Doomsday: My Shelter Can Add Special Attributes

I was a little confused when I looked at it. I felt like I had watched it but I didn't seem to have watched it. It was said to be the end of the world but there was no scene of the end except for the skeletons at the beginning. Strictly speaking, the ghosts of the skeletons could not be counted. Then there don't seem to be many value systems and world views. Generally speaking, it is much better than other doomsday survival stories. The key is that the hang-up does not look too outrageous. It seems that the protagonist is not the only one who has the hang-up.

There is a serious problem with the setting. The role of cheats is not reflected at all. Your setting is that survivors arrive in batches, so those who arrive in the early stage must have an advantage. There will be weapons and other sales, and then the protagonist's cheats are bound to the shelter. If you don't think about upgrading the shelter, you will be paddling every day. If you don't cut down the trees, it is said to be dangerous. If you don't do anything, aren't you just waiting to die? If you don't use silver coins to buy resources, you can only buy food and seasonings. As mentioned before, the value of your food will be very low if you arrive early. If you don't quickly use the exploded silver coins to exchange resources for resources to upgrade the shelter, you will be confused. Also, since there are indigenous cities, the role of your entire shelter will plummet. I saw that you wrote that survivors can live directly in indigenous cities, so will no one except the protagonist need a shelter in the future?

After reading Chapter 12, this is too bland. Difficult to substitute

Tell me what you think after reading it 1: A post-apocalyptic survival story. The protagonist has a feeling of doomsday since he first traveled through time. When he meets the local natives, how can it turn into a fantasy adventure story? And the post-apocalyptic story, why are there so few wild monsters (except for the place of birth)? 2: Give me another kind of lord development story, which should not be developed honestly? 3: What is the main plot? Mo As the name suggests, the tree man baby is sent to guard the house, and then one scene goes on to the next. The story has only a few connections (the end of the world) 4: There is not much difference in the level of extraordinary power (a group of level three drags a level four to death) 5: In places with inconvenient transportation, shouldn't all kinds of intelligence information from the world be collected (although there are a lot of useless and impossible to distinguish true from false)?

Build another golden finger card archway, and everyone can share their thoughts in it.

I felt that it was okay at first, but my emotions were ups and downs. I don't know if it was my problem. But later on, I felt that my emotions were not ups and downs. It was just a narrative feeling. I felt that I had entered a state of being in a dead end, and I couldn't get into it.

There is no passion, one chapter is all about setting, and there is no feeling.

The more I watch, the more boring I get (┯_┯)

It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away, it's too bland

You just type by voice. After you finish writing, you have to read it again.

The funny temperament appears, and it feels that it does not fit the theme of the world. The author should just write urban articles.

Speechless. I want to complain when I see 60ml of water. Ordinary mineral water bottles, 550 to 600ml. Ten percent. One sip and it's gone. But that's okay, at least I can still take a sip. There is also a book about survival in the apocalypse, 5ml10ml, the author has no common sense.

If there is storage space, please don't write square meters. It's too weird.

I obviously think it's a good book, but the story line seems to be very inconsistent, and there seems to be a sense of disconnect from time to time. I can't relate to it, and the protagonist's personality and actions are also unpredictable.

So-so, nothing outstanding. Too bland. Put it on the bookshelf first and see what happens next. And the plot design is a bit awkward.

It's too messy, there are too many story lines, I want to write about everything, and I'm writing at the same time. It feels like I'm listening to music through a live broadcast, reading novels and playing games at the same time, with mahjong in front of me.

Very well written. It's actually quite nice to look at. Please keep up the good work

I think it's well written, keep up the good work 🙂