Who Is Still Getting Married After Being Reborn?

Just write it like this, it's comfortable to read. Don't fall into the trap of writing urban novels, where you just pretend to be cool all day long. The most important thing in urban novels is the characters, followed by the overall feeling. Describe the characters carefully, maintain a fresh novel atmosphere, and be appropriately pretentious. I believe your book will be a success!

The love story is well written. But the career line is not written well. The male protagonist doesn't look like a CEO of a big company at all. Anyone can be embarrassed. Funny as well. What is the difference between you, who is worth several billion, and an ordinary college student?

Xu's parents are too poisonous. Not only do they have a grudge against the male protagonist, they were probably her parents who took Xu away in the previous life, and they were also the ones who drugged Jiang. The protagonist's idea of ​​not killing Xu's parents is unclear.

This book is actually not bad, but the only problem is that it doesn't catch the current readers' enjoyment. When I read Chapter 29, it wasn't that I didn't like it, and I wasn't persuaded to quit, but it just wasn't attractive enough to keep me reading. Personally speaking, that ex-girlfriend Xu wrote too much. She is unreal and only cries and has no other outstanding features. As for my career, I have a website with a good friend that contains too much text and is annoying to read. Also, buying lottery tickets was more fun to make a fortune, but the time span was too long, and the sense of expectation was exhausted. The writing is good, but not attractive enough.

Your heroine combines two actresses that I don't like. It should be said that Tang Yan is indeed very beautiful, but overall she is too gorgeous. When I saw her for the first time, I only had the idea of ​​having sex with her directly, but not the idea of ​​falling in love. Ni Ni is also very beautiful, and I like her face shape, but it doesn't match her eyes, a pair of extremely aggressive eyes, which make her look like a strong woman. In fact, the first impression she gave me was that I seemed to see a mistress, a very ambitious mistress. The other person who makes people have no desire is Zhao Liying. Yes, I don't even have any interest in her when I see her, but her face shape is the one I like. Jing Tian is similar. She makes people feel uncomfortable at all. She gave it to me who I don't even want, but I also like her appearance.

Overall, after reading this, I would give it a 4 out of 10. I didn't pay attention to some details. I feel that the male protagonist is more affectionate than anyone else. He is not cruel at all (just be cruel to your first love. The key point is that you portrayed your first love well. There is nothing wrong with it. You are completely devoted to the male protagonist. I don't completely blame him in the past life. I just I blame myself for being so ordinary) I really don't like that Jiang Yuyan acting like a monster and having children. She made such a big deal without telling one person about having a child. It made me speechless. The male protagonist didn't take it to heart when he noticed it. The latest plot was completely his own. Give others the opportunity to let the male protagonist be a dog.

In the previous life, Xu was probably tricked by her parents. Xu's father would be more vicious and difficult to deal with. Jiang doesn't know if he will avenge her. One is the matter of drugging. If there is no male protagonist, Jiang will be dealt with. There is also the fact that Jiang was killed in his previous life. If these are not solved, it will be unreasonable.

This book is not poignant, and the writing style is delicate and rich, unlike those hydrographs. I feel that the structure of the author's book is a bit big. When I read the beginning, I even felt that it was okay not to write about the rebirth at the end. Also, is the girl Xu who went on a blind date at the beginning the same as Xu Qingdai after her rebirth? I feel that the author has great ideas, and there are endless possibilities for subsequent content ideas... I feel that if it is finished, it may be better than Chen Gou's. Come on, the author, don't be a eunuch 🌹🌹🌹

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Author, you can either make up all the names of places and famous people, or use homophones for them all! ! Sometimes it is made up, and sometimes it uses homophonic words. Are you tired of reading it? ? ?

Why does the author like to write about being with the enemy's daughter? Is it revenge or is there no other way?

Write more about daily life with girls, and then some girls with various characteristics 😡

Like a fool. I don't want a girlfriend like this. In your previous life, you were your own fault. If you don't do well in the exam, you won't be able to do well in the future. Your girlfriend is still wasting three or four years with you. I still haven't cherished it properly in this life.

The writing is not interesting. If you want to write about love, just write about love. If you want to write about business war, then write about business war. They are not the same. It is not interesting to read in that genre.

Jin Chen didn't understand it recently. I don't know who this is if I'm not a fan of stars, so I'll just talk about the plot of the novel itself. Although the male protagonist keeps saying he is a scumbag, he is actually a saint, he is affectionate and has a bottom line. A normal person in his position would not be able to endure so many temptations. But he is such a moral role model. When he accepted his first love, the little princess, he pulled back and forth, which was cruel and heart-breaking. Recruiting little stars means sharing weal and woe and supporting each other in the rough. Although my aunt was also abrupt, she understood the functional necessity and tolerated it. But Jin Chen really doesn't understand it recently, why did he get involved? If Jin Chen can fuck Xiaoli, can he? Can everyone in the entertainment industry get on the bus? In particular, he deliberately wrote that he didn't bleed on his first night. Oh my god, this is because his brain got too hot and started to poison after getting good grades (in fact, it can also be seen that the author's thinking is already confused). To be honest, Jin Chen has not been able to establish his image as a big secretary. Big secretaries are all mysophobic and love to keep things in check. The small operation and maintenance team is seeing its career getting further and further away. Suddenly he comes to the entertainment industry to hunt for beauty. Are you ready to completely let go of your belt? It's nice to be a stallion, but it's too abrupt, and it conflicts with the logic of the previous male protagonist, and I feel like it's not handled well.

How about you two have a fight first?

Personally, I feel that Xu's father is a bit vicious. He simply doesn't like the Phoenix man. It's a bit outrageous to want to attack the female lead.

It felt strange at first, why the results were not very good. The more I read, the more I understand that the author does it more for his own entertainment and not to make money at all.

The writing was very good, I was looking forward to my first love returning to my country, but it was a pity that it was unfinished 🤔

Top 5 scumbag articles. It's better to force me to be reborn, isn't it? Who's in Love in Rebirth? The two popular books are a good street, and they posted them backwards. I'm actually not satisfied with both of them, which can be called masterpieces.

This rebirth transition is too uncomfortable! I was killed by a car and woke up in the college entrance examination room. Don't I have any ideas? Doesn't it feel unreal? It's a seamless connection! As soon as one person died, the other person opened his eyes and started doing the questions without thinking about anything! And since it's time to travel through time, why are there so many foreshadowings for your blind date? Also set up suspense!

The writing is similar to an idol drama. The three views are also very upright. It is full of blood. There is no logic in the business. I rush to sell songs. In the end, the lottery is the first pot of gold.

I voted for you, remember to be more precise and write well.

Your writing is even better than the system flow. All your wishes come true. He also likes to make things awkward.

There must be something wrong with the sudden abandonment of the article 🪖

Gone? 😅

Finished with flowers. Although it ended too hastily, I can understand it. Looking forward to the author's new book

Didn't the author kill the heroine's father?

The ticket has been given, please write it carefully and don't give me the knife.

This book is well-written, but the author just did it for his own entertainment. There is no climax. After reading more than 20 chapters, I really can't get enough of it. No matter what the article is, you must first make the reader feel involved. Your story is too dramatic. . . .