Asking About Covering the Sky, My Brother Hengyu

Isn't it just the author's literary youth problem? In fact, the jokes you thought were funny are vulgar. Just because of your protagonist's name, I believe at least some readers will leave directly, such as me.

I made a reference to the Void book and borrowed a clone flow, but I didn't make it that exaggerated. Jiang Huohuo could only have one clone walking around outside. After all, what I wanted to write was the big boss behind the scenes, and the protagonist wouldn't be too frivolous, and the system was just a decoration, with some hidden information at most. It would be better to write about the Zhetian fan system with a lower sense of presence.

Does this author not even know the difference between Source and Source Stone? The source stone of paralysis is not an energy source like spirit stone! ! ! The source stone is not just a stone like jadeite. There may be miscellaneous sources, pure sources, heterogeneous sources, divine sources, and all kinds of weird resources in it. In the end, it is just a stone before it is cut. Why does the protagonist start practicing while holding the Source Stone at the beginning of the chapter? ? Is your brain flooded? ? ? ? ? ?

After reading three or four chapters, let me tell you, what you wrote about "Zhidian Tian" is not "Zhidian Tian" at all. It smells like the old routine of fantasy novels. Those who have seen Zhetian know that Ziwei is hidden by 80% of the great saints and quasi-emperors. Those who have not seen Zhetian think that Ziwei is ruled by the fairy king. Holy shit, there are three major families in a small town. My day,,,,, the four poles. What you are talking about is when the great road is not obvious. Isn't it just like Beidou? The Taoist palace is the highest in several countries, but you, a Siji family, are still nestled in the same town. . . .

A rush of excitement is coming🤭

The whole thing is speechless =_= What the hell is arranging a chat group? The unnecessary behavior is too poisonous. It is also great to arrange a point of persuasion to detoxify.

The waistcoat can be tolerated, see you again in the avatar

Emperor Hengyu belongs to Ziwei Star, and he has also caused great harm to Ziwei Star.

Why do we need vest flow? 98 Out of 100 books in the Majia genre are destined to die, and there are still two books left for the author to have a seizure. Like Zhetian, you either have to go to the Holy Ruins after the enlightenment, or go to the Holy Ruins after the enlightenment. If the Majia is not popular, there is no such option in Zhetian, right?

Emperor Hengyu: I have a friend who is a human being! Jiang Yanyu: Yes, it's me! 😏

Later, let's have a heroine, the author

Dare to use the name of the Supreme Being without fear of backlash? Just call him Jiang Taijun

Can the protagonist's combat power in this book be at a normal level? It shouldn't be like the Void book where the protagonist is completely invincible.

How about the protagonist and Hengyu fight all over the world and then become enlightened together?

Sometimes I don't understand what the author is thinking? I think the most important thing in fantasy novels like this is the magic and excitement of the world Mere dialogue and description are feeble.

Maybe it's my first time to write a book and there are some bad points in the front that make this book very cold. I didn't expect that the author could insist on updating every day. Come on, just practice, and you can write better in the next book.

There are some bugs here Why can ordinary fourth-level monks transmit the origin of life? I suggest changing it to: After the Supreme takes away the source of life, the source of life is loosened, so it can be passed on to each other.

What a boring novel. It feels quite boring if Zhe Tian doesn't fight. I'm used to Zhe Tian fighting every now and then, but I'm not used to not fighting. After all, in Zhe Tian's world, whoever doesn't obey will be the one who doesn't obey.

What kind of poison are you writing about? This is a collection of poisonous points.

Brother, don't you think this catalog is explosive? ?

The essence of Zhetian practice is to seek strength within and constantly explore the door to one's own potential. For example, in addition to the Wheel and Sea Dao Palace, the human body should also have the five secret realms, the upper, middle and lower Dantian, the five internal organs, the nine orifices of the human body, and the third eye of the pineal gland between the eyebrows. The major acupoints and various meridians of the human body... These human body systems and the five secret realms should be complementary to each other. There are also external spells, apart from various divine forms and visions, treasure spells, the theoretical knowledge of the earth or the technological world like the eternal stars, aren't they a kind of treasure? Gravity, repulsion, electromagnetic force, waves between all things, curvature navigation, biological cloning, genetic viruses, psychology, dream analysis, are the brains of practitioners learning slower than ordinary people? I remember that the local emperor achieved enlightenment based on the waves, vibrations and frequencies between all things, right? Also, the Big Black Hand, although it talks about creating magic, he is essentially playing with genetics. Isn't the power of the ancestors in the blood the genetic information hidden in the genes?

I heard that the protagonist had a doppelganger and slipped away.

By the way, have you opened a trumpet account? I saw a book called, Covering the Sky: The Immortal Body of the Supreme Being

Isn't he the author of my brother Void? ? ?