I Talk About Dongli in a Difficult Situation

It's true without scheming

Ohho

Enlightenment

The writing is interesting, but most of the people writing about Pili are from Yandu.

I bet I won't be able to write 100 chapters. One update a day is basically a rush.

The updates are up to me and not up to the sky, and the conversation and laughter stop updating in Ling Yandu. Write, there are countless numbers in the world; Gu, I will not survive if I am defeated. ————Yefen

It was quite interesting in the early stage, but as the protagonist played word games and forced his way into action, it seemed that the author was writing this part to have a better time, but in my personal opinion, it was a B-level failure. Later, as the protagonist becomes more and more involved, the plot becomes more and more boring. After all, the essence of Long Aotian Invincible is that the protagonist is the center. The protagonist is absolutely correct and strong, and there are no taboos based on his strength. It's a pity that the protagonist's correctness comes from watching TV dramas through time travel, and his invincibility comes from cheats. Neither of them has anything to do with the protagonist himself. Moreover, the author's own writing skills are insufficient, and his characterization is not good either. These points prevent B grid from being established. The direct consequence of not having a B box is that sometimes you will think that the protagonist is a clown based on his words and deeds... In fact, the early setting is really good. The protagonist is only invincible in the inn, and the guests will not take action unless they break the rules. Moreover, the protagonist's strength does not need to be too high after leaving the inn. He can completely rely on information gaps and outsmarting to stir up trouble. In this way, as long as there are no problems with the plot of Gambit after leaving the inn, the character's B-level will be established, and the fact that his strength depends entirely on cheats will not be too eye-catching. I also want to complain about something. The story told by the protagonist about Zhe Tian is actually based on the original work. The author has no idea what storytelling is like...

Storytelling exposes the literary system, an alternative to Long Aotian. This kind of writing is very embarrassing. If you expose some destiny in the world in various ways, it will be very poisonous.

How can I put it? I've almost seen it. Let me share my opinion. The protagonist uses the system to cheat and improve his ability to the top of the table, and then stands on the commanding heights of the time traveler (screenwriter) to dominate. In the name of being a hero and reversing tragedy, I forcibly carry out dimensionality reduction attacks on a group of characters. I don't know if this can be called refreshing, but I personally feel that this protagonist is too arrogant and has no plans for his own strength and future (if nothing else, at least you have an ideal, or you can cultivate Confucianism to change the reality of dire straits, dire straits, and human life is worse than that of a dog) , or practicing Taoism and studying the great ways, or creating a dynasty to conquer the world, or being a free and easy person in the world, etc.), But if something happens along the way, just blame it on the system. You are only as good as the system. I can only say that you are like a child using a cheat device to play games. He has no skills and looks powerful. It is creepy when you think about it. The first person on the table is like this? Shit stirrer? The more classic one is that when you meet Lao Qi, you start to be reasonable, shrink your eggs, and start to punch hard when you meet other villains. I like to read cool novels, but I think this kind of protagonist is similar to Tang San. He has no inhibitions when he has power, and he becomes timid when he encounters hard problems. It looks very bad. I saw another comment that was quite interesting. The main character is a loser who blames everything on the system. The author made this decision because he couldn't make the story come true. I agree with that. It's not that the system is not good. On the one hand, it took shortcuts. On the other hand, you need to strengthen the characters and the plot. Anyway, I really can't stand it anymore. It's not easy to be a Pili fan, so just watch and cherish it.

Yefen, you have to stand up! Don't forget the bet you and I made in the group. As long as you can still update after I have completed three months of perfect attendance, I will write for Love Power for another three months. You can't lose.

It would be unwise to give up the line of the World Monument. This is an opportunity that can save a lot of unhappiness. It also brings out many behind-the-scenes forces in advance. Wouldn't it be nice to have a big fight? Although it is indeed difficult to write.

The main character is really a jerk

The martial arts division is really finished. Even with 500 votes, I can be ranked in the top ten.

Storytellers are looking for death in a difficult situation. You know that there are too many different people messing with you, and the bosses will arrest you directly after seeing that you know so much. You will have a seat in Yan.

Pili's novel? I'm afraid Yandu is going to increase its power again.

The peaks of Tianchi are towering, The six dragons are unreachable when they return to the sun. But with one shot and one jug of wine, all the heroes were defeated without fail.

The plot is really becoming more and more boring, and the author is even writing two novels. . . Hahahaha

After reading some of this kind of storyteller novels, they don't suit my taste. The feeling is quite novice. The kind of self-review novels are not interesting. The writing style of Pili is quite ridiculous. Sooner or later, I will enter the smoke city.

Why does the author's character Su Huan really not know Shi Yanwen? When Shi Yanwen faked his death and escaped, it was all with Su Huanzhen's help and some planning. The black and white man had Su Huanzhen confront the man hiding the mirror. These are all related. I don't understand why there is a second set?

There are so many plot characters in Pili that can be written about, so why add a storyteller without words! Storytelling novels are the best at word count! Most of the content is about the plot and character introductions in the storybook. There are basically not many realistic plot arrangements. The whole article is about storytelling and describing the characters in the novel ~ I guess this is the same?

Although Pili Puppet Show fan fiction is easy to write, there are many people who watch it, but no one rewards it, and there is no income, so it is difficult to persevere.

Hey, I have written it to this point. Even if I start high and go low, even if it ends poorly, it is still better than going to see a great master!

Is the author preparing to enter the tobacco city? 😰

I feel like Quezhou doesn't have many scenes, and I don't know what will happen to Dimen in the future.

Is the author planning to take up further study in smoking? Don't bother the Grand Master so much 🤫

It's hard to keep writing. If you want to write, you have to change the map. Don't you want the book to cover the sky? How about opening a teleportation function. The inn can travel to the perfect world, allowing the gods in distress to feel despair and their own insignificance.

I remember that the official disaster is three shots, right? Why is the author just chaos? What about Sin and Anyu?

You are about to enter the smoke capital, Grand Master! !

What the heck is misery? Why are there so many novels about misery?

I just like to watch people who have fun disrupt the original work