Tiga: Civilization Observation, Super Ancient Log Exposed

It's too complicated, I've filled in everything. He is obviously an observer, but he is doing the work of an interferer. The protagonist's role is to get some knowledge and then give it away. The golden finger of mankind?

What a good setting... It can be written like this... And that Civilization Observer clay tablet, just let the GPC members take a look, what's the point of broadcasting it globally, the level of Civilization Observation suddenly dropped. There's also the way the characters talk, brother, don't you think it's weird? It feels like having a conversation with elementary school students. Is there anything I can do about it: localization... The settings are a bit lame, the writing style needs to be changed, and the writing is not good. This is just my opinion, I hope the author gets better and better. .

In view of the complaints from readers, the author has revised the book from beginning to end. You can start reading it again from Chapter 1. In order to avoid misleading new readers, the author has reluctantly deleted all the book reviews. The data has dropped, which is painful. Okay, I know you want to spray me, but don't rush to spray me now. Just watch it again and then spray me. If you are unhappy, just spray me. There is a countdown of 3 seconds and start spraying!

First of all, let's talk about the advantages: physical time travel is very good, and then let's talk about the poisonous points. After Chapter 25, they are all poisonous points.

Your introduction is much more interesting than the main text.

My eyes lit up when I saw the introduction, but my eyes darkened when I saw the comment section.

It's said to be observation, but it turns out it keeps interfering.

Really, author, do you really understand what readers want to see? It's not a huge foreshadowing, nor a flowing article. What readers want is the highlight of the protagonist, a novel system, and a story about the protagonist's continuous strengthening. It's okay not to pay now. You can write such a long chapter to describe the supporting characters, but when it comes to the payment stage, do you think readers will buy it? You can write like this. Please think carefully about the plot behind it, okay? The reason why the protagonist of a novel is the protagonist is because he is the protagonist in most of the novel. Alas😔, hurry, hurry!

How to write like a studio modular article?

I just finished reading Chapter 5 and felt so sick.

The introduction and ideas are very good. After all, there are too many pitfalls in the Tiga universe. It has a huge world view and you can interact with other Ultramen. After all, Old Man Jia has traveled through many universes and saved countless civilizations. But your writing skills need to be improved, so add it to your favorites. After all, there are too few super-ancient novels.

The monster is on the first level. Target. The second level of humanity. Drama. The third level of the protagonist. Humanoid puppet. The fourth layer of the system. Everything has been arranged for you

The introduction was full of fans, and the comment section turned dark 😰

And if you continue writing according to this, Japan will no longer dominate the world. At least you can write it from a human perspective. Where does the fastest technological development come from? It comes from comparison, and maintains a balance among each other.

The best Ultraman fanfic I've read so far is the one about Gorzan's Infinite Evolution. It's a rare setting with good writing. The author might as well follow his example.

Author, I just read a few chapters, and I have an idea. I have always felt that it is better to teach a man to fish than to teach him to fish. Why not give the protagonist skills to learn?