Let You Be on the Love Show, and You Will Become a Top-Notch Person!

The previous part was okay, but the script was just average. This kind of false accusation is the worst of all.

This is an excellent piece of romance writing, keep up the good work

It looks good. It would be nice if I could update one more chapter.

What you wrote is good, it's very interesting. Let's comment and support each other, okay? (Nodding head 😘)

First of all, welcome to all of you to read my work and visit the Heartbeat House~ Eiko understands the joy of raising books, but after updating the chapters, please use your little hands to turn to the last page of the book. Reading is so important for new books, especially new books by newcomers (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄), don't raise electronic pets, oooooo_(:з∠)_, let's see if we can make a second-round recommendation~ Secondly, Xiaorongzi hopes to see the fanart pictures posted by everyone~ Look at the Bai Yueguang in your hearts, hehehe ~ Finally, everyone is welcome to recommend songs and variety shows. Eiko can use her not-so-developed brain to think of a story that is not too bad and graft it into it 😍 Thank you for reading, this is my first time for you (ಡωಡ)

No. 14

The script dragged on for the last few chapters, and the first time I sang to show off my talent, I didn't get into tune, and I felt like I didn't catch the climax.

Not bad, better than the down-to-earth one

In this book, the audience is obsessed with gender. Oh, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, obviously crazy about the female guest, but how can she be a fairy template? The dialogue plot is a bit awkward, like the tone of a girl that someone who has never been exposed to girls imagines. There is also a male protagonist, who can be a snake oil, but not a teddy. Such people may be popular in nightclubs, but since it is mainly about campus amateurs, you still have to be a little persistent. College students are clear and stupid, which does not mean that Aquaman can be king.

I hope I won't become a eunuch in the middle, it's very well written 😃😃

Single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists, single female protagonist, I will leave now

The feature of this book is not the love story, but the comedy scene, which made me laugh to death.

At the beginning, I saw the male protagonist running to the girls' locker room every day and couldn't stand it anymore.

Such rumors, especially those related to innocence, are fine if they are placed on a marginal character, but she is not someone who cannot be cleansed. From then on, passers-by's impression of her has been fixed, and the novel is originally about reading the text and having pictures in the mind.

What do you write about? , Is this character so frivolous?

I would like to ask, is this an imaginary world (without characters from this world) or a parallel world (with some characters from this world)?

The writing is really good, but I discovered it too early, it's only 130,000 words, and it's even more uncomfortable to follow it 😭

There is too much plagiarism at the starting point now 😅

The previous one was pretty good, but suddenly the whole internet exploded. I couldn't watch it any longer. The plot was incoherent if I skipped it. If I didn't skip it, it wouldn't feel any better. It's boring.

After reading the first five chapters, the biggest problem is that there are no explosive points. Apart from writing about women, the male protagonist's whole life has no sense of substitution, no sense of satisfaction, and no sense of contrast.

The characters are three-dimensional, I love Qiaoer Ling'er the most. Gou Shengzi and Zhang Gou are also very good. HyunA and the third male may have too little writing and are not three-dimensional, but it is not because of the writing power. It is just a lack of plot. It hurts that such an excellent novel is not alive. Please post more about this chapter. It is really good 😭

I guessed that more than half of the novels written for variety shows now use live broadcasts, and each chapter is indispensable with barrage comments. This kind of irrigation setting is really too routine.

After the romance drama ended, it wasn't as good as before.

I found a book with exactly the same content as this one, but the title is different and the number of words is more than yours 😠😠You know 🤐