My Dream Connects to Another World

It feels like it was written more than ten years ago

Author, your economic system has collapsed, don't you know?

Why forcefully reduce intelligence? The relationship between humans and elves is written as if the protagonist is a fool.

The acting is very good, but the male protagonist's mentality is really bad. It's so annoying to watch.

Is the period key on the author's keyboard pressed down? ? Why do you keep using commas instead of periods? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

Why does the author force the protagonist to become wise? If you're in good shape after drinking, you won't feel dizzy at all, so don't be funny, okay? Makes readers look stupid

Clear soup with little water, it feels like urban literature from more than ten years ago

This novel has too many holes. Never cleaning the battlefield, forget about the protagonist, the supporting characters were born into poverty and yet they are so generous.

This plot is too pretentious. You can travel through time and have super powers. How can you go to a factory and drive screws so hard? I don't care about time travel at all. Is there something wrong with my brain? I'm already hooked up with the elves. Is it interesting to waste money on real girls? When he met the slave-catching team, he acted coquettishly and pretended to be reasonable. '' "I don't know what's going on between you" is sick 😡 This is not just a matter of bald man's head, it's obvious. It's not enough to lower the enemy's intelligence, but also to lower your own intelligence 😡

Chapter 23: Death from Poison This is the first book I've ever reviewed like this, I really can't bear it anymore

I won't say that this novel is a noob or not. The biggest feeling after reading it is that the author is really good at it. As long as he is able to insert punctuation marks, he will definitely insert them! In one sentence, can be separated by commas, must be separated! Ten sentences! There are eight sentences! At the end, there must be an exclamation mark! Half a sentence, or even two words, have to start a new paragraph! I, doubt it! The author is so good, isn't it? Every half sentence, press the space, press to, like starting a new paragraph, !

You should classify it into light novels, with a strong anime flavor

In Chapter 28, where did the author start to show off after watching a bunch of people being tortured and killed? Is the author serious?

I really like this kind of subject matter, but what you wrote, the author, is also really poisonous.

Facts have proved that adding points cannot solve the problem that the protagonist is mentally retarded.

What the hell? If you sell diamonds, you'll get 10% back. If someone turns against you and doesn't recognize them, you won't give them any money.

It feels like this is an online novel from 20 years ago

Add more refinement! ! !