that your current body cannot support the strength of Torres in his prime. Even Torres in his true prime did not score as many goals as you wrote.

Um~~How can I play in the Premier League if I have Chinese nationality and no talent clause?

. It's impossible to evaluate, just see for yourselves.

There was a problem with the setting at the beginning. Torres was given peak skills, but without Torres's peak body, skills and football intelligence, then those skills would most likely be useless and would not be used at all. You have to say that the template covers the body, etc., Then it is considered feasible.

The author should be faster. I feel like the author was a little excited when he was writing. It was a bit exciting, but the rhythm was a little wrong? It was like a big car running rampant and making several S-turns in the middle. Then the wording is a bit strange. . Can you finish uploading Catch the Bugs? But overall the writing is good, the setting, plot and exciting points are there. As long as the number of updates is reached, the results should be good🥰.

Torres at his peak at the start is useless.

He only inherited peak skills, not peak physical fitness, a 17-year-old body. . .

It's not that refreshing, it's written in a bland way. After reading more than twenty chapters, I have no desire to read further.

The center template must be Van Basten and Shevchenko

Please read more and love to read The author's writing style is good, much better than the many short stories currently produced.

Whose vest is this? This style is very familiar to Shuangwen.

Is there a national football team? If so, I won't waste my time watching it.

Good book, update soon, but don't write too outrageously

Well written, wonderfully written, please give me more updates

Come on! I still like football⚽️Cool article

I'll give you two monthly votes and update soon.

Be sure to subscribe when it's on the shelves, update soon