Pretending to Be Bankrupt, I Was Kicked Out of the Family Chat Group

I read the introduction and thought it was because both my parents died. I sent a message about bankruptcy to the family group to borrow money. My relatives said that your parents' inheritance has been used up? But after she started reading, her parents were sitting next to her when she sent the message?

It was fun to read at first, but the subsequent descriptions were really speechless. Why do I feel that the heroine has a Mary Sue halo above her head, and every move can blind other people's eyes. To put it simply, it is very empty. It can be seen that the author cannot describe the character's actions, language, mental state, appearance, environment, etc. He can only use infinite Mary Sue rainbow farts to make the heroine look awesome. It's OK I accept that the writing is bad, but there is still room for improvement. I just want to complain that it's very tiring to watch like this. I haven't remembered anything after reading it for a long time. Every move of the heroine is in my mind, which makes the air feel fresher. 😅😅😅 I hope you won't continue to skimp on the number of words and write well. If you don't be afraid of bad writing, just don't be afraid of not trying.

I just read the introduction and made a complaint. If a person can't even borrow money for food, that's not a problem with his relatives, but a problem with his personal character.

I can only say that the writing is really average.

You act like a prodigal son and then blame your relatives for refusing to lend money? Do you think other people's money comes from strong winds?

Looking at my profile, I want to say that your relatives are willing to lend you money and you do this?

After reading the comments, I had some luck and came in to check it out, but the result was really outrageous. There are long paragraphs of language; the character descriptions are pale and weak; the introduction of both parents is dead and the content is that the parents are still alive? I can only say that the author was obviously very excited when writing, and the readers could not be immersed in it at all. I just felt a little embarrassed (face covering)

Is it possible to write a novel about a female protagonist if you write like this? Are female videos so bad?

When I saw the competition for 10 million deposits, I gave up. There are a few people like me.

The heroine's father is just a child who won't grow up! He still wants to be recognized by his stepmother and father all day long. He has no self-esteem even if he is bankrupt and is criticized by his family! He is often held back and is the pig teammate in the heroine's family! It made me vomit!

An interface basically has one at the end of each sentence Um, I'm a bit unaccustomed to it.

I've read a few chapters and I just can't stand it anymore, I've lost my mind

Just abandon one chapter, it's too bad