
The Legend of the Dragon King: Time Travel to Tang Wulin at the Beginning
龙王传说:开局穿越成唐舞麟
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- Ongoing
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- 140k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
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- Qidian
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It feels like the writing is messy. The first level of seal was originally 70%, but it was written as 60%, and it was unsealed three years later. This makes the previous options to choose the seal percentage seem very funny, because whether you choose it or not will be unsealed three years later, and there is no change after unsealing. You wrote that Wu Zhangkong, a cold-faced man, was yelling and stupid, and he also had some minor poison. The routine of being looked down upon when eating on the first floor hundreds of years ago. The protagonist likes to forcefully act cool.
This setting of seizing Tang Wulin's body still looks weird... It would be better if we could travel directly. Isn't the identity of the protagonist still Tang San's son...
Wearing Tang Wulin and rebelling against Tang San ruined his character. Although Tang San had double standards, he was really good to his son. After all, Tang San followed Xiao Wu after she died, so why did he dirty his hands? Wouldn't it be a good idea to inherit the family property after Tang San left?
I finally came across some stories about Tang Wulin. You must write them down. Almost all of them are about Huo Yuhao or Dog Tang San.
Author, how do you deal with Tang San? Although Tang San is a double-standard dog, he is really good to Tang Wulin. Others have the right to scold him, but as his son, they have no such right.
Well, even if his name is not Tang Wulin, then at least his surname must be Tang. Tang Gou arranges adoptive parents. At least the adoptive father arranged is also named Tang. Does it seem that there is a note in the original book? I forgot, it doesn't matter how old you are in time travel and you can say that you have a name called Ye Xingchen. You are a baby and someone else adopts you, but you don't take other people's surnames? By the way, if a normal person adopts a baby, he or she will usually give the baby his or her own surname. Moreover, the baby has no memory, and generally will not tell him that he was picked up. Normally, if you are different from your father, you will tell everyone, are you picked up? If it really doesn't work, you can write a note to Ye Xingchen. In the third golden chapter, you can directly author someone to implant the name into the adoptive father's mind. It's a little bit poisonous.
It doesn't make sense. I remember that in the original work, Tang San had a basket of spiritual consciousness lodged in Tang Wulin. If his soul was changed, Tang San would definitely know it. There are also other spiritual consciousnesses used to contact Tang Hao and A Yin. If his body is taken away, Tang Hao and A Yin will immediately come to kill him.
I think Dou Sanduo is a good heroine, but many people write about a single heroine. It is better to read the original work. Although the original work has a single heroine, she can also have something happen with other girls, and fan fiction is not good.
Dou San is all about a single female protagonist, Gu Yuena, I want to see more female protagonists! Harem! If the author can't make up his mind, he can ask the readers for their opinions. The author writes well. If he writes more female protagonists with a little more seriousness, he will definitely become very popular!
Dou San is essentially hopeless. He is already on the Tang Family Continent. Unless System Wen or another big system comes to experience life in the sewers of Douluo, the overall situation has been decided. Unless he writes a story about being a dog for Buddha.
Since Douluo has eaten books many times and the protagonist is Tang Wulin, I hope the author can explain which version should be used for some more important settings😇such as the strength of the Dragon God and so on
Alas, Dou San is rare. It would be nice if there were multiple female protagonists, the conflicts would be more intense and the content would be more interesting.
This Tang Wulin is not easy to play. Not to mention the starting point, he became Tang San's son. He started with a blue silver grass and natural divine power. In addition, there is nothing, there is no money at home, and nutrition cannot keep up. Without sufficient nutrition, physical fitness cannot be improved much. Not to mention absorbing the power of the Golden Dragon King's bloodline, without the help of genius earth treasures, they would eventually be overwhelmed. He also has a huge appetite. It can be said that as soon as his martial soul awakens, he is working hard to make money and exercise. And at this time, you will be targeted by Gu Yuena. If Gu Yuena didn't change her mind, she would have died on the spot if she had a bad impression of you. There is no truly particularly safe place in Douluo Part 3. I won't give you a chance to survive at all. There are people who believe in the Holy Spirit everywhere. If an ordinary person doesn't have a plug-in, he won't know how to start the game.
In Love Continent, I don't know how the author handles the identity of Gu Yuena's soul beast. The original work is quite disgusting😇
Let's talk about the Emperor of Hades and the Holy Spirit Cult
The Underworld Emperor joined the Holy Spirit Cult in the later period in order to become a god. At that time, Yali expressed shock. She did not expect that the other party would join the Holy Spirit Cult. Moreover, this guy was a lone ranger without any faction. He only wanted to become a god and would do whatever it took to achieve his goal. He once sacrificed blood to a city and killed countless people in order to practice. In addition, the entire Holy Spirit Cult was directly controlled by the Ghost Emperor. Without this sect or that sect, the Demon Emperor would be stronger but would not do anything. There is no redemption sect in the Holy Spirit Religion. It is an organization gathered by a group of evil soul masters. Its business includes kidnapping, murder, and terrorist attacks. The ultimate goal is to kill all living people on Douluo Continent, turn the world into ghosts, collect souls, and establish the divine realm.
When you write that the protagonist is Tang Wulin and the system is already unfair.